The Lightning Thief
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Help us write a scene! (help us write a scene somewhere in the series) Read the previous and continue the scene.
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He sat down in frustration. Why was being a demigod so hard? All he wanted to do was save her, but now...
(inside I'm crying so much)
Running, Thalia joined the club of tears but she could get out the details of what happened. The sun was now setting, a blood red color, and an eerie chill came about in the air.
Running, Thalia joined the club of tears but she could get out the details of what happened. The sun was now setting, a blood red color, and an eerie chill came about in the air.
(isn't rick on goodreads? I second the notion because I think 'fanfiction' is too small a word to describe this.)
Okay guys yes Rick should read this but please can someone write something else! I'm dying here!!!! LITERALLY! (okay not literally) I'd offer to do it, but I suck at this sort of thing so... yeah can someone write it :) :)
Mae wrote: ""Do we still have the sword atleast?" Percy stuttered out."Thalia weariliy took the sword straped to her back off and handed it to Percy.
Annabeth sat in a cold damp place that was nowhere and everywhere all at once. Her energy was dwinding and she didn"t know how much longer she could servive untill Percy came. Oh thats all she wanted was to feel his arms around her and his lips on hers once again. Annabeth sobbed silent tears because she wasnt strong enough for loud ones. Annabeth sent Percy a message in her mined maybe it will work she thought... just maybe...
Annabeth slowly got up and ran her fingers againts all the sides of whatever type of prison she was in...
Everywhere hurt, but she knew she needed to get out of here. She needed to find Percy. Suddenly light flooded her prison. She saw that she was trapped in a metal box with no entrance or exit to be seen. The floor was covered in blood. Then the light disappeared as quickly as it had come.
Annabeth"s vision went fuzzy but she stayed calm and keep on moving. She looked up... the sealing wasnt that hard for her to reach. And there was a lach... a real lach. Annabeths hope soared until she touched it and a shooting pain went up her arm. "danm it" she whispered under her breath. the lach of corse was enchanted.
Her audience with Hades didn't go so well and it earned her a "small" hit to the head. The walls seemed like they were closing in. Mother, Annabeth thought, what should I do?
Annabeth took a deep breath and thought about what her mother would tell her.
She looked back up at the lach and relized it was glowing...
It was a faint gold colour that seemed to be getting brighter by the minute.....
Just when she thought the light couldn't get any brighter the lach broke and there was Percy with riptide glowing in his hand. he reached down and pulled Annabeth up out of the prision. He hugged her and was crying just as much as she was.
(Wait. Is that the end? But it just got so good!!!)
"Come on," percy said. "We gotta get out of here." Annabeth smiled, she was extremely happy that percy was here.
(No way they still need to get out of tartus)
However Annabeth was just so tierd and there where little black spots in the line of her vision."Annabeth, Annabeth" said Percy grabbing her waist and lifting her into his arms. At that moment the darkness swalowed Annabeth and she passed out.
((Nice job on the story guys! I hate to be the bearer of bad news but Rick Riordan will not read this. He doesn't read fan fiction, so they don't change how he thinks of his charries, or something like that. My sister did a better job explaining it. That's also why he didn't watch the Percy Jackson movie.))
(Why would he want to watch the Movie it was AWFUL)
"Nico!" Percy shouted. "Thalia!!! Annabeth needs help!"
She was covered in scratches and gashes, many still seeping blood. It made Percy sick to his stomach and he feared for Annabeth even more.
She was covered in scratches and gashes, many still seeping blood. It made Percy sick to his stomach and he feared for Annabeth even more.
((Tell me about it! I'm glad he didn't watch the movie!))
((He was on set when they made to movie though.))
((Really?!?! Then he should have at lest tryed to fix it! Especially Annebeth's line at the end! "I have feelings for you, I just can't decide if they are good or bad." What?!?! That is the lamest thing she could have said!!!! ))
Thila ran over with Ambrosia, and nectar.
"Annabeth, eat this." Percy said.
"Annabeth, eat this." Percy said.
(there's pros and cons to that. Pro= we get to send it finally :). Con= it will be the true end of the Percy Jackson books)
"Did Hades get the sword?" Annabeth asked. "When I met with him... he said what he would do... and it's kind of awful..."
"Did Hades get the sword?" Annabeth asked. "When I met with him... he said what he would do... and it's kind of awful..."
((That's what I was about to say. I wouldn't send it if it meant the end of PJ! :( ))
(Long live Percy Jackson and his adventures!!! Does anyone know Rick's email?)
"So you have the sword, right, Seaweed Brain?" Annabeth asked slowly.
"So you have the sword, right, Seaweed Brain?" Annabeth asked slowly.
Mae wrote: "(we need to finish the prophecy. Dont ask me what it was but we need to finish it!)"
(Maybe we can spread the prophecy out over many adventures because it looks like we're reaching a conclusion fast)
(Maybe we can spread the prophecy out over many adventures because it looks like we're reaching a conclusion fast)
(agreed! I think the first prophecy is on page 6 or 7 and the other one is on page 10)
((If you guys want we can post this story when it's finished in my camp half-blood group to get it more exposure))
((I don't think anyone can get his email. But you can print it out and mail it to him. Or send him a message on GR asking for his email. I'm don't think authers check those. But you can still try.))
((Haha, I meant like post the actually story :) We're putting out our second newspaper soon-ish and we have a fan fiction section, plus a thread in the actually group as well))
((Either works :) Whenever it's done, post it in chat, Fan Fiction, Advertise, or email me and I can do that, and it can also be featured in our next Daily Demigod Issue))
((Awesome! It's suuuch a great story!!))
Annabeth cursed in Ancient Greek under her breath, "Wonderful..." She muttered.
((I went go look it up on his website. He does not take emails, cause it slows down his writing. He does have a mailing address.))
"Why?" Percy asked. "We got you back, Rachel's alive, we're all in one piece - more or less. I thought Hades and the rest of the Big Three were on good terms. A war against your father can be a really good bonding exercise."
Annabeth said, "Well, I'm really glad to be here with you." She leaned over and kissed him for a really really long time.(please write. I am bored)
"Nico,"Thalia asked, "where are we going?"
"Nico," Percy called, "I've been here more times than I would like to admit. I don't think we're going 'out.'"
Suddenly Nico changed, the illusion falling. "Hello, children," said Mania. "Welcome to hell." With that, she released their hands and sent them straight to tartus.
(Back to tartarus. Great.)
"Where's Nico?!" Rachel shouted. "What have you done with him?!"
"Where's Nico?!" Rachel shouted. "What have you done with him?!"
She was falling, but she heard Mania say, "Let's just say he will be joining you in the land of the dead soon."She disappeared, and just as Rachel was about to be enclosed into Tartus, she felt a bloody hand grip hers.
(dont save her yet, make it keep going)
Annabeth, Rachel thought. Thank you.
At that moment Rachel loved Annabeth more than she ever had.
Percy was panicking. He felt like Thalia at that moment, he was falling a d he didn't know what he was going to hit. All he knew was he had Annabeth's hand in one of his and Thalia's in the other.
At that moment Rachel loved Annabeth more than she ever had.
Percy was panicking. He felt like Thalia at that moment, he was falling a d he didn't know what he was going to hit. All he knew was he had Annabeth's hand in one of his and Thalia's in the other.
Bianca was gone. She just vanished as if Mania sucked her life force into her own. Percy thought it was fruitless. He couldn't keep Annabeth, Thalia, Rachel and Nico up. He was only one demigod. He was a son of Poseidon in a place where shadows swallowed any water. Percy thought of the River Styx. NO, he thought, been there and there probably was more dead stuff in there than actual water. Percy was loosing his grip, on holding on the small ledge of the Underworld and on life.
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