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Mar 18, 2013 10:05AM

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Those kind of polls are actually not allowed and we discourage them. You can make a topic about your story if you want to promote it.
Because it's spam. Polls are for fun or group business. If we let you promote your writing there then we would have to let everyone. I'm going to delete all of the polls related to promoting writing now.
Can we have the Music Videos topic back? Or is it still there and I just haven't found it?
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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@Maxy - Uhhh I will look for it. If it's not there then I'll make a new topic for it.
@Raevyn - Do you mean what genre would it fall under? Hmm. Well I would put it under fantasy ... but I'm aware that we only have folders for urban fantasy and epic fantasy ... I would say it's closer to epic fantasy (just because obviously, it's not urban) although I realize it's not typical epic fantasy. So ... I guess just choose whatever you think fits the closest?
@Raevyn - Do you mean what genre would it fall under? Hmm. Well I would put it under fantasy ... but I'm aware that we only have folders for urban fantasy and epic fantasy ... I would say it's closer to epic fantasy (just because obviously, it's not urban) although I realize it's not typical epic fantasy. So ... I guess just choose whatever you think fits the closest?
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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@Taylor, from the other topic: Oops, my bad! I looked up steampunk and it was listed as a steampunk book, but I can take it off.
(Also, I just deleted your comment, because that topic is supposed to be closed and I forgot. Sorry!)
(Also, I just deleted your comment, because that topic is supposed to be closed and I forgot. Sorry!)

Thanks. If you need more steampunk on the list, I have plenty.
Mistborn: Alloy of Law by Brandon Sanderson
Boneshaker by (I totally don't remember…Carrie something?)
Um…I'll pull out a list later. I mostly read steampunk short fiction.


The only way to truly fix anything in your writing is simply to practice writing. In fact, let me outline the way I implement new skills into my writing.
1. Read nonfiction on the subject. Books, articles, and blog posts about the thing I'm trying to improve. That helps me know what exactly it is I'm trying to do.
2. Read fiction that does this technique well. That way, you can be shown how to do it right, rather than told. "Show, not tell" is also a great teaching and learning tool, in addition to being a writing concept. It's always better to see how it's done.
3. Practice. Practice does not make perfect -- it makes permanent. If you practice deliberately emulating what you see in the fiction you read, it will become habit, whether for good or for bad.
And, to be honest, you will do poorly at first. It will not come out the way you would like. But keep writing, and keep reading critically like a writer. You'll improve so much. Trust me -- whenever I mentor teen writers, this system works the best.

How do I get better at the style of my writing, so it isn't so weird and chopy?"
I haven't read any of your writing so I don't know whether this applies or not, but anyway: if you can't fix it, just pretend it's meant to be like that. Instead of "weird and choppy", call it "unique". At the very least it might make you feel good :)
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Actually, I think that would be a good idea also!
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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*grins mischievously*
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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