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I can agree with that :) are you ready for HOH?
It sucks me in, to the point that I have to take breaks to breathe on my first read of Riordan's work. Truly awesome.Thoughts on the Underland Chronicles?
Never heard of it.Can you touch-type?
Not really sure what that is so...no? Do you have a blog?
No, but I've been thinking about starting one.Same?
Yup! What's your favorite season? Why?
@ kathy, it means typing without looking.Fall! Because the smell, sweatshirts, orange leaves, amazing hikes, apples, pumpkins, cozy-ness, and NaNoWriMo and its just awesome.
Same?
Oh haha thanks, then no, not reallyand mine's winter because I love cold weather, hot chocolate, snow, Christmas carols, and so many more things!
Favorite type of music?
Punk/emo/metal. I guess I like guys screaming in my ear.Who's your favorite actor/actress?
Michelle wrote: "Punk/emo/metal. I guess I like guys screaming in my ear.Who's your favorite actor/actress?"
Leonardo DiCaprio, Michelle Dockery
Are you/will you be watching the Emmys?
NEVER!!!! I REJECT ALL MODERN CULTURE!!!!Be honest. How have you pictured your enemies dying?
YesHow is this story
I love it but I think it might be horrible
New teen titans By Thegotenza
A guy wearing all black and had a bow and quiver strung over his back he then pulls his bow out and aims it at a bank and the wall explodes. The people fall onto the floor then he jumps down and walks In , kicking people hard with his boots on his feet . He puts his a very sharp arrow to a woman's head who worked their" All the money bitch" she shakes in fear and walks to get the money. He grins but wingdings fly into his clothing and they blow up and he falls to the ground . Midnight angel comes messing with his symbol on the middle of his suit turning invisible, a holy white, and a pitch black then stops at holy white. Angel kicks him hard then turns him over and cuffs him then presses a button on his mask and scans the guy that goes by black arrow and rips a tracer off him then crushes it then lifts him up and starts to bring him to jail . Black arrow jerks forward then kicks him hard in the face then turns around to face angel but angel had presses his symbol and became invisible , but black arrow starts to run . A freeze gernade hits the ground and freezes alot of the road Because of that black arrow slips and falls . Angel grabs him and puts his wrist to his neck and a sleep dart shoots out into his neck and black arrow passes out . He throws him on his bike on and drives to Drag city prison and walks to the front black arrow slung over his shoulder. The Gaurds gawk and a skinny Aferican American Gaurd says " What are you doing in Drag city Midnight angel ." Angel sighs" I was doing some personal buisness " a older white Gaurd nods and takes black arrow from him and whispers to the other Gaurd " hes the grand son of batman and I hear a bat family member lives here. I need to teach you alot Zack" Zack chuckles and whispers back" yes you do Bruno ." Angel gets on his bike and flips a switch and Revs it up then starts to fly away on it. He lands on a huge bulilding on an island that was shaped like a T. He gets off and walks through a door on the roof and hurries down to the living room. A teenager about 14 with short black a leather black jacket with the superman symbol on it was playing a video game next to a kid with red hair and a bow strung across his back and lighting bolt symbols all over his suit. Angel walks over and places on hand on their shoulders and says" Guys get out of your suits and into normal clothes." The one with red hair turns back and was about to say something then realizes who it was " yes sir. Come on Kal" Jack says and him and Kal stand up and walk away. Connor junior was leaning on the wall , he had black hair wich was thicker than kal's but still short , he also had a white shirt that said TEEN TITANS RULE and blue jeans. Angel chuckles " why are you wearing Kaia's shirt" he then realizes something " oh ......." Angel says and presses the symbol on his suit and the suit is sucked into the symbol and he was now wearing a T shirt and shorts . Connor looks at Bruce " Yeah ..... So where were you " Bruce gets a serious face" I was in drag city visting Tim... But on my home black arrow was robbing a bank so I stopped him." Connor sighs but Kaia walks in wearing a red skirt and a black shirt and goes over to Connor . She gets on her tip toes and kisses Connors nose , because of that Connor smiles . Jack ran out with superspeed and kept running and Kal follows going just as fast but he was screaming in anger . Connor grabs kal's arm " What he do this time " Kal was wearing no pants and Connor laughs hard then Kal jerks back and runs fast to get jack. Kal was right behind jack so jack turns around and shoots Kal with multiple arrows and they blow up then jack runs out of the tower. The plane lands ontop of the building and Bruce speaks into his watch " All titans on the roof " they all meet on the roof and a Tall person in a suit that was completly black and had a red bat symbol but unlike angels it was 2 dimminsenol and not 3 Dimminsonal . Bruce walks up to the figure and says" Batman are you here to collect data for you know who" Terry laughs" Brucey boy call me Terry and yes I came to get the data for your grandpa bruce." Bruce looks at jack" go and take this " he tosses Disk to jack" to the the central computer and put all of our data onto the disk and come back with it" Jack runs to the central computer and puts the disk an stars to type at the speed of sound then minutes later comes back with the disk and carefully hands it to terry" terry nods " great seeing you guys " Bruce tosses him a T phone " use this to contact any of the teen titans" Terry nods then gets in the bat plane and flies to Gotham city .Bruce looks around" where's Jannet" a few people go pale and then jack steps up " Jannet also known as Wasp died in battle with Slade." Bruce grits his teeth Slade had been a enemy of the old teen titans but he was mostly called deathstroke instead of Slade." TITANS TOMMOROW WE FIND SLADE AND AVENGE WASP!" They all jump up in the air" YES WE WILL!"
* at slades lair*
Slade sat in a chair leaning back his feet on the table .He snaps his fingers in a Rythym"Aww The titans will fall won't they girl" Janet struggles" THEY WILL AVENGE MY SUPPOSED DEATH YOU MONSTER." Slade laughs a laugh that sends a chill through Janet's spine " girl that's what I'm hoping for "
Next day
Speedy( jack) and krypton kid ( Kal) run and fly up the building . Speedy jumps up and shoots many arrows at Slade they hit him and blow up but he stumbles back . Slade shoots at speedy , though Krypton kid flies in front and the bullet flies rickashays off. Speedy falls but is catched by angel using his jet boots , then speedy jumps and uses a suction arrow to stay on the wall. Slade throws a knife at krypton kid and it hits and sinks in blood streaming out and He falls back and starts to plummet while muttering " kryptonite ". Speedy jumps on the ground and catches Kal and lays him down and pulls the knife out and throws it in the distant and starts working on him. Solomon Grundy runs at him but Superboy flies and tackles him then punches him over and Grundy flinches every punch . The moon was coming down . Slade rubs his hands agaisnt each other " almost time to release my secret weapon ." Krypton kid kneels not able to stand up . Connor throws Grundy high in the air . The sun goes down and a door rises and a guy with pale skin and black hair and a black jacket and jeans came running out with super speed then jumped on speedy slashing at him claws coming out of his finger going through speedy blood flowing out of the scratches . Angel grabs the guy but he turns and launches at him and fangs come from his mouth and he tries to bite his neck " VAMPIRE AWESOME!!!!!!! " Kal yells. Jack Slaps him hard. Slade aims his rifle at Kaia and looks through the scope " say goodbye Batgirl " he says and pulls the trigger but the bullet didnt hit her it hit the boy of steel Connor and it rickashays off . Grundy falls to the ground unconious . A Flame arrow hits the vampire but he doesn't burn into ashes . He stands up stumbling and screaming his skin burning but he grabs it and yanks it out of his skin and starts to limp away as smoke comes down and he Escapes by climbing into a plane then Slade jumps ontop and it flies away. Angel stands up and presses his mask and sees a figure inside and runs in. Jannet cheers when she saw angel running towards her . He cuts the ropes with a Batarang then drags her out of their. Kal stands his strength coming back to him.
Jannet leans agaisnt Bruce as he helped her walk by wrapping his arm around her shoulder .
My question:How have you pictured you enemies dying?
Your answer:
Yes.
TRY AGAIN.
I think your story would be better if it was broken up into paragraphs, also there are some grammar mistakes like run-on sentences and incorrect punctuation. Also if you want more helpful feedback, and more of it, you can easily make a topic in the various genre folders on this group.What's the last thing you ate?
You answered a "how" question with yes.
chips... But before that a burger with tons of BBQ and onion rings. Gosh, I sound like a fatty.How should I write this story?
A man, named James, is a wizard, but magic is illegal in his small mining town. He took the job as a miner, but he always wanted to own a clothing store. He gets married to the mayor's daughter, but something strange happens. He makes magic happen without a wand or words! (In this world, you CANNOT do magic without saying the spell or using a wand.) James has to find out why this is happening and how! James returns to where he learned all about Magic at the Magic University!! Also, this is all in the past, but no real year, just kind of old and ya know, no cars.
So, how should I go about writing this story? Or should I even write it?
At least once, there should be an explosion.I also recommend a group of jealous wizards hunting him down to steal his rare ability through a fatal extraction process.
A jerk who is designed for our hatred should die in some horrible way. I recommend scalping him/her while still alive, just before beating the jerk with clubs.
If you can't come up with a good plot, set of characters, or other things that make a good story, try lasers.
Who here would read that?
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What's an unpopular book you wish everyone would read immediately?
((TMK--who's your profile picture?))Yes, misogyny, misandry, and sexism in general. I hear a lot of it.
What's the last sentence you wrote?
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What is your biggest fear?
The end of the world. What comes after. And earthquakes.
Some decision that was made in your earlier years, by you or your parents etc that, if chosen differently, would alter the course of your whole life?
The decision to play piano. My mom had me start when I was four, and I didn't resist. If I hadn't done it, though…I wouldn't be who I am today and wouldn't have the friends I do.
When was the last time you had roast turkey sandwiches?
Never. What color are your bed sheets?
Gunnerkrigg Court. I finally caught up, but now I have to wait every week for one page. ONE PAGE!Do you like web comics?
Yes, I read Nimona, but I haven't read enough web comics to say I actually like web comics.Where were you born?
I don't think that was one of the gifts...
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well, erm, i don't know what the gifts were/are. all i can remember is something about a turtledove. i think? so i'll go with that one. something no one knows about you?
I'm not very secretive. Erm.... I notice the arrogance within myself, but I haven't really done anything about it.How much time would you give humanity before you killed them all if you were God?
Again with the twisted questions….Mmmm…I wouldn't make humans. I much prefer sea slugs. They don't seek to take over the world.
If you could go forward in time and talk to your children when they're your age, what would you say/do?
Don't twerk, and if say the word 'swag', I won't create you.Same?
"What is your father's name and where was he in September of 2013?" Heh. I'm only half-kidding.
Do you get nostalgic very often?
Do you get nostalgic very often?
Not often now. I used to all the time, because of problems at home, but those problems are now dealt with. Under the table. If you could go back in time and stop ONE event in history from happening, which one would it be?
I would... kill Hitler? I guess that's what I would do or something like that. If you could kill one person and not go to jail or feel guilty, who would it be?
Don't do this to me, I'd always feel guilty! Ok, how about this: I'd kill Satan.Have you ever read manga, and if so, which is your favorite?
Well... Right now my favorite is Alive: The Final Evolution, Volume 1, but I've been reading Eyeshield 21: The Boy With the Golden Legs, Vol. 1, which I like very much. (Even though I don't like football.)
And my other favorite is...
Chi's Sweet Home, Volume 1!!
Same?
Grace wrote: "I would... kill Hitler? I guess that's what I would do or something like that. If you could kill one person and not go to jail or feel guilty, who would it be?"
Hitler was just a puppet. It's not likely that that would have done anything, especially since it was one of HIS decisions that resulted in the Axis powers losing WWII.
I've never heard of a Manga.
Have you read Animal Farm?
No. (And a manga is a japanese book, with pictures and junk.)
Do you sometimes think you're crazy?
All the time. What's your angle on democracy vs communism?
the notion of communism is swell, with everyone being equal and stuff, but people being imperfect and all, its almost always screwed up in the process. I kinda prefer democracy. Though there is usually a rich against the poor thing going on, if a group puts enough work and effort into it, they can be represented really well.But most governments are fairly imperfect in my opinion.
What is your favorite children's movie?
I really liked Bug's Life, because they managed to keep the villain scary right to the end even thougha) He was a grasshopper
b) He had a phobia of things that went 'tweet, tweet'
c) He was already beaten once, near the end
d) He was outsmarted by ants, which are not famous for their intelligence (unless they're blue).
If most people had that sort of villain, they wouldn't have given him much screen time to make up for the problem with mystery. Instead, Disney gave him bipolar personality disorder, a monster (Thumper), and included a scene where he buried two (three?) of his own followers alive in grain. And it totally worked.
Why are villains so awesome?
More than half my favourite movies are children's movies. I guess I have to say Finding Nemo. @maniac. Without villains, there would be no heros. Of course, I'm referring to fiction and such, not real life.
Do you think humans are naturally good or naturally evil? Why? (Something my World History class was debating)
Humans were naturally innocent, but when they lost their innocence, evil came in. The Flesh, as described by Paul, is evil and completely sinful, The Flesh meaning human nature. So, yeah. We're doomed.
What have you learned of the Byzantine Empire?
I don't think I actually know anything about the Byzantine Empire...What is your perfect man/woman?
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