my writing... this is my style.!) :) # 10

[Willow]

Alia, your writing is AMAZING! I really like it. Besides some grammar issues, these are pretty good!

[Alia]

Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "Here it is, Alia!!"

thank you!

[Alia]

ฬเll๏ฬรђเภє wrote: "Alia, your writing is AMAZING! I really like it. Besides some grammar issues, these are pretty good!"

thanks so much! Please keep reading my future ones

[Alia]

This is a poem about hope. If you feel like your surrounded in darkness (when its daylight) with only stars for light (even though you cant see stays in daylight) you'll be alright cause if you can see the stars like a needle in a haystack of darkness then you still have hope and once you realise this your hope will grow and become more stars in the darkness. written on 17.5.2015


Pulling at strings
.....................


Pulling at strings, strings that aren't there.
Strings that are made, made by fear.
A life of regret, a life without love, a life deprived of the stars and the sun above.
All your life, as long as you've lived you have been haunted by little things, things that seem big.
You never knew what was beyond those grey grey skies.
There are lies that taunt them and secrets that form them, then leave them hanging in a cloud over your head.
you wish for the sun, you wish for the moon, you wish for the stars that would grant your wish true.
Let me tell you that the harder you fight and the louder you scream you'll start to add stars in the starless night we've all seen.

(p9)

[Alia]

Thanks to *whistlewhileyourworking
written on 9.9.15
Everyday
.........

Everyday smile, or I'll smile for you.
Everyday laugh with me, and I won't laugh at you.
Everyday say you love me and I'll say it back.
Everyday hug me even if it bugs me.
Everyday be yourself, not for me but for you.
Everyday be my friend and I'll stay with you till the end.
Everyday grow with me lets show the world what we can be.
Everyday love you for you and me for me.
Lets play a role in the worlds eternity.
There's no time to frown when there are people that love you around.
Just smile.
Be you and I'll be me

(p 10)

[Barb]

Hi Alia, Nice writing. I read your poems from the beginning. You have nice prose, and a positive focus. I enjoyed them and think you have talent! You are missing a couple of apostrophes in your last work. Sentence 7, let's
And also sentence 9 s/b let's also. Let us!

[Alia]

Thank you, i really appreciate your opinion

[Pamela]

I like your writing and it really does not matter what others say about it as there is no pleasing everyone and there will always be someone who wont like it.

One mans fat lady is another mans Mona Lisa!

[Alia]

Pamela wrote: "I like your writing and it really does not matter what others say about it as there is no pleasing everyone and there will always be someone who wont like it.

One mans fat lady is another mans Mon..."

hahaha thanks pam <3 ,<3 one mans rubbish is another mans treasure for sure haahah

[Alia]

What do you guys think about cloning? We had to write our opinion about it in class. This is my version.
I would love to know what you guys think.


cloning.

Every life changing topic starts somewhere, over time it is been written in thought as becoming normal. If we had a world that allowed cloning to be a 'normal' practice there could be both remarkable and disastrous affects. A topic like this doesn't come down to religion or any kind of faith, but it does deal with a certain amount of ethics and morals. It is not a topic to be played and toyed with because a topic with such enormous power is rarely just 'talked about.' It is true that wherever the existence of human kind came from, we humans were made to do big things. But the length of our brain capacity is what ties us to earths ground not gravity. We were made to do big things whether destroy the world with war and pollution, create evil robots and unpredictable clones or do good things like insert a humans personality and traits into a robots body so a beloved family members can live on, or cure cancer by creating clones with super immune systems. You can keep listing the good and bad outcomes that we would face but in the end you need to realize that we need a balance in life. You cannot have the good without bad and the bad without good. Big things, bad things, good things. They all have BIG affects. Ones that could save our rapidly dying world from global warming, create a new one, or demoralize the good in humanity. If we let cloning be a normal project in our world we good do a lot of good but are we willing to take double the risk of it being a failed experiment? Evil takeover. There have been many failed experiments much like this and we cannot afford to take a risk this severe. Say we do successfully create clones, what if they have disabilities or abnormalities? We couldn't abandon them, the have human thoughts and feelings. If you think clones are inhuman then abandoning them in a stage like this would be even more inhuman. We cannot let the making of clones get into the wrong hands. If cloning was a success mass-murderers and assassins would do anything to get their hands on them and with that they could create so much damage. I'm talking about countries obliterated. The movie 'white house down' would be reality. A new Adolf Hitler and Joseph Stalin would be born, worse than the previous..... And put together? You might as well count yourself gone down in history because if they can make one they can make millions. What we are trying to create as our friends could just as easily turn foe. If the Leaders of our government are creating clones as a weapon what better way to make them even deadlier than to create them with the power that even we the creators wouldn't stand a chance against. But if that turns on us well as I said we wouldn't stand a chance. A world like ours cannot take the risk. We have to save the humanity we still maintain. This is not a first world problem. This is BIG.

[Ruby, Just plain Epictastic.]

+WHISTLING AND APPLAUSE+


YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY

I ABSOLUTELY AGREE! This is awesome! :):):):)

[Alia]

Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "+WHISTLING AND APPLAUSE+


YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY

I ABSOLUTELY AGREE! This is awesome! :):):):)"

yaaaaayyy thank you this was a topic that i simply could not leave alone i had to write about it and once i started i couldn't stop. Was it too much?

[Alia]

A little girl born from money said not getting my is when daddy doesn't buy the pony I wanted.
a little girl not rich nor poor said that not getting her way is when her daddy was dying and she prayed to god to make him better but he still died.
a little girl with nothing no home, no money, no family and is kept a slave to the little rich girls family said not getting her way is when her daddy sold her for drugs to the rich girls family in the first place

I don't know why I wrote this down I just got these mental pictures and pages of writing painting this story I my head and so I put it oh here because trying to figure out what it means.

can you guys tell me your opinion of what it means plz? Because this wasent just one of those weird flashes you get in your head. I get mini versions like this before I wright a really good poem but this was really really big like I was awake and suddenly I'm inthis story. Waaaaayyyyyy waaaayyyy waaayyyy more vivid than any dream and it was really feaky coz it was sooooo real





I will be recreating this into a more interesting .... Story so it will be more than just a vision I had.

[Rajiv]

It's a nice write up . I find that you can write a story better than a poem .

[Rajiv]

It's a nice write up . I find that you can write a story better than a poem .

[Rajiv]

It's a nice write up . I find that you can write a story better than a poem .

[Alia]

Rajiv wrote: "It's a nice write up . I find that you can write a story better than a poem ."

haha yes of course that's true but to be honest iv never really tried to write story's.
but again if I'm being honest i have been wanting to write a book but i don't know if i'd be all that good or if it would be interesting enough for people to actually want to read it.

[Rajiv]

Do try to publish the Book . In meantime if you have time : please do read my Book on short stories : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara

[Rajiv]

Do try to publish the Book . In meantime if you have time : please do read my Book on short stories : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara

[Alia]

Rajiv wrote: "Do try to publish the Book . In meantime if you have time : please do read my Book on short stories : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara"

is it publishes on paper books in nz? Just coz i so not have a E-Book

[Alia]

Guys I'm soooooo mad right now!!!!!! I know us kiwis get the programs later than America and all that but today we had the episode where my favorite character died on 'the walking dead' and it sucks!!!! They killed him off! I can't believe it!! He died in the worst way to! It sucks and I'm so angry!! All because that stupid guy took him down with him when he killed himself!!! Grrrrrr. I'm sorry if you are offended by my anger right now but I really need to know if any of you out there are feeling the same pain as me right now.

[Alia]

I'm just a kid, but I know things. One of the things I know is that I don't know everything. I don't know if there is a heaven or a hell or any afterlife for sure after we die, or if there is such a thing as soul mates. I don't know what its like to have a job, own a house or pay bills. I don't know what sort of things could destroy a friendship of many years. What I do know is that friendship that lasts a long time and then crumbles to the ground isn't just a problem in the two peoples lives. Friendship is not a necessity, you can live without friends. The problem is what your definition of living is. Is living as simple as being alive, breathing and having a pulse. Or is living something more like knowing yourself, having people in your life you can live without but just simply don't want to? People that you can trust and that make you smile.... People that help you make and live your life. There are people in my life that mean the world to me, that have helped me through hard times. Together those people and struggles I've had to overcome have made me who I am today. Some of these people have been friends as long as I can remember. As a little kid with no friends and being continuously bullied they gave me hope of what sort of friends I could find if I kept hope and didn't change for other people to make them like me as someone else, to just stay myself. These people were great friends and had so many people that looked up to them and loved them. Like the twin towers they stood side by side strong and powerful until they crumbled to dust. Some would say beyond repair They are humans and as humans we are not invincible, we will not live forever, and we are not faultless. But it anybody was these things as a kid I always thought they were. Like burning bridges sometimes you can save what little remains and build from there, but you know that the bridge will never be the same. But sometimes you have to completely knock it down and start again.No evidence of the old bridge ever existing except for the memories and lives of people that cross it. I don't know what comparison would fit this broken friendship, what I do know is that everyone around these people lives are being affected. I wish that for the sake of our still peaceful memories I wish these people would at least find a middle ground and (excuse the pun of friendship/bridge comparison) build another bridge and get over it. They need to let the past be past. Let our memories of this friendship be a lesson and not toy with it any longer. These people are in war and everyone who knows them, their worlds are too. People feel forced to pick sides. So many other friendships no longer exist as an aftermath. Its sad. By law I'm still a kid but these people are acting more childish than I ever could in a situation like this. Let my childhood memories rest in peace because my respect for these people lay with them.

[Alia]

lately i've been thinking about what I want to do with my life, to be fair its a given that i think about this because of school exams and the hard reality of my very near future right in front of my face. I will be a senior of college in a matter of months. In those months I will be getting ready to decide what path to choose......
I walk around school every day and see the normal drama of college, all the successful students earning good grades and know what they want to do with their life- what i want to know is what makes them work so hard. I see the students with all their friends, popularity, and beauty and the seemingly perfect facade where they want people to think they get everything they want- dont they have a story to tell that isen't just out of a fairy tale? Then i see the kids who only just skim through. they dont care about their education, they are going to quit school the first chance they get. then there's me. Everybody knows me, and i seem to have enough friends, but only a few that i actually trust with the real me. people think they know me but thats because they dont want to see. If im being honest even i dont kow who i am anymore....... so how am i suppossed to know who i want to be? I need to decide. the clock is ticking.
i want to be a author, a poet, a baker. I want to be a singer, an actress, a song writer. I want to be an accountant, and desighner, a counselor. there is so many things in my life i've wanted to be and coulden't. so many projects i've started and haven't finished. how do i do this? can i do this? What should i do?!i think the question im really needing to ask myself is how hard am i willing to work to acheive my goals...... my dreams. And second... what is going to push me forward and remind me of hope and the outcome when done? what will make me remember not to give up as soon as a difficult situation comes up?- to remind me not to give up withought a fight? because if you ask the people who really know me,.... who know the REAL me, then they will tell you my whole life has been complications after complications and alll the important things......... for them i never gave up without a fight. and this wont be any different.

[Rajiv]

Ali , nice to read your thought as a young school girl . I am Author @ 63 who just published my Book on short stories : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara . I hope you will read it . This Book is more of a dream project for me . I too had a dream project & I accomplished it after so many years . It is start of my Second Innings after Retiring from a Bank . Dream BIG . You will achieve what you dreamt . Happy Life to you after your School Exams .

[Rajiv]

Ali , nice to read your thought as a young school girl . I am Author @ 63 who just published my Book on short stories : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara . I hope you will read it . This Book is more of a dream project for me . I too had a dream project & I accomplished it after so many years . It is start of my Second Innings after Retiring from a Bank . Dream BIG . You will achieve what you dreamt . Happy Life to you after your School Exams .

[Rajiv]

My Book : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara is not a E Book . It's available fr Amazon.com for 9.99 USD in USA , Canada . Which country you stay ? I think Amazon sends all over the world

[Alia]

Rajiv wrote: "My Book : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara is not a E Book . It's available fr Amazon.com for 9.99 USD in USA , Canada . Which country you stay ? I think Amazon sends all over the world"

thank you. I will try to see if i can read it. But i might not be able to since both my school and parents are very strict on this type of thing........ But please, certainly let me know if it gets published in libraries and i will get it out right away. It sounds great and thank you for spending the time to read one of my pieces of writing and giving your much appreciated oppinion :)

[Rajiv]

Journey from Guwahati to MachhiwaraPlease suggest my Book in the libraries you visit . I never knew that parents & school can be so strict not to allow you to read a Book .

[Alia]

Rajiv wrote: "Journey from Guwahati to MachhiwaraPlease suggest my Book in the libraries you visit . I never knew that parents & school can be so strict not to allow you to read a Book ."

no im not aloud to use amazon or things like that.

[Alia]

I'm trying something new with my writing...... Usually I just write when I get a good sentence in my head form there. But I'm trying to write planned stuff..... Like write about a specific thing....... Any ideas or opinions would be greatly valued. And I really hope someone can come forth with a great topic for me to try write about. Thank u! And hope u guys have a great Christmas and new years!!!!