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message 1: by jaxnsmom (new)

jaxnsmom | 8339 comments Post your songs here and we'll have a sing-along later.


message 2: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 10, 2013 09:29AM) (new)

ahem *clears throat*

Book: Keep Me Close

Verse:
I feel like a ship being tossed on the sea,
searching for a harbour, seeking sanctuary.
You make me feel safe when I'm held in your arms,
protecting defending so safe, a still calm.
The world's so uncertain when we're apart,
let me stay with you, keep me close to your heart.


Which is pretty puke worthy and I can only apologise for inflicting that upon you. Ain't going to win any prizes, that much is certain.


message 3: by jaxnsmom (new)

jaxnsmom | 8339 comments But it will get you points :)


message 4: by Ava Catherine (new)

Ava Catherine | 4257 comments Helen, I think your song is very nice, indeed! Lovely! ; )


message 5: by Beth (new)

Beth (eparks4232) | 2632 comments Book: The History of Love
I sit and think of you
And I ask the stars above
Has there been a girl more lovely
In The History of Love


message 6: by Debra (new)

Debra (debra_t) | 6542 comments I read A Walk to Remember and have written a verse of a love song dedicated to my recently departed little kitty, Lucy.

A walk to remember down Lucy lane,
Tears shed in her gold lion's mane.
Her light will shine until the end of time,
Bright eyes speaking of a soul sublime.
In Heaven's stars above,
She will bask in our love,
Again at the Rainbow Bridge,
On a sunny, grassy ridge.


message 7: by Debra (new)

Debra (debra_t) | 6542 comments Judy, you are definitely one of those over-achievers I was talking about. Amazing!

Everyone, great job on your love songs!


message 8: by Janice, Moderator (new)

Janice (jamasc) | 60942 comments Awesome songs. I may have to revamp mine!


message 9: by jaxnsmom (new)

jaxnsmom | 8339 comments I think all the songs are great. I wonder who should sing them...


message 10: by Debra (new)

Debra (debra_t) | 6542 comments Janice wrote: "Awesome songs. I may have to revamp mine!"

Wait til you see the 2 my sister wrote. She wrote the whole song like Judy did. I can't believe how clever some people are!


message 11: by Snoozie Suzie (new)

Snoozie Suzie (snooziesuzie) | 937 comments Well done everyone. Great verses. I may have to just try my hand at one....


message 12: by April (new)

April | 970 comments Excellent love songs! Such fun!


message 13: by Almeta (last edited Feb 11, 2013 05:19AM) (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments Wonder Think Pat Benatar!

I am full of wide-eyed wonder.
I think you’re my eighth wonder of the world.
I sit in wonder of the gift that I am unworthy of.
I can only wonder at the wonder of it all.
I am simply wonderstruck by the wonder of our love.

I wonder what you’re doing.
I wonder where you are
I wonder why don’t you call?
I wonder how you think we can be “just friends”.
Now I need not wonder why it’s over after all.

I wonder how I’ll stay alive without you.
I wonder how many lies you told.
I wonder when you will regret leaving me?
I wonder what I ever saw in you?
Time is working wonders, that’s the key!

I hear you say “Wonder what life would be if we were still together”,
I often wonder what would have happened had we never met.
I wonder that you want to recapture the wonder that you were so eager to release.
It is a wonder that you think I will ever take you back.
Will Wonders never cease!

Love Stinks!


message 14: by Almeta (last edited Feb 11, 2013 05:13AM) (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments Judy wrote: "Almeta, that is wonderful!"

Judy wrote: "Oh, sheesh, I think I overdid it. lol! "


Thank-you.

(Are they worth it, for 5 points?)


Another over-achiever!☻


message 15: by Almeta (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments Judy wrote: "Lol! After I spent an hour re-writing mine over and over, I wasn't sure, but in hindsight, it was for me, because it was fun. :-) Another creative idea by JMom."

Yeah, a lot of potential reading time spent! :)

And, I agree Jmom, very creative idea.


message 16: by Almeta (last edited Feb 17, 2013 04:12AM) (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments Nice Beth and Helen. Simple and Sweet. :)


message 17: by Lisa (last edited Feb 11, 2013 07:20AM) (new)

Lisa (lisathebooklover) | 9225 comments Here is my little attempt at a love song (it's not very good but it's the best I could come up with).

Book- Birdsong:

As I wander amongst the grass so green,
The sound of sweet Birdsong makes my heart gleam,
I stop and I stare at the sky deep blue,
And I think 'Can anyone love as I love you?'
For even though you are gone,
Your memory lives on,
In the fields and the stream,
In the Birdsong and my dreams.


message 18: by Almeta (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments Lisa wrote: "Here is my little attempt at a love song (it's not very good but it's the best I could come up with).

Book- Birdsong:

As I wander amongst the grass so green,
The sound of sweet Birdsong makes m..."


That's really good Lisa!


message 19: by Debra (new)

Debra (debra_t) | 6542 comments Judy wrote: "Almeta, that is wonderful!"

Isn't it!? She is so clever!


message 20: by Debra (new)

Debra (debra_t) | 6542 comments Lisa wrote: "Here is my little attempt at a love song (it's not very good but it's the best I could come up with).

Book- Birdsong:

As I wander amongst the grass so green,
The sound of sweet Birdsong makes m..."


Love it, Lisa!


message 21: by Snoozie Suzie (new)

Snoozie Suzie (snooziesuzie) | 937 comments 'Love Travels Forever'

Love travels forever
It will carry on
Til the end of never
It will stay with you
Whatever the weather
Near or far
Apart or together
Love travels forever

How incredibly naff! Ha ha.


message 22: by Lisa (new)

Lisa (lisathebooklover) | 9225 comments Snoozie Suzie wrote: "'Love Travels Forever'

Love travels forever
It will carry on
Til the end of never
It will stay with you
Whatever the weather
Near or far
Apart or together
Love travels forever

How incredibly naff..."


I like it! :)


message 23: by Snoozie Suzie (new)

Snoozie Suzie (snooziesuzie) | 937 comments At least you don't have to hear me sing it - I'm flat! I have no idea how Michael gets to know any nursery rhymes or anything as there is never the right tune being sung!

The others are all great. Well done everyone.


message 24: by Almeta (last edited Feb 11, 2013 11:51AM) (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments Snoozie Suzie wrote: "'Love Travels Forever'.."

Good one! o☺☺


message 25: by Lisa (new)

Lisa (lisathebooklover) | 9225 comments There are some really good songs on this thread! Love them all! :)


message 26: by Beth (new)

Beth (eparks4232) | 2632 comments These are all great, can't believe how much time some of you are putting into these!


message 27: by Helen (last edited Feb 11, 2013 12:47PM) (new)

Helen Southall (hsouthall) | 181 comments Helen #2. Silly Love Song -- Don't Say A Word


Don't say a word - just let me hold you
Don't say a word - you know I love you
Don't say a word - they've all been spoken
Don't say a word - my heart is broken
Don't say a word - as you walk away
Cause there's nothing more to say


message 28: by Snoozie Suzie (new)

Snoozie Suzie (snooziesuzie) | 937 comments Super stuff Helen #2


message 29: by Almeta (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments Helen wrote: "Helen #2. Silly Love Song -- Don't Say A Word..."

Wow! Says it all.


message 30: by Debra (new)

Debra (debra_t) | 6542 comments Snoozie Suzie wrote: "'Love Travels Forever'

Love travels forever
It will carry on
Til the end of never
It will stay with you
Whatever the weather
Near or far
Apart or together
Love travels forever

How incredibly naff..."


Cute! I like it!


message 31: by Debra (new)

Debra (debra_t) | 6542 comments Helen wrote: "Helen #2. Silly Love Song -- Don't Say A Word


Don't say a word - just let me hold you
Don't say a word - you know I love you
Don't say a word - they've all been spoken
Don't say a word - my he..."


Awwww, so sad!


message 32: by Ava Catherine (new)

Ava Catherine | 4257 comments Wonderful! Almeta!! ; )

Fabulous, Lisa, Snoozie Suzie! Love it, Helen! Such amazing poem!!
; o )


message 33: by Almeta (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments Judy wrote: "Almeta, that is wonderful!"

Connie wrote: "Wonderful! Almeta!! ; )"

Hey pun intended? Just got it! duh.

Thanks!


message 34: by jaxnsmom (new)

jaxnsmom | 8339 comments Wow! We've got some creative people, all the songs are fantastic!!


message 35: by April (new)

April | 970 comments I love reading these lyrics! Hmmmmm......maybe I should give it a try?


message 36: by Ava Catherine (last edited Feb 12, 2013 02:45PM) (new)

Ava Catherine | 4257 comments The Girl Who Chased the Moon



The Girl Who Chased the Moon

The girl who chased the moon
And wishes upon the stars
Sometimes feels down and blue
But dreams will take her far.

The girl who chased the moon
Harkens to the song of the loon
Calling 'cross the lake
As she dreams and plans escape.

The girl who chased the moon
Stops, listens to the whispering tune
Of willows bending like a lute
And windsong playing nature's flute.

The girl who chased the moon
Sees its gentle, soft glow
Winking through forest branches
Like angels' ethereal haloes.

The girl who chased the moon
Lives inside her dreams
Hears the songs and tunes,
Escapes in a dance, a whirl, and a moonbeam.


message 37: by Almeta (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments Connie wrote: "The Girl Who Chased the Moon..."

Beautiful!


message 38: by Janice, Moderator (new)

Janice (jamasc) | 60942 comments That was lovely, Connie!


message 39: by Debra (new)

Debra (debra_t) | 6542 comments Beautiful song, Connie. Everyone here is so talented!


message 40: by Lisa (new)

Lisa (lisathebooklover) | 9225 comments That's great Connie!


message 41: by jaxnsmom (new)

jaxnsmom | 8339 comments Great song Connie!


message 42: by Ava Catherine (new)

Ava Catherine | 4257 comments Oh, thanks so much. Everyone is so very kind. ; )


message 43: by Alexandra (new)

Alexandra (alex2911) | 893 comments That is beautiful, Connie!


message 44: by Almeta (last edited Feb 14, 2013 03:34AM) (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments The Sacred Art of Stealing

Stealing around the corner just to steal a glance
Hoping to steal a moment to steal another chance.
Stealing up to the front porch to steal a goodnight kiss
Stealing away before your father thinks something’s amiss.
Stealing out to the movies to try to steal first base
Steeling up my pride after you had slapped my face.

And yet each time I steal a peek at you, you steal my heart’s pace

Stealing your spotlight, just to steal the show,
Stealing your thunder, still I always want you to know,
Although I have perfected it; this stealing as an art,
I was never able to steal a way to avoid love’s Cupid dart

And when I steal a glance of you, you always steal my heart

These days I steal a nap, stealing forty winks a day,
Dreaming of my love for you and of our life’s bouquet
Together, you and I, we have been stealing the sublime,
And you know what they say: “Stealing is a crime,

And still with each glimpse I steal of you, you steal my heart every time.


message 45: by April (new)

April | 970 comments Way to go, Almeta!


message 46: by Sharon75uk (new)

Sharon75uk | 125 comments Loving all the love songs :)


message 47: by Shanna_redwind (new)

Shanna_redwind | 228 comments After those lovely songs I'm almost ashamed to post these. They are pretty bad.

I've moved them from the other thread.

Mind Games

Baby, you know I don't play those mind games
So why won't you believe me
When I say there ain't no other dames
And we belong together like in a pod like two peas.


I'm only claiming 5 points for the lot of these...creations because they were all to get me up to the 200 pages, but since the books were so short, I figured that I'd challenge myself to write a verse for each of them. You'll probably wish I hadn't.


What makes a Rainbow?

Every time I wonder what makes a rainbow,
I just look at you dear
And from your head to your toe,
You make it clear.

Your lips so red
It makes me want to kiss them
Right through the house
And into the bed

Hello Day

Every morning I wake with you near
I lay and watch you sleep til the sun awakes
Then I whisper, 'hello, day' in your ear
And I say hello in every way it takes


Chasing Shadows
Every time you leave the room
You've got me chasing shadows
Even if it lead me to my doom
I'd chase your shadow anywhere

Hugs and Kisses

I look forward to leaving, just to get your
Hugs and Kisses
But when I'm gone I'm so alone.
And I look forward to coming home
Just to get your
Hugs and Kisses

Look at me

Look at me, my heart is open
Look at me, my love is pure
Look at me I love you so
Just look at me, my dear.

In the Dark of the Night

In the dark of the night,
I feel your arms around me
In the dark of the night
I want to go on a loving spree


Naughty Cherie

You are my Naughty Cherie
And when you look at me with those naughty eyes
I just want to be naughty with you
Until the morning light.

Tough Chicks

I love the tough chicks
With a cycle under their assets
And I love the sweet chicks
Cuddling kittens and teaching classes
And I only need one chick
Because I found them both in you.


message 48: by Ava Catherine (last edited Feb 13, 2013 09:41PM) (new)

Ava Catherine | 4257 comments Almeta, I love your song! Beautiful! You are such a romantic at heart.

Shanna, your songs are delightful! ; )


message 49: by jaxnsmom (new)

jaxnsmom | 8339 comments Great song Almeta!

Wow Shanna - Nine different verses. I love them.


message 50: by Almeta (new)

Almeta (menfrommarrs) | 11564 comments Nice Shanna!


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