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[Rinasa1234, Super Awesome Bookworm]

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[Rinasa1234, Super Awesome Bookworm]

Print this out, bring it to me on Monday, I will edit. I can't edit like this on an iPad.

[Lizzi721]

I was wondering if I should enter this in the Lauren Oliver love is dangerous figment contest. It is a poem.

Girl in the Mirror

I stare at her.
How is she so perfect?
She is a huge man lure.
Though, she is only a reflect.
Even while I stand alone
In front of the mirror.
I hear my harsh tone
Say I am not her.
I am weaker than a baby.
More paranoid than insects.
But she has no maybe
For the beauty she deflects.

I wish I could be that girl in the mirror.
She's tall, confident, and strong.
Whatever I can do, she does better.
She can't do anything wrong.
They say she is just a reflection.
But I swear that the girl isn't me.
She is made up of pure perfection.
While I'm trapped, she is free.
I wish I could be that girl in the mirror With eyes full of love.
Not one cell in her body is ever bitter.
An angel sent from above.
I wish the girl in the mirror
Would set me free.

I hear her voice in my head.
Telling me it's okay.
That even while my parents are dead.
I will be with them someday.
We dance around the lake.
From dusk until dawn.
She says now you must wake.
I look around for her with a yawn.
She isn't by my side now.
She has escaped to her home.
But beside the mirror, I have no doubt
That I am really alone.

I wish I could be that girl in the mirror.
She's tall, confident, and strong.
Whatever I can do, she does better.
She can't do anything wrong.
They say she is just a reflection.
But I swear that the girl isn't me.
She is made up of pure perfection.
While I'm trapped, she is free.
I wish I could be that girl in the mirror With eyes full of love.
Not one cell in her body is ever bitter.
An angel sent from above.
Now the girl in the mirror
Will set me free.

How she talked about freedom.
How it was so fine.
All I ever wanted was freedom.
A selfish love of mine.
One night as I looked at her.
I told her I desperate.
To be perfect and pure.
Then she told me a secret.
We walked beside later that night.
This would set me free.
She said I'd be with my parents now
As I leapt into the sea.

Please comment feedback. I know it is a little scary(the poem).

[Rinasa1234, Super Awesome Bookworm]

How does that say love is dangerous? You didn't really mention any love relationship?