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message 101: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 01, 2013 05:14PM) (new)

Ash walked into thee shack, he thought he was early, but he wasn't sure. He unsheathed his double-sided knife.


message 102: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments Maddie walked into the shack and looked around. She saw Ash and walked over, brandishing two bows and two sheaths of arrows. "Hey!" She said to him.


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"Hi!" He responded with a smile.


message 104: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments She handed him a bow and sheath of arrows.


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"I would have gotten you knife but I only have one, so we'll have to share this one." Ash said with a shrug.


message 106: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments "That's okay." Maddie said. "So, what do you want to do first? Archery? Or knife work?'


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"Which would you rather?" He asked, "I don't really care." He said, his eye twitching oddly.


message 108: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments "Okay, we'll, how about I give you an archery lesson first." Maddie suggested.


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Ash nodded. He smiled at her. "What do I do first."


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Ellie | 458 comments "Okay, hold he bow up so that you are looking over that little bar on the side." Maddie instructed doing the same with her bow.


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Ash nodded and did as he was told.


message 112: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments Maddie nodded. "Good, now there is a little notch on the end of the arrow. Slide the string inside there and rest the arrow on the bar while holding the end of the arrow and the string with three fingers. Two on top, and one beneath." She said, showing him what to do as she spoke.


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Ash did didas he was told, and was smiling.


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Ellie | 458 comments "Now aim. How about that big knothole in the wall over there." She said while pointing at a knothole. "Pull back the string, take a deep breath, and as you breath out, let the arrow fly." She said, and shot, hitting her own knothole.


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Ash nodded and hit about a half foot away.


message 116: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments "That was really good." Maddie encouraged him. "Why don't you try again?"


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Ash dded, and he went through all the steps and tried again, this time getting farther away.


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Ellie | 458 comments "One second. I have an idea. I'll be right back." She said and darted out of the shack.


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Ellie | 458 comments ((Hello?))


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Ash watched her leave in a confusing awkward silence


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((Sorry...))


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Ellie | 458 comments ((It's okay))
Maddie came back in with her hands stained bloodred.


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Ash looked at her hands, he raised an eyebrow.


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Ellie | 458 comments "Berries." She said and smeared a large red target on the wall. "Here, try shooting that."


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Ash nodded, and he was inches from the target when he shot. He smiled at her.


message 126: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments "Nice!" Maddie said excitedly. "Much better!"


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Ash nodded. He tried a few more times and hit the target. He smiled, and looked at her. "Wanna work on knives now?"


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Ellie | 458 comments "Sure!" Maddie said excitedly. "What do I do first?"


message 129: by [deleted user] (new)

"Well that depends on what you want to learn." Ash said. "There is a lot to do with a knife." Ash said.


message 130: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments "How about... throwing?" Maddie asked.


message 131: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 01, 2013 07:14PM) (new)

Ash smiles. Okay, first, you hold it like this," he showed her the way to hold it. "Then you flick your wrist forward and let go, but you have to be careful not to cut yourself." He handed her the knife to try to hit the red target.


message 132: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments "Okay." Maddie said. She took he knife and did just as he said. It hit a few inches away from the target.


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"Great! You're a natural! It took me forever to get that close!" He said, going to get the knife from the wall.


message 134: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments "Thanks." Maddie chimed. "Okay, so I made p a little joke about the abbreviations for the different groups. Want to hear it?"


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Ash nodded. ((Brb))


message 136: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments ((Okay))
"So, there's a leader to each group. And the groups are named after the leaders. STW for St. Weightlifter, WTS for Whatever Theodore Suzysburg, and OTW for Oscar the Worm. What do you think?" She asked.


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Ash smiled and nodded with a laugh.


message 138: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments Maddie grabbed the knife again. This time it hit the center of the target when she threw it. "Yes!" She squealed. She turned around and hugged Ash.


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Ash smiled and hugged her back, blushing a bit. It's only a friendly hug, stupid, he thought, scolding himself, but he couldn't help thinking that she might like him, just the teeniest bit.


message 140: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments Maddie pulled her head back, still in the hug. "Thanks!" She chimed and gave him a little kiss on the cheek. "Do you want to go to the arcade?" She asked.


message 141: by [deleted user] (new)

Ash nodded. She likes you, he thought. She totally likes you. He thought this, never considering for a second that she could read thoughts. "Let's go to the arcade." He said, walking towards the door. "But I don't know where it is..you'll have to lead me."


message 142: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments "Okay." Maddie chirped and took his hand. "Let's go." She said and started walking out the door.


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((Let's go to the arcade))


message 144: by Ellie (new)

Ellie | 458 comments ((Okay, I made a small edit to her profile, you should see it.))


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message 146: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 09, 2013 10:17AM) (new)

Ash ran inside. He wanted to practice with the new sword he bought. He used different targets people had brought as dummies. He was encircled by dummies, and he grabbed his good weighted sword. He swung the sword over her head, spun around, chopped o of a dummy's arm and meant to jab another in the stomach, but completely missed it.
"That's what practice is for." he muttered.
And he did the same, but he nicked it's hip even though he was trying to get it in the stomach, still.
"Closer." he mumbled.
He kept trying, he did it 22 times, chopping off heads an arms, until he finally got one in the stomach.


message 147: by Shuhan [On Leave] (new)

Shuhan [On Leave] (Inyourclosetinyourhead) Love ran in. she was angel faced but dirty and had loads of sore gashes. you'd pity her if she appeared. she sat down in the corner oblivious of Ash.


message 148: by [deleted user] (new)

Ash heard a noise and whipped out his knife, throwing it in a split second, hitting the wall millimeters from her head. "Oh my gosh!" He said, seeing her. "Are you okay?"


message 149: by Shuhan [On Leave] (new)

Shuhan [On Leave] (Inyourclosetinyourhead) Love whimpered and her eyes widened with fear. "W-why w-would-d y-you w-want to k-kill me! i hhhhhavent ddone anything tto yyou." she stuttered and whimpered.


message 150: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 09, 2013 10:25AM) (new)

Ash ran over. "I'm so sorry! I thought you were an enemy, there's no good people out there." He grabbed his knife and put it in the sheath. He touched her arm, "What can I do to apologize?" He said quietly to her.


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