2/5: Applying Commas

[Ms. Flagg]

Write one sentence about your book for EACH rule:

1.) Items in a series
2.) Separation of adjectives
3.) Compound sentence using a comma and conjunction
4.) Compound sentence using a semi-colon and transition word/phrase

For example:

I am reading the fantasy novel The Necromancer by Michael Scott.

1.) Series: In the text, twins Sophie and Josh Newman have had their auras awakened, been chased by a wide variety of monsters, and are trying to avoid being captured by the evil magician, Dr. Dee.

[Wesley]

1.) Harry is hates Professor Snape, Draco Mafloy, and Voldemort.

2.) Harry Isn't afraid of the dark, evil, Voldemort

3.) Harry was lonely, but now he has many friends.

4.)Harry is Young; however, he is brave.

[Ilijah]

1- Robert's mom, dad, and sister are not normal.

2- The creature is a very hairy, small creature.

3- Robert's creature was a secret, now all of his friends know

4- Robert has a crush on a girl;therefore, he gets nervous around her.

[Andy]

1) Charlie wants to be smart, nice, and friendly
2) Charlie is a kind, hearted gentleman
3) Charlie Gordon mentally retarded, but turned out to be a genius later on
4) Charlie wants to have a high IQ and become intelligent; therefore, he was tested in a machine to turn into a genius.

[Aaron]

1.Artemis loves to have power, he loves money, and he loves being a genius.

2.Artemis is a millionaire, a genius, and, above all, a criminal mastermind.

3.Artemis's dad died, so he takes it all out on his enimies.

4.Artemis is a genius; however, he is a criminal mastermind.

[Sydney]

1) Kidd is always sad, alone, and over protective.

2) Kidd is a nice, warm hearted and quiet guy.

3) Kidd's ex- best friend Devon is always hurting and stealing from people, so he assumes that Devon is gonna hurt Olivia next.

4) Everyone thinks Kidd is a weird and mysterious kid; however, if you really get to know him he is a very kind and funny guy.

[Jamilah]

1. Jason likes Lacey, indie rock, and quotes from 80's movies.

2. Lacey is a pretty, dead girl.

3. Jason has been doing a lot of research on Lacey,but he did not find any research on her being alive.

4. Jason and Lacey really like each other, however, Jason thinks Lacey is alive.

[Bryan]

1)Eric use to be a shy, over weight, and an outcast.

2)Eric is a cool, slim, and a athletic person.

3)Eric's old friend, Sarah Brynes, is at a hospital in silent, so Eric decided that he should tell people about the terrible secret she's been hiding, before its dark currents swallow them both.

4)Eric thought since that he's not an outcast anymore Sarah would stop being his friend; however, even though that Eric is a slim jim, they will always friends.

[Yamil]

I am reading a fiction book, X-isle by Steve Augarde.

1. Steve is brave, smart and intelligent.

2. Steve is a brave, happy survivor.

3. Steve makes sure everybody will be safe during the flood, but the flood mostly killed everybody.

4. Steve is young; however he can survive like a grown man.

[Corey]

Cal hits homeruns, scores, and wins the game.
Cal is a nice, funny and big.
Cal was doing bad, but now he is doing good.
Cal wants to win the awards;therefore he works harder

[Gabby]

1)Tris is a divergent and had 3 choices Dauntless,Abnegation,and Erudite

4)Tris wanted to pick Abnegation to please her parents;however,she ened up picking Dauntless.

3)Tris was almost killed by 3 people competing for dauntless,but she didn't report them.

2)The first person Tris met was honest,nice Christina

*the number next to it applys to the rule it's not in order

[Kenjo]

I am reading the non-fiction book, Time Bandit. by Andy Hillstrand.

1.) The Hillstrand brothers are dedicated to their job, work extremely hard, and are very successful crab hunters.
2.) The Hillstrand brothers' job is dangerous, daring, and adventurous.
3.) A fight can break out between crew members, but is quickly broken up by the brothers to keep everyone safe.
4.) Repairing and restoring the ship is extremely expensive; therefore, they need to earn enough money to repair and make a profit.

[Aaron]

1). The boy loves his go-kart, his father, and hid friends.
2). The boy isn't afraid of his crazy, over protective, father.
3). The boy isn't aloud to ride his go-kart, but he sneaks it outside and takes it for a spin.
4). The boy is trying to hide his go-kart mess, therefore, he hides it in the garage and cleans up the oil.

[Karen]

1.) Ysabel is a twin sibling, happy, and bright girl.
2.) Justin is a bright, excited, and athletic boy.
3.) Ysabel is a smart, fashionable, and talent girl therefore she is an amazing girl with unique skills.
4.) Ysabel is a girl who looks up at her education; however, she doesn't have the same interested as her twin brother Justin.

[Kiana]

1.Spring break was coming up next week,so I had nine minutes of homework,which I did IMing my best friends,surfing for celebrity gossip and sending a virtual plate of snickerdoodles to my brothers ReaLife page.
2.She had long,glowy hair.
4.Skye and I always hung out after school;however, now that she has a new boyfriend its impossible.