The Lightning Thief
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Help us write a scene! (help us write a scene somewhere in the series) Read the previous and continue the scene.
Annabeth made puppy eyes. "Please?"Lion (whatever) glared "No"
"Pretty please?"
"No"
"With a cherry on the top?"
"For the last time I won't tell you what the sword is for!"
'" Fine,but can you at least tell me why your nose is so big?"
He scowled and left the room, trading places with a skeleton that had the clothes of a.... clown? Hades is weird Anabeth decided.
(am I allowed to write now?)
(yes)
(okay thanks)Annabeth was smart, and although she wasn't patient, she could be when she needed to. She determined that her bonds were black metal chains, with many ways to get out of them. All she needed was something really, really, hot.
(logan lerman is hot)
(Yes. Very true, but Logan Lerman isn't there o play Percy is he? Percy's not even there to save Annabeth
(lol)
(Okay. I'll give this one a go.)
Annabeth looked around her cell. There were no windows with the stereotypical bars and the door melted back into the wall every time lion (or whatever his name is) entered or exited. The floors were bare. She didn't know what she was going to do.
Then she remembered something her mom had given her last summer.
Annabeth looked around her cell. There were no windows with the stereotypical bars and the door melted back into the wall every time lion (or whatever his name is) entered or exited. The floors were bare. She didn't know what she was going to do.
Then she remembered something her mom had given her last summer.
(permision to date percy)
(Maybe, but how does that help now?)
She pulled it out of her pocket. It was a δυσχέρεια εντοπισμού, or a distress locator. She could contact any Person in the world at any time. She opened it and whispered a name. "Thalia Grace."
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"Gods Seaweed Brain! Do you really have no idea where you're going?! I thought you said you just had to be obnoxious!! You're being plenty stupid. Why isn't it working?"
Then suddenly an image shimmered in front of Thalia, it was Annabeth, her nose bloody but otherwhise okay. "Thalia thank the-" she froze when she saw Percy.
"Percy" Anabeth gasped. Her heart pumped so hard she swore Percy could hear it.
"Annabeth?" he gasped. Thalia rolled her eyes. "Nice to see you too, Annabeth."
"I need something hot" Anabeth replied. Percy ran his hands through his hair and grinned. "Not that kind of hot"
"No you idiot. Something that will get me out of here!! So if you have, like, you know, a welding torch on you or something, that'd be great."
(Did I bring the humor or what!?!?)
((That was pretty funny! :) Good job on the story you guys!))
"Well if you guys are with this love fest I will be very glad to help." Thalia rolled her eyes.
Even though she was transparent, Thalia could still see Annabeth blushing.
"Sorry."
"It's fine. You know, I happen to have something better than a welding torch. Or have you forgotten who my dad is?"
"Sorry."
"It's fine. You know, I happen to have something better than a welding torch. Or have you forgotten who my dad is?"
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"Oh right" Annabeth said. "I can't give you and actual lightning bolt so..." Electricity flew towards an arrow that had suddenly appeared in Thalia's hand. She gave the arrow to Annabeth, carefully handling by the fethers on the bottom.
"Thanks Thalia! One sec guys."
"Sure. It's what I do. Right Jackson?"
Percy was still staring at Annabeth, mouth gapping, as if he couldn't believe she was even there.
"Percy," Annabeth said gently picking at the cuffs with the arrow, "close your mouth before you start catching flies."
"Sure. It's what I do. Right Jackson?"
Percy was still staring at Annabeth, mouth gapping, as if he couldn't believe she was even there.
"Percy," Annabeth said gently picking at the cuffs with the arrow, "close your mouth before you start catching flies."
Percy blushed and closed with mouth. "Y'know, I think Rachel might give us a better idea where the sword is. She is, after all, the oracle.
"That's not a bad idea. Anyone got a drachma?" Thalia asked.
Percy started to dig around in his pockets.
"Uh... Hey guys," Annabeth said, "do you think we could maybe work on one thing at a time? I still want to get out of here. And I solved one problem." She held up her, now free, hands.
"Right. Sorry Annabeth."
"I found one," Percy said, holding up the shining gold coin.
Percy started to dig around in his pockets.
"Uh... Hey guys," Annabeth said, "do you think we could maybe work on one thing at a time? I still want to get out of here. And I solved one problem." She held up her, now free, hands.
"Right. Sorry Annabeth."
"I found one," Percy said, holding up the shining gold coin.
"Can your dad help?' Percy asked Thalia and, as if on cue, the crashing sound of thunder opened rain. Percy shone Riptide's light against the falling drops to create a rainbow. "Oh Iris, Godess of the Rainbow, accept my offering" he threw the coin into the rainbow and it dissappeared. "Show me Rachel Elizabeth Dare, Camp Half-blood."
The mist rippled and the fiery red hair of Camp Half-Blood's oracle appeared.
She was in the main room in the Big House at the camp talking to Chiron.
"I don't know," she was saying. "All I know is Annabeth was here four days ago and then she just disappeared. Percy hasn't been seen for days, and Thalia was called out by Artemis. The camp feels unprotected without any of those three here!"
"It is disturbing," Chiron said. "Normally Percy and Annabeth give me a thumbs up before they leave."
"I think you mean a a heads up, Chiron."
"Ummm... Hey Rachel," Percy said. Rachel whipped around.
"Percy!"
She was in the main room in the Big House at the camp talking to Chiron.
"I don't know," she was saying. "All I know is Annabeth was here four days ago and then she just disappeared. Percy hasn't been seen for days, and Thalia was called out by Artemis. The camp feels unprotected without any of those three here!"
"It is disturbing," Chiron said. "Normally Percy and Annabeth give me a thumbs up before they leave."
"I think you mean a a heads up, Chiron."
"Ummm... Hey Rachel," Percy said. Rachel whipped around.
"Percy!"
((Um okay I thought they were gonna see Nereius the old guy son of poseidon who knows everything but okay. @Sarah I was talking about how Lieon is tha protector of the gates of Tartarus and stuff and then when Percy and Annabeth need to (view spoiler) @Isabella yes when Percy goes back to rescue annabeth Nico can turn up))
"Percy? Thalia? Percy!" Chiron exclaimed. "You haven't been here in months!"
"Uh yeah, about that... Rachel, we need a prophecy. Or just an answer I guess. To a que-"
"Percy, shut up. You're rambling," Thalia snapped.
Percy looked offended.
"Rachel. Where can we find the sword of Ares?"
"Percy," Chiron began. "Where exactly have you-"
He was interrupted by Rachel who began entoning the prophecy as her eyes glowed and green smoke foamed out of her mouth ((makes it sound like she has rabies. Someone else write the prophecy I can't rhyme for my life))
"Percy? Thalia? Percy!" Chiron exclaimed. "You haven't been here in months!"
"Uh yeah, about that... Rachel, we need a prophecy. Or just an answer I guess. To a que-"
"Percy, shut up. You're rambling," Thalia snapped.
Percy looked offended.
"Rachel. Where can we find the sword of Ares?"
"Percy," Chiron began. "Where exactly have you-"
He was interrupted by Rachel who began entoning the prophecy as her eyes glowed and green smoke foamed out of her mouth ((makes it sound like she has rabies. Someone else write the prophecy I can't rhyme for my life))
message 284:
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Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo)
(last edited Feb 13, 2013 05:13PM)
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You shall meet the godess that seeks revengeA bargain, a deal to earn her aid
Find the island where sailors meet their doom
(I'm tempted to say something goes boom)
Enter the way who's curse was a tomb
A brother, a traitor and a friend sacrifise
To find the sword burried deep in his eyes.
(ill put it in answers Mania
IDK
Sirens Island
IDK
IDK
IDK)
(I'll post it and if you guys don't like it I will delete it but give me like five minutes
The daughter of Athena, trapped in Hades tombMust find out the secret in the golden room.
The son of Posedion must stop the godess of fears
Across the ocean filled with tears.
There on an island, he will find what he seeks
But it cannot be his treasure to keep.
A sacrifice and a suffering in one final breath
This quest is marked with the fate of death.
Erin wrote: "(Is it even a word?)"I don't think so :) do u guys like mine? I
Sarah wrote: "Erin wrote: "(Is it even a word?)"I don't think so :) do u guys like mine? I"
I coudn't think anything with doom, so i invented a word, a curse actually, called zume, and I like yours but it was too reaveling.
(I like it too, but I have to agree with Isabella. A little too much info. Maybe the zume (even though its a fun word) could be changed to tomb or something.)
(revealing? so which one do you guys want to go with Isabella, i know your opinion, I'm asking Nicole, Athena, and Erin, k? :) )
Maybe like, 'enter the way to the wailing tomb' since you mentioned sirens
(I'm ok with either.)
(okay whateves should i delete mine then?)
(nah)
(so do u want to continue the story with yours or mine)
Hang on. I have an idea. Give me one sec
(ok)
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