The Lightning Thief (Percy Jackson and the Olympians, #1) The Lightning Thief discussion


211 views
Help us write a scene! (help us write a scene somewhere in the series) Read the previous and continue the scene.

Comments Showing 101-150 of 727 (727 new)    post a comment »

message 101: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Annabeth shoved Thalia away and started sprinting, not even bothering to answer when Thalia called for her. Mania had her boyfriend. And she was going to get him back.


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas "I'm going with you!" Thalia yelled, grabing her silver bracelet.


message 103: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "NO!" Annabeth shouted. "I'm doing this alone!"


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas "Percy's my friend too!"


message 105: by [deleted user] (new)

"But he gave up his life for me, I won't risking losing someone else that I love!"


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas "I'll just follow you" Thalia whistled and another pegasus apeared.


message 107: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'll just lead you off."


message 108: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Thalia was quiet. "Will you at least take my bracelet?" she whispered.


message 109: by [deleted user] (new)

Annabeth nodded, "Of course."


message 110: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Thalia smiled. "Okay," ahe said, and handed Annabeth the bracelet. "Thanks," Annabeth said.


message 111: by [deleted user] (new)

Thalia nodded, "Be safe."


message 112: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Thanks, Thalia." smiled Annabeth. She ran off the direction that Mania was hidden, with her boyfriend.


message 113: by [deleted user] (new)

Thalia sighed, and waved after her friend.

"To Percy, Blackjack!" Annabeth said


message 114: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Blackjack nodded and took off like a bullet. Annabeth was on her way to Percy. She grinned in exhilaration and scratched Blackjack when he let her down. "Thanks buddy!" she called, and ran up to Mania's lair.
She pounded on the door. "I WANT MY BOYFRIEND BACK, AND I WANT HIM NOW, YOU B-"
"Well, well, Annalyn," said Mania, opening the door.
Annabeth glowered. "My name is Annabeth, and I want Percy back, now.


message 115: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'm sorry, but I'm afraid you're a bit too late for that." She grinned menacingly


message 116: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Then, she caught sight of Percy, alive and well, but beat and chained to the wall.
She breathed a sigh of relief. "You're alive, "
"For the moment," he replied, giving a tired grin.
"Why did you bring him back?" Annabeth said suspicously.
"Well, my dear, you can't get information by torture if he is already dead," Mania replied.
"T-t-t-orture?" Annabeth stuttered.
Percy looked at her. "I'm fine," he promised.
Annabeth glowered at Mania, but the world was turning dark and she felt a pain in her side. She yanked up her shirt to find almost all of her abdomen black.
Percy's eyes widened. " No, " he choked in disbelief.
"Percy," she gasped.


message 117: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah And then she fell.


message 118: by [deleted user] (new)

"Annabeth!" Percy yelled. He fought against his chains, but he couldn't get free, "Stop it! I stayed now let her go!"


message 119: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "I didn't do it," Mania said, mildly amused. "She bears the curse. It is killing her."


message 120: by [deleted user] (new)

"Save her! I'll do anything, just save her!"


message 121: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "I can't," said Mania.


message 122: by [deleted user] (new)

"You have to!"


message 123: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "I can't," Mania snapped.
"Please, let me go to her, please-" he broke off, choking.


message 124: by [deleted user] (new)

"She is dying, there is nothing you can do about it." Mania said coldly.
"There has to be something, please!"


message 125: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "It's the curse of Hades, " snapped Mania.


message 126: by [deleted user] (new)

"Hades? What does he have to do with this!?"


message 127: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "He is the one who cursed you.
The curse is brought upon those who have felt the hand of death,
And have suffered their fears in Hades breath
It will spread it's mark of end, black as night,
Until a sacrifice cleanses it white."



message 128: by [deleted user] (new)

"A sacrifice will save her?" Percy clarified


message 129: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Yes," Mania said, confused. "But-"


message 131: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Percy's brow furrowed. "A sacrifice," he repeated. "What kind of sacrifice?"
"A big one, obviously," said Mania impatiently.


message 132: by [deleted user] (new)

"Big meaning..." Percy prompted


message 133: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Death, for example."


message 134: by [deleted user] (new)

"Death..." Percy had a bad feeling he knew exactly what kind of death


message 135: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Death. Die. Live no more. A life for a life."


message 136: by [deleted user] (new)

"A life for a life..." Percy echoed, "If I give up my life to Hades, will that save her?"


message 137: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Yes," said Mania. "Why would you give your life?" she mused.


message 138: by [deleted user] (new)

"Annabeth's everything to me, I can't just let her die because I got myself into this mess." Percy said brokenly, "I love her too much."


message 139: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah Suddenly Annabeth groaned, the blackness rising up her neck. Percy started at her in shock.
"It looks like you have a matter of minutes left before she dies," said Mania.
"What must I do to save her?" Percy asked, yanking against the chains.
"Why would I tell you that? You are my prisoner," said Mania, and then she disappeared into nothing.


message 140: by [deleted user] (new)

"Stop! Wait! Come back!" Percy yelled, "Annabeth, just hang on, I'll get you out of here!" Percy pulled and strained at his chains.
"Hades! HAdes get your godly butt down here!"


message 141: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "WHO DARES MAKE FUN OF THE GOD HADES?!?!?!?!" boomed a voice.


message 142: by [deleted user] (new)

"Percy Jackson!"


message 143: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "I should have guessed," snapped Hades voice. "What do you want, son of Posideon?"


message 145: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "That sounds very inviting," said Hades, "but whatever for?"
"It's Annabeth- your curse, it's killing her. I would like to..." he swallowed. "Like to take her place. Please."


message 146: by [deleted user] (new)

"Hm... I don't know, Jackson. Poseidon would have my head."


Isabella (All Da Ladies Luv Leo) Thomas "Can you remove the curse?" Percy asked, hoping Hades would just sight and do some of his wierd godly magic.


message 148: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "Please." Percy begged him. "You hate me. You want to kill me, please. Tell me what I have to do, please, she only has minutes ....." he choked.


message 149: by [deleted user] (new)

"I can see that! Her life force is slipping away as we speak!" Hades snapped, "I can't just take the curse away!"


message 150: by Sarah (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sarah "I know. I have to sacrifice myself. Tell me what to do, please."


back to top