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Great stuff :) Lovely dialogue, smashing internal trains of thought, fast-paced, hard-boiled, with a sort of innocent yet sardonic knowingness about it that reminds me of the golden age of science fiction. Starting humourous, but with the potential to veer into action thriller, SF, horror or political conspiracy as you see fit.
I look forward to the next episodes :)

Every Saturday, a new chapter! I'd be interested to know what you think as the story progresses, what you think might happen next, that sort of stuff.
Again, thanks so very much!
Mari

Interested in feedback from all my worthy writing compatriots here.

Looking for your feedback, if you would.
Mari

Take a break for a little free entertainment.
Open to any and all feedback...
Thanks in advance!
Mari


You know, from my point of view, saying thanks is never enough. Can't tell you both how much I appreciate not only your time in reading this story, but the time to make a comment. Means the world to me.
Mari

Seriously, it's no problem. If I didn't enjoy the story, then it might be a problem!

Feedback welcome!
Mari


Yes, the Tornado has serious problems looming large on his horizon...not the least of which is his own family...LOL
Thanks again!
Mari

Tall Tale By Missing Boy's Mother Sheds No Light.
Feedback welcome!
And thanks in advance!
Mari

Links to all previous chapters located in the right hand sidebar.
Feedback welcome!
Mari

Hope you enjoyed the ride!

It's been a nicely paced, readable story, with enough action and humour to satisfy a wide spread of tastes.
I suppose the chattering classes in Washington DC and New York, and come to think of it, parts of London as well, would sneer at the message as naive and backward, but what do they know? I agree with it anyway, even though I'm from England.
We could do with Tornado over here when he's played his part in the USA. Could we borrow him before our next election?
Once again, a good read. Thanks for sharing it with us, M.L.

Again, very glad you enjoyed it!
Mari

That said, I personally LOVE to find new talent because I feel as though I discovered it, in a way. It's so fun to be a fan of a talented writer and then to watch that person grow.
Jen
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Posting a new chapter every Saturday.
Thanks so much! I now return you to your browser...LOL
Mari