Free book editing/beta reading discussion

20 views
Beta reader

Comments Showing 1-1 of 1 (1 new)    post a comment »
dateUp arrow    newest »

message 1: by Pavan (new)

Pavan Kaur (pavankaur) | 1 comments Hello everyone, I have just finished my new story FATE, it is a short one at just over 38K words.
I dont a full blurb for it yet but this is something I guess

Love was taken away from Ashley, she lost herself in grief.
Can a new start in a new country help her?
Going to high school in California, can see fill the part she is missing, can Fate bring her love again?

I would love for some to give it a read and see if they can find anything that I have missed will re reading it a few time. I always think a new set of eyes can help make a story better.
I would love to hear from you
Thank you xxx


back to top