The Lightning Thief
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Help us write a scene! (help us write a scene somewhere in the series) Read the previous and continue the scene.
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Feb 09, 2013 02:50PM
Hades sighed, "Poseidon's gonna kill me..." He muttered, "Alright! Fine! You win, boy. It's rather simple, really. All you have to do is..."
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"Is...""Speak the words, 'My breath your breath, my heart, your heart, my blood your blood, my life your life,' over her, and then suck the curse out of her by physical contact, like a kiss."
Percy nodded, "Can you get me out of these chains first?!"
"Of couse I can. I am a God!'
Hades sighed, snapped his fingers, which released the chains, and then disappeared. Percy rushed to Annabeth's side. She was barely breathing. "You beautiful, brave, stupid girl," said Percy. He cupped his hand under her head and spoke the words with tenderness. "My breath your breath, my heart, your heart, my blood your blood, my life your life," and pressed his mouth to hers.
The black on Annabeth began to recede back to the source. The mark swirled, and then disappeared all together.
Percy looked down, not surprised, when he saw the black mark spreading on his chest.
Annabeth's eyes blinked open, "P-Percy?" She caught sight of the mark on his chest, "What have you done?" She whispered in horror.
"Annabeth, I love you," he whispered, smiling, wanting those words to be his last.
"Annabeth. Thalia's bracelet, it will get you out of there before the curse spreads again." "Mom, no! Percy!"
" Let him go, Annabeth"
"No!"
" I'm sorry,"
Annabeth felt herself slipping.
( I'm tempted to say percy died...... No maybe not)
(We will have to see, I guess haha)
(OOOOO I know! Lemme write the part and don't interrupt
Percy woke up, blinking, in a white room with white floor and a white celing. He guessed he was either in an insame ayslumm or he was a different kind of blind. Then Aphrodite appeared. "You loyal demigod" she said. Percy looked down and saw he had no mark. "What happened?" he asked. "Is Annabeth alive? Why don't I have the curse anymore?""Yes that girl is alive and is, as we speak, fighting with Thalia saying she must go back. As to your second question I removed the mark."
"What? But how?"
"Becouse even though Hades usually puts that kind of curse, this time it was I who put it."
"What??? Why? Why would you do that? Annabeth could have died, you-"
"I will not be spoken to in that manner" She interrupted him. "I knew you had stong feeling for the girl so I put a test. If you really loved her you would've doe what you did, if you did not, you woul've both died"
"What if Hades hadn't helped me know what to do?"
"Please, if he hadn't I would've sent him. Having a punk for a boyfriend does have it's advanteges"
"What if I said the words wong? Can't you see the problems here?" Percy seethed.
"Well taht would've been your problem."
"MY PROBLEM?" Percy roared. "YOU ALMOST KILLED HER, YOU LITTLE WITCH!"
Aphrodite sighted and snapped her fingers. Percy kept mouthing things but not a sound would come out. "Much better"
((You guys are doing a great job on this story! Rick Riodain would love it! I have a idea for a plot twist. What if Aphrodite was put up to it? Like Are in the Lightning Thief!))
(Sure but how about the person that put her up to it was the god of Tartarus)"Now I need a favor"
((She could be put up to it by Athena, who is try to prove that Percy isn't good anuff for Annebeth, even though he is, to try and break up Percabeth!))
"I need you to go to Tartarus"
"To meet the god of Tartarus of course."
"He wants to speak with you first"
"great, another god wanting to talk to me, then kill me" Percy grumbled
"And you actually expect me to go?" Percy asked in dibelief.
"I hate you"
"Hate is a passionate emotion, Perseus Jackson.""Wait..." said Percy. "Wouldn't the god of Tartus be Hades?"
"No," said Aphrodite, looking amused. "His son, Lieon, gaurds it."
Percy glared at her. "What makes you think that I will do what he says?"
"Why, because he has Annabeth."
END OF CHAPTER TWO
(DUN DUN DUN!!!)
(haha, nice sound effects :) )
percy walked through the underworld muttering ancient greek curses. he trudged through the feilds of punishment with his head down so he wouldnt see the horrors. he walked on. his destination: tatarus.
He was hoping Annabeth was okay. Please, don't be hurt, Wise Girl,
Annabeth opened her eyes to see only darkness, "H-hello?"
"Annabeth. Friend of Perseus Jackson." said a voice.
"Who wants to know?" Annabeth aske
"Lieon, Son of Hades, God of Tartus. You are being held here for ransom until he comes for you."
"Who is he?" Annabeth asked cautiously
"Perseus, of course."
Percy? Come to Tartarus??? "No," she whispered, "No, no, no, no, no!"
"It is too late," boomed the voice. "The boy is in the Underworld as we speak. You are not in Tartus now, but are at the gates, and will be thrown in unless he does what I want."
"No please, don't let Percy get any closer! I'll do anything!"
As if on cue, Percy ran into view. "Lieon," he panted. "I know she's here-" he cut off when he saw her.
"Annabeth." he continued like he hadn't heard her. "Are you okay?"She rolled her eyes. "Today is an off day for me, okay? Usually I'm the one fighting and saving your butt.
"You can't always be the knight in shining armor, Annabeth," said Percy. "Sometimes you have to be the princess too."
"Since when have I ever wanted to be a princess?" She asked, smirking even though their situation was... well, not fun.
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