The Lightning Thief
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Help us write a scene! (help us write a scene somewhere in the series) Read the previous and continue the scene.
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Feb 13, 2013 08:52PM
Not bothering to argue, Rachel moved out of the way and told Chiron.
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"Nico! He's hurt!! I think that.... THING bit him!!"
"There's nothing we can do for him now," Chiron said calmly.
"There's nothing we can do for him now," Chiron said calmly.
"You can't be serious. You're Chiron! Call the gods, get some magic potion, do something !!!!!!" she shouted.
Then, Apollo appeared. "Jesus, do you know how hard it was to track it? It is hard to track "
Rachel ahold staring open mouthed.
"I had to call in the big guy and, Zeus, I HATE calling in the big guy!! He's so... Pushy. Such a day ruined."
"I had to call in the big guy and, Zeus, I HATE calling in the big guy!! He's so... Pushy. Such a day ruined."
"What... are you talking about?" she spluttered. "Nevermind, I have to go see Nico..." she sprinted back to him, finding him lying on the ground and looking pale.(time for the romance, a little bit, guys. He's dying here!)
"Apollo!" Rachel called, pointing at Nico. He was already on the ground shivering, half of his arm in shadows.
"Nico..."
"R...rach...Rachel..."
"Hold on Nico. Apollo's here. He'll make you okay. He'll make you okay.
"R...rach...Rachel..."
"Hold on Nico. Apollo's here. He'll make you okay. He'll make you okay.
"Rachel," he said softly, "It's okay. I'll be with my dad, where I belong." he sucked in a sharp breath. "But there is something... I have.... always" his breath was coming in sharp bursts, "wanted.... to tell you....." he took a staggering breath.
"Excuse me miss," Apollo said. Rachel scooted over a bit.
The god leaned over Nico staring intently at the wound. Then he simply poked it with his finger releasing a small stream of golden magic.
"Hmmmmm..." He said. "This is strange." He poked it again. "I've never seen anything like this."
The god leaned over Nico staring intently at the wound. Then he simply poked it with his finger releasing a small stream of golden magic.
"Hmmmmm..." He said. "This is strange." He poked it again. "I've never seen anything like this."
(Ruin time!)Apollo closed his eyes, and taking a deep breath, cured Nico. "You're lucky you're the son of the Lord of the Underworld. Anyone else and you would've died about 5 minutes ago"
Rachel realised the breath she had been holding.
"Thank the gods!"
"Well, more like god. I am only one you know."
"Thank the gods!"
"Well, more like god. I am only one you know."
Rachel gripped Nico's arm. "So he's going to be okay?" she asked."Probably," said Apollo. "I've never dealt with this before, so I suggest that he rests for a while."
"What did you want to tell me?" She asked Nico"That you owe me one" he said, hoping his dark hair covered his blush.
"Yeah whatever you idiot. C'mon. Lets get you back to your cabin."
She held out a hand and helped him up. Using her for support they walked back to the camp.
"And I do not owe you one. I think you owe me one."
"I do not!"
"Sure..."
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She held out a hand and helped him up. Using her for support they walked back to the camp.
"And I do not owe you one. I think you owe me one."
"I do not!"
"Sure..."
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(I think it's time for some Percy Action now. That was cute though. I like it. Nice work!!)
Walking with Thalia, with her sheild in the open, was nothing easy. He stumbled every time he backjed up.
(I love Nico! And I imagine him soooooooooooooooo cute!)
"Will your please put that thing away?" Percy asked. "There's nothing to fight right now."
"On can never be too prepared."
Percy rolled his eyes.
"On can never be too prepared."
Percy rolled his eyes.
(Hi I'm back. Where are they going now? BTW Rachel and Nico is cute.)
(I do too!!! Riordan did a great job developing his character!!!!)
(I don't know. Where are they going?)
(Which prophecy are we gonna use?)
(I don't think we decided that.)
(Use erin's)
((Gotta go guys!))
(I cant do it right now but ill get the computer back in maybe half an hour)
(We need to get this thing moving again.)
"I suppose I could put it away for a little while," Thalia said slowly. "But if something happens and we're not ready, it goes on your head!!"
"I suppose I could put it away for a little while," Thalia said slowly. "But if something happens and we're not ready, it goes on your head!!"
( Gonna make the monsters the main problem)As if on cue, a monster with to heads, one of a boar and one of a wolf, came crashing uppon them. It had the body of a lizard, flippers, a giraffe's tail and gothlike butterfly wings.
It said: "THALIA! Can I have your autograph? I've been waiting my whole life to meet you!"
((Um... is that a joke? We're talking about the monster that almost killed Nico))
(I don't think that's very fitting)
(Let's forget comment 403 ever happened.)
"I told you, Seaweed Brain!" Thailia shouts and taps Aegis. Percy uncapped Riptide.
(wait back up I thought Percy and Thalia were with Annabeth)
(No, Annabeth had a device that comunicated them. Annabeth is still trapped or they wouldn't be going for the sword.
(oh okay.)"BACK ME UP," Thalia shouted.
"Well duh! What do you think I'm trying to do?" He said. backing her up.
Then it all happened so fast. The monster was closing them in, the wounds Percy was giving it not even slowing it down a little bit. In a few seconds, they were overwhelmed as the monster picked up Thalia and left her flailing in it's grasp.
"Holy Zeus! How is it so fast on it's flippers!?" Percy asked, dodging blows.(Have you read The Lost Hero?)
(yup, and the rest in the series.)Then he looked up. "Thalia!" he yelled.
((I can't wait for House of Hades to come out!!!! Look at my profile pic!))"Well don't just stand there" Thalia shoted. "Save me!"
(wow awesome)"I'm a little busy right now," he shouted back, fending off octopus like legs.
((All Da Ladies Luv Leo))Percy manged to slice on if the legs, making the seal-like arm drop Thalia.
Thalia landed hard in the surf.
"You couldn't have told it to put me down gently?"
"Sorry. I didn't really think about that," Percy retorted. "I'm kind of busy here can't you tell?"
"I thought you were just taking a stroll in the park. You look rather bored."
Percy was sweating like a freaking pig. Thalia retrieved her sword from Where it had fallen and began slashing at the monster's flippers.
"You couldn't have told it to put me down gently?"
"Sorry. I didn't really think about that," Percy retorted. "I'm kind of busy here can't you tell?"
"I thought you were just taking a stroll in the park. You look rather bored."
Percy was sweating like a freaking pig. Thalia retrieved her sword from Where it had fallen and began slashing at the monster's flippers.
Blocking blows and looking for the monsters weak spot. Thalia glanced quickly around to see percy lifting his sword and bringing it down onto the monsters tail. Instently the monster roared and disipeared in a wirlwind of yellow monster dust. Thalia looked at Percy "how did you know to do that?""Annabeth." Said Percy with a grin. Percy looked down and stomped. "Hear that, its some type of trap door."
"Here we go again." Whispered thalia under her breath.
Climpind down the trap door, with Thalia muttering curses in Ancient Greek, Percy began to wonder if it was such a good idea after all.
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