Hi, I know this is not a beta reader discussion forum, but I haven't got luck with BRs that are not focused on HF. I'd like someone with good HF background to give me feedback on my WIP novel.
I recently concluded the first act (composed of 7 chapters, around 3,500 words each) and want to gather general feedback.
The time setting is Georgian-Byzantium wars of the XI century. Here are the few first lines of the novel>
"The duke sat on the Cathedral's bench and looked upon the chest of the king he had killed. The ruler laid inside a carved wooden coffin with his eyelids shut and his arms crossed over his chest. On his hands were the rings he had worn during the years of his kingdom; but inside the casket, there was no crown over his head. "
I recently concluded the first act (composed of 7 chapters, around 3,500 words each) and want to gather general feedback.
The time setting is Georgian-Byzantium wars of the XI century. Here are the few first lines of the novel>
"The duke sat on the Cathedral's bench and looked upon the chest of the king he had killed.
The ruler laid inside a carved wooden coffin with his eyelids shut and his arms crossed over his chest.
On his hands were the rings he had worn during the years of his kingdom; but inside the casket, there was no crown over his head. "
Thank you for your help,
Christian