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For the parts set in NZ and England I pilfered the surnames of friends, or old family names. Seemed to work. The only stumbling block was when I realised I already used the name Andrew twice. So one poor sod had to be renamed Samuel.


When I wanted a name that meant something, I looked it up and chose a non-English language name for a meaning (Erin means Protector in... some language, I forget which one).
All my other names are common and hopefully easy to remember. I deliberately use only first names, and only for main characters. Minor characters are mostly "Old man" and such -- just the way I like to do it. I dislike books that list out a dozen characters, first and last names, in the course of a couple of chapters. I get lost in the names and can't remember who's who -- that's why I try to make it simple and limit names to major characters.

When I wanted a name that meant something, I looked it up and chose a non-English language ..."
Erin means protector in Gaelic.

When I wanted a name that meant something, I looked it up and chose a non-English language ..."
The best thing with alien names is you can pretty much come up with something so ridiculous and it fits because well..they're aliens! lol

I like "ridiculous but reasonably pronounceable". I don't want Tkqgurey'vfhekl or something like that.
Justin wrote: "Matt wrote: "For aliens, I take a normal name and corrupt it. George became Grodge the Merciful in Apocalypse Makers.
When I wanted a name that meant something, I looked it up and chose a non-Engl..."
At the same time if you take it to far, you chase away readers like my wife. I KNOW she would love scifi if she could get over some of the names that drive her insane because she can't figure out how to pronounce them.
When I wanted a name that meant something, I looked it up and chose a non-Engl..."
At the same time if you take it to far, you chase away readers like my wife. I KNOW she would love scifi if she could get over some of the names that drive her insane because she can't figure out how to pronounce them.

Tkqgurey'vfhekl aka "Tink". ;-)
Owen wrote: "Matt wrote: "I like "ridiculous but reasonably pronounceable". I don't want Tkqgurey'vfhekl or something like that..."
Tkqgurey'vfhekl aka "Tink". ;-)"
Awesome.
Tkqgurey'vfhekl aka "Tink". ;-)"
Awesome.

Owen wrote: "Matt wrote: "I like "ridiculous but reasonably pronounceable". I don't want Tkqgurey'vfhekl or something like that..."
Tkqgurey'vfhekl aka "Tink". ;-)"
Easily one of those Foreign Exchange Students (Aka F.E.S.) situations.
Tkqgurey'vfhekl aka "Tink". ;-)"
Easily one of those Foreign Exchange Students (Aka F.E.S.) situations.


That's actually the attitude that makes me find most names used for aliens to be really annoying.
First, whose name is it for the aliens? Is it what the aliens call themselves? In that case, there is no way to translate it into any Earth language. What do dolphins call themselves? We don't know. But if we did it would be clicks and whistles and clacks.
There are words and phrases in every human language that cannot be directly translated into any other human language. Why would we assume that we'd be able to translate an alien race's own name?
So...an author either has to give what humans call the alien race (in which case, silly names only make sense if they are nicknames commonly used by people and not the official names given by biologists), or you should be naming them what biologists or xenopologists or whoever comes up with official names calls them.
I somehow doubt that Klingons and Xeelee and Tkqgurey'vfhekl are going to be what we officially call other races.
I also suspect that most people aren't going to stick to the official name. They'll give nicknames--probably derogatory or just boringly descriptive--such as what we already see in the Ufology world: Greys, Andromedans, Hairy Dwarves, Little Green Men, Nordics, Reptilians, Sirians...etc.
So far I've not used aliens in most of my book projects. The one I have included aliens in, I have the official names given as Latin or Greek names derived from the constellation from which the aliens come. But commonly nicknames like Big Blue Meanies (a race of large blue grub-like beings who get extremely violent when they hear certain frequencies of sound common in human speech), are used by ordinary people. That's a reference to Yellow Submarine of course, but I figure people will draw from our own cultural, mythological, and literary heritage when giving nicknames to extraterrestrials.

Who wrote that awesome line about cats not having names? Something like: Cat: "We don't have names becuase we know who we are. You humans need names because you don't know who you are."
I believe Gary Larson solved this case for dogs. ;-)

I can't really think of any of our cultures that use more than 3 syllables as a name for themselves unless they use two words. Canadians do come to mind. That's 4 syllables. Italians too. Longer than that? I dunno.
Owen wrote: "I believe Gary Larson solved this case for dogs. ;-) "
Every dog word translates to 'Hey!'.
(Every cat word translates to 'Me!'.)
Every dog word translates to 'Hey!'.
(Every cat word translates to 'Me!'.)

Sometimes that will be an out of the ordinary first name with an ordinary last name, as in Mandalay Jones (just don't call her Manda).
Sometimes there will be a variation of a common name with an out of the ordinary last name, as in Caralynn Adrasteia (Caralynn is a variation of Carolyn, and Adrasteia is from Greek mythology).
Sometimes it'll just be whatever sounds good together, like Artemis Xian or Andromeda Reyes.
One thing though, I don't like repeating names. My vampire/author Brynna Alexander was going to be named Brianna except that I already have a character named Brianna. So I checked around some baby name sites for Welsh female names and came across Brynna.

Tink is infinitely easier to pronounce than Tkqgurey'vfhekl!
The worst thing about scifi or fantasty is not having a clue about how to pronounce a characters name.

My problem esp with finishing my second novel, is I think about my characters (a lot--am I insane?) as if they are real people. I also think about them as if they are my friends. I wonder how they are doing. I have written before that I think fiction writers are or have to be kind of insane anyway.
Virginia Arthur, Birdbrain

I know exactly what you are talking about Virginia. You worry what the characters will think of YOU if you make something bad happen, or break their heart!


Uh...don't the French call themselves "français?" Germans call themselves Deutsch. Japanese call themselves Nihonjin. (Or at least that's what Google Translate tells me.)
So we actually do use different names for other nationalities. We certainly wouldn't call aliens by their own chosen name.
I agree we'd use two to three syllable names for an alien race's common name, but assuming that their own name for themselves would conform to that convention is rather too anthropomorphic for me. Assuming they'd use language in the same way as us is too anthropomorphic as well. But that's a whole other topic.

But of course, an alien language may not even have syllables.
All I'm saying is I use the K.I.S.S. rule.

Alexandria
Ekaterina
Maximilian
Michelangelo
Aristophanes
Cassiopeia
Desiderio
Dionysius
Evangelina
Theodosia
Victoriana
Anastasia
;D

But I'm sure Cassiopeia was shortened to Cassie, etc, in exchange and communication. They all come across as pretentious though, something I try to avoid.

I'd agree with that.
I'd still avoid even short names that sound like an author sat there and went, "Hmm...I need an exotic sounding name..." They're dead easy to spot, end up sounding and looking forced, and I guess I have a pet peeve about them!






We grow up thinking that names reflect who we are, so I think it's important to put thought into it since the reader definitely will. I had a contest judge tell me the protagonist's name in my novel didn't "sound like a warrior" but they didn't know why. I agree that it didn't, though I did that on purpose, but it was interesting that the judge thought it was important to mention.

Alexandria
Ekaterina
Maximilian
Michelangelo
Aristophanes
Cassiopeia
Desiderio
Dionysius
Evangelina
Theodosia
Victoriana
Anastasia
;D"
***very exotic***

This one fantasy book I'm working on I decided (for some insane reason, I don't know why), that in this universe the spells and character names are in Esperanto. Yeah... -__-

On tracking the characters: If you introduce to many unique character names [that I can’t even pronounce], locations, products, what have you; without giving my mind time to assimilate, I will drop them all. I remember a comment about “chi” in writing, don’t make me backup and reread, keep me moving forward.
Edit to clarify - C.B. this is not in reference to you, I haven't read your work, just comment in general.
Andrew wrote: "C.B.wrote: “...Now no main characters start with the same letter of the alphabet. The names are all varied and sound different when read and have different 'feels' to them (except the twins that ha..."
It is okay, I didn't think it was meant just for me :)
I will however defend myself! ^-^
I try to introduce characters at least once before they are part of the big narrative.
When new people do show up to stay, they tend to get separated from the action for a bit for people to get used to them. It is easier to meet a new character when only one other character is around, and they have been established already.
My book makes fun of the silly long fantasy names people are supposed to remember. The city in my novel has such a crazy made up fantasy name... that the characters can't even remember what it is. The reader never actually knows what it is called, because it really isn't that important anyway. (It starts with a C though, they know that)
It is okay, I didn't think it was meant just for me :)
I will however defend myself! ^-^
I try to introduce characters at least once before they are part of the big narrative.
When new people do show up to stay, they tend to get separated from the action for a bit for people to get used to them. It is easier to meet a new character when only one other character is around, and they have been established already.
My book makes fun of the silly long fantasy names people are supposed to remember. The city in my novel has such a crazy made up fantasy name... that the characters can't even remember what it is. The reader never actually knows what it is called, because it really isn't that important anyway. (It starts with a C though, they know that)

The only connection was your mention of "tracking characters" I tried to make that clear.
I like your insight into the twins having like sounding names.
I'll have to take a look at your previews - for interest, not critique.
Andrew wrote: "C.B. wrote: "It is okay, I didn't think it was meant just for me :)"
The only connection was your mention of "tracking characters" I tried to make that clear.
I like your insight into the twins h..."
It was very clear! No worries. :)
I just had more fun things to say, so I used that as an excuse to talk more!
The only connection was your mention of "tracking characters" I tried to make that clear.
I like your insight into the twins h..."
It was very clear! No worries. :)
I just had more fun things to say, so I used that as an excuse to talk more!

Initials can do that.
You do have a good sense humor


for my short stories or video games i whip out gygax's book of names. roll some dice and see what hits lolz

