The Lightning Thief
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Help us write a scene! (help us write a scene somewhere in the series) Read the previous and continue the scene.
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Feb 22, 2013 08:59PM
((Did the weirdo guys take her to mania?))
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Suddenly, Nico was not alone. Two people suddenly appeared next to him: Percy and Thalia.
"PERCY!!!" Thalia shouted. "I told you to take us to the person who needs our help the most! There's no one here! Gods!"
"Ummmm.... Hi," Nico said from the floor.
"PERCY!!!" Thalia shouted. "I told you to take us to the person who needs our help the most! There's no one here! Gods!"
"Ummmm.... Hi," Nico said from the floor.
"NICO?" they said in unison."Ya, well um I am trying to save Rachel here so if you could just-"
"Nico?" said a faniliar voice.
"Rachel?" Thalia said looking up. "How did you-"
"Thalia," Percy said slowly, "we need to go. She's bad news,"
"Rachel?"
"No. The other one."
Nico looked down. The bottle was lying in pieces in his hand.
"Thalia," Percy said slowly, "we need to go. She's bad news,"
"Rachel?"
"No. The other one."
Nico looked down. The bottle was lying in pieces in his hand.
With strangling fear he realized who he had brought. serew himself protectively in front of Rachel."Mortal, now, I see, " said Mania.
"What?" cried Rachel.
"Nico," Percy said. "What is she talking about?"
((Holy Zeus!!!!! That's a lot of comments!!))
"Percy, now's not a good time..." Nico said quickly to avoid the question. He didn't dare look at Rachel, for fear she'd have one of those weird vision things.
"Percy, now's not a good time..." Nico said quickly to avoid the question. He didn't dare look at Rachel, for fear she'd have one of those weird vision things.
She grabbed on to his arm, tighter. "Nico, please," she begged.
"It's about the prophecy I told you," she said really fast so he wouldn't interrupt her again.
Mae wrote: "(You know Rachels a couple years older then nico? shes like as old as Percy)"No Rachel! Not. Now." Nico struggled to keep his cool"
actually they met in the second book when Percy was like 14 and Nico was 13... plus Rachel is younger than Percy so....
(Aren't Rachel and Percy in the same grade? And I think Nico was ten, and Percy was 14 in the third book... I'd have to check)
"What's going on? I'm confused!" Percy groaned.
"What's going on? I'm confused!" Percy groaned.
He flinched. "Rachel,"All the sudden Mania's booming voice interrupted them. "I am sick of this love fest," she screeched, and with one swift motion sent a sword flying through Rachel's heart.
"NO!" Nico screamed in agony as she crumpled before him, covered in blood. He ran over to her desperately. "I can feel her life force, it is gone! Gone! And so are my powers!"
Percy shifted uncomfortably. Rachel was his friend, and he was frozen in shock.
"The sword..." he stuttered. "Nico, the sword. It can bring back one life."
Nico was astonished, but he said nothing, and didn't even ask for an explaination as to how they had gotten the sword from Ares.
"You press it to her forhead, the flat end of the blade," Thalia said softly.
Nico started forward with the sword-
"Wait." Percy said.
Nico looked up at him, desperate.
"Bianca, she's here."
(wait, Nico was stuck in the hotel for 70 years, so even though time is frozen, their relationship could work)
"Just do what? Percy was confused. "Nico, you can either brng back Banica or Rachel."(look at my post and u will understand, i edited it a coupla min ago)
(sorry everything can't go perfectly lol)He looked at Rachel, soft and sleeping, and then thought about his sister. Tears stung in his eyes.
"I'm so sorry, Bianca." He whispered, and pressed the blade to Rachel's forehead.
Her eyes met Nico's face, "You brought me back..." She said hoarsely.
Nico looked at Bianca.
"I...I hope you understand." He was fighting back tears. Bianca smiled.
"Of course I do."
"I...I hope you understand." He was fighting back tears. Bianca smiled.
"Of course I do."
Rachel looked around. Nico, Thalia, Percy, and a shadow that looked strangely like Nico's sister Bianca. They all wore the same expression of worry and concern.
"I-I though I was with Mania?" she sounded confused.
"I-I though I was with Mania?" she sounded confused.
"It's okay, you're safe now," he whispered."I thought I was evil," Rachel said. "I'm dangerous."
(Ok! I'm Morgan btw. I think this is an awesome story!)
"But I'm dangerous," Rachel whispered."That's a risk I'm willing to take," said Nico.
Rachel still looked puzzled.
"How come you didn't use your powers?" She asked Nico.
"How come you didn't use your powers?" She asked Nico.
"How come you didn't use your powers?" She asked again, more firmly this time.
Nico looked away. He didn't want to tell her. Or anybody.
"I think I know," she said helplessly. "It's a Hades thing since Nico's powers died today."
(Agreed. It just gets really confusing. Who goes first?
(i say just post and if we miss post just delete it.... that way if someone has a good idea out of turn they can go.)Rachel looked at him. "Nico?"
(i delete miss posts all the time it is ea-z)
(sorry!)
"I did it for you." Five words but they left a stinging feeling in the air.
"I did it for you." Five words but they left a stinging feeling in the air.
(can I go? I will delete this post if I have to)Rachel went white.
"You aren't boring, Rachel," he whispered.
She didn't get too far due to the fact that a.) she didn't know where she was and b.) Nico started after her.
"Rachel!" he called. "Rachel! Please!"(you guys 1D fans?)
Mae wrote: "(imcopying this all ina word document and editing out the people heading and side comments and it really looks like a book!! theres like 70 pages WITHOUT peoples names and spaces)"will you email it to me please????
Rachel was sobbing even harder. "Let me guess, you had to choose who to save," she said. When there was no reply, she took off running again.
Mae wrote: "(more than bieber. i like their music. Im so proud because my little sister calls him justin beaver.)"(thats awesome! I am a beiber hater too! I love their new single, One Way or Another, specially the video!)
(sokay. continue the story)
Her eyes were blurry, and she made a choking noise, running faster and faster. She tripped on something and lost her balance. SHe waited for the ground to find her and bury her.
"I know you love him. It's okay," Bianca whispered in her ear. Her voice sounded calming, like a running river or one of Artemis's bows shooting through the woods.
Just like that, the ghost was gone and Rachel was left sobbing in the dirt.
"Oh Nico," she whispered. "I am so sorry."
"Don't be," he said solemnly. Without thinking, Rachel hugged him. It seemed like the right thing to do.
He wrapped his arms around her and held her while she sobbed. Suddenly, Percy came running into view, his eyes red and his voice hoarse."Nico." He was out of breath.
Nico released Rachel. "What's wrong?"
"It's Annabeth." Percy took a staggering breath. "I think she is dead."
Still having his eyes closed Nico said, "Where did you see her last?"
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