The Lightning Thief
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Help us write a scene! (help us write a scene somewhere in the series) Read the previous and continue the scene.
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Feb 13, 2013 05:12PM
(lemme change zume to tomb)
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(hey so we r continuing with yours, then)
What about this?
You shall meet the goddess that seeks revenge
(Insert line)
The son of Poseidon must stop the goddess of fears
Across the ocean filled with tears
Find the island where sailors meet their doom
Enter the way to the wailing tomb
A brother, a traitor and a friends sacrifice
To find the sword buried deep in his eyes.
It's kinda iffy, but what about something like that?
You shall meet the goddess that seeks revenge
(Insert line)
The son of Poseidon must stop the goddess of fears
Across the ocean filled with tears
Find the island where sailors meet their doom
Enter the way to the wailing tomb
A brother, a traitor and a friends sacrifice
To find the sword buried deep in his eyes.
It's kinda iffy, but what about something like that?
(cool it's a combination. How about the part where it says insert line: And hang from a cliff edge?
(YES! Awesome, a mix between the two! Can we add in the part about Annabeth, so she has something to do? Like this:You shall meet one who revenge does seek
(Insert line, seek is just a lot easier to rhyme with than revenge)
The son of Poseidon must stop the goddess of fears
Across the ocean filled with tears
Find the island where sailors meet their doom
Enter the way to the wailing tomb
The daughter of Athena, trapped in Hades tomb
Must find out the secret in the golden room.
A brother, a traitor and a friends sacrifice
To find the sword buried deep in his eyes.)
Sarah wrote: "(YES! Awesome, a mix between the two! Can we add in the part about Annabeth, so she has something to do? Like this:You shall meet one who revenge does seek
(Insert line, seek is just a lot easier ..."
Can I be honest? No offence but it's...... non phrophecitic?
Your phrophesy. I like Erin's better then the others, including mine.
(okay, but you do realize Erin's had some of mine in it too, haha ;) okay so Erin u want to insert the line? the words that rhyme with revenge are 1 syllable:
benge, enge, klenge, menge, wenge
2 syllables:
avenge
(from Rhyme Zone the Rhyming Dictionary))
(Look up my former comment for the line. And yes that's why I said Ít's a combination!'"
(ohkay. let's just move on and worry about it later. )Suddenly the connection between them started going fuzzy. Annabeth's eyes widened. "Oh, no." she whispered. Then something groaned and grabbed her foot, yanking her out of Thalia and Percy's view. "No!" Percy shouted, but the connection was gone.
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Meanwhile, Chiron was back at camp, sitting at his desk when Nico rushed in, panting out the words, "Big. Trouble. Must. Come..... see....."
(Wait. Quick question. Are they still Iris-messaging with Rachel and Chiron?)
(nope it got canceled)
(Okay. Backbone the same page now.)
(okay go ahead ur up)
(Okay....hmmmm....okay!!!)
The mist was just fading from Percy and Thalia's IM and Rachel had left only moments before to organise the campers.
"Yes Nico? What's wrong?"
"There's.... Who were you talking to? Was it Percy?!"
"Yes. Percy and Thalia, but we did not share many words. I believe Annabeth was there as well and in some sort of trouble."
"We'll then we have to go help them don't we?!"
"They are beyond our help Nico. Now, what is the problem?"
"Oh right. There's some sort of strange monster attacking the boarders. One that no one's ever seen before...."
The mist was just fading from Percy and Thalia's IM and Rachel had left only moments before to organise the campers.
"Yes Nico? What's wrong?"
"There's.... Who were you talking to? Was it Percy?!"
"Yes. Percy and Thalia, but we did not share many words. I believe Annabeth was there as well and in some sort of trouble."
"We'll then we have to go help them don't we?!"
"They are beyond our help Nico. Now, what is the problem?"
"Oh right. There's some sort of strange monster attacking the boarders. One that no one's ever seen before...."
(whoops. typo. Ya Percy jumped in with Annabeth, and Thalia is lost in the forest. Maybe with the monster, that would make a great scene. I meant Rachel hold on.) "Never been seen before? Impossible," said Rachel.
"I think you'd better come and see...."
They left the Big House out to the strawberry fields and saw a increasing number of campers gathering towards the south part of the camp. There appeared to be an enormous shadow lurking in the woods just beyond the boarder.
(I really don't know where I'm going with this, just a heads up)
(I really don't know where I'm going with this, just a heads up)
(sokay.)Rachel exhaled. "So," she said nervously, "A monster, huh?" She might be the Oracle, but she was still very afraid of monsters.
"Maybe you should, you know, go make prophecies or something or chat up that new Demeter guy. He was looking at you earlier," Nico said.
"Yeah.... Yeah.... I think I'll go do that..." She said, her voice shaking slightly. "You guys have fun killing monsters."
"Yeah.... Yeah.... I think I'll go do that..." She said, her voice shaking slightly. "You guys have fun killing monsters."
Nico squeezed her hand. "You'll be alright, Rach," he said, and then ran off, unsheathing his sword.
Rachel tried to grin at Chiron, who was climbing out of his wheelchair, but it came out looking more like a grimace.
"Go Rachel," Chiron said. "We'll handle this."
"Yes, sir. Be careful, okay?"
"I am always careful." He winked and galloped off.
"Yeah, sure. You Greeks are never careful," she muttered under her breath and walked off towards the cabins.
"Go Rachel," Chiron said. "We'll handle this."
"Yes, sir. Be careful, okay?"
"I am always careful." He winked and galloped off.
"Yeah, sure. You Greeks are never careful," she muttered under her breath and walked off towards the cabins.
The monster had 2 heads, one of a boar and one of a wolf. The rest was.,..
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(ok)
(Are there any monsters in Greek mythology with the head of a boar and wolf and the body of a lizard? Or does that sound silly?)
(nope, but we''re creative, how about a giraffe's tail?)
(how threatening! haha)"What is the update, Nico," shouted Chiron.
"The monsters fangs inject some sort of black curse that makes the victims crumble to pieces," Nico shouted back.
Its short necks made a V, it had the body of a lizard and a girrafe's tail. Insted of feet it had flippers and he had wings like a butterfly but dark and gothlike.
(How the heck does this thing walk!?! I like it though)
"Watch out for the poison," Nico screamed. He saw the monster starting for someone, it's fangs drawn out. He squinted, then started sprinting. The person, obviously clueless, was Rachel.
(can she see through the mist? it would be more intense if she cant)
"RACHEL!!" Nico screamed. She turned to look at him, but that that moment her eyes glazed over and she began to mutter something about a curse black as death.
(yeah, she can)
Erin wrote: "(How the heck does this thing walk!?! I like it though)"(XD I'm jut weird like that)
"Oh, please, not now!" Nico yelled. "RACHEL!" Rachel, still in a trance, stood helplessly in the monster's path. Nico made a desperate leap and shoved her out of the way. He turned to defend himself right as the monster's fangs sunk deep into his arm.
(would it be bad to start a Nico-Rachel romance?)
(I don't really know. I was thinking the same thing. That sort of looks like where this is going though so... I say what the hell!! Why not?!)
(The Oracle can't have a relasionship as explainee in the last Olympian, but it would be fun for Nico to try anf for Rachel to fall yet not admit it to herself)
(Dang it! I forgot about that. I think that's a good idea though!)
(forbidden romances are even better!!! I say we go for it!)
(YES!!!!!!)
(Okay, you ladies can now proceed haha)
Suddenly coming out of the transe, Racheel snapped back into reality and watched Nico battle the monster in front of her, defending her.
"Oh my gods," she breathed, seeing the black fluid dripping from the gash in his arm.
"Rachel!! Move! Get out of here!!!" Nico shouted.
"Rachel!! Move! Get out of here!!!" Nico shouted.
"RACHEL!" he screamed. "GET AWAY FROM HERE! RUN!"
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