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message 1: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
All plot discussions with your partners should be discussed here.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey.


message 3: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Hay hay. Okay so what type of genre are you thinking?


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

I was thinking about suspense/mystery/thriller type of screen.


message 5: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Okay a mystery. Dead bodies, a hidden secret....


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

A hidden secret.


message 7: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Hmm a letter, a very old letter...


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

With old notes with ancient clues.


message 9: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Yes! Maybe in a mystery box like a clue leading them on...


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes!


message 11: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Should we add some kind of adventure


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes, but what kind of adventure?


message 13: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
A clue chasing adventure. Do we want a series with episodes?


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes and each of them should have a dramatic cliff hanger.


message 15: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Okay, how many head characters not too much anyway could we just start with two?


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Sure.


message 17: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Male and female? Okay what should we call it?


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes.

Title: The Hidden Secrets.


message 19: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Yap! Love the name. okay Ill create the female character or do you want to?


message 20: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
We still need a basic plot like a synopsis


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

I have two characters already.


message 22: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
In the character creation?


message 23: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments Okay, is this the place to talk about it?


message 24: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Not really since you haven't figured a plot but it could do.


message 25: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments Okay, so I made the world but to the plot I am horrible


message 26: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Okay so we decided on a monarch?


message 27: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments Hmmm I don't think that will work in this world, a council maybe


message 28: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Okay then, is it a council of demons? But wait how did the demons come was there like an apocalypse


message 29: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments I was more thinking the council would be of human's who worshipped the demons, the demons stuck in another dimension or something


message 30: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Whao you're good. Yes that could make it more believable. Influential people, what century is it going to be? and would it be episodes


message 31: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments I would say episodes, century? Hmmmm iffy but I am thinking late 19th century, maybe a little stem punk but as I said a little unsure


message 32: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Steampunk hmm I dont know if it would fit, 19th sounds good. what head character are you using? Female or male and age?


message 33: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments Hmmmm I was thinking it would follow multiple characters, I was thinking something like games of thrones


message 34: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Okay then but you still need a plot. A overthrow?


message 35: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments Yep, that could work, maybe 5 angels, the counter to the 5 demons have given some people powers as well and they started a war


message 36: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Yes! Thats a plot so Five angel give power people vs five demon...


message 37: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments Yep, now what do each of the angels virtues? Mercy against cruelty, ummm not sure, by the way we can change some of the demons, like I was thinking of lust as one of the demons


message 38: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Greed should be a demon too. As for angels how about Hope, Faith, Joy, Justice...


message 39: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments Yeah, hmmm I was thinking each of the angels would be against one of the demons, though we need to work out what the demons are, so how about, hate, fear, lust, greed and pride, is that good?


message 40: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
That's good. The opposite thing too is good should add some kind of excitement one of the angel starts to fall in love with one of the demon? Normally I hate all those 'we against them' thing so we won't really make it a conclusion? What do you think?


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

Pamela wrote: "In the character creation?"

Yes.


message 42: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Okay then, so we should make our first scene then.


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

YAY!


message 44: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments Sorry for taking a while but a romance I think may not be needed, the good against evil plot is a bad one but I think this is a good enough twist


message 45: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Sure


message 46: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments By the way, if we are doing it like a show, I think 3 perspectives would be good, one from the angels perspective, one focusing on the council and one focusing on a couple of lower members of the demon castses,


message 47: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
Wait, we have five demons right? Five Angels? Which one is the council again?


Shine I'm gonna make a scene thread so we could start creating one.


message 48: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments The demons have the council of people, they aren't in the world, they just gave some people gifts and they took over forming the council


message 49: by Pamela (new)

Pamela | 149 comments Mod
And the Angels gave some five people gifts too?


message 50: by Deaths coming (new)

Deaths coming torture mastrer-if you want someone torture he wil | 36 comments Yeah, though I was thinking there would be more


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