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Haikus are easy, but sometimes they don't make sense...(a haiku game)
original:
I can fly away
Oh! I want to get away!
bad songs say so much
revised:
I can fly away
and the refrigerator's
a moderator.
I can fly away
Oh! I want to get away!
bad songs say so much
revised:
I can fly away
and the refrigerator's
a moderator.

Has trouble dispelling hurt
In large goodreads groups.
*sorry... didn't know I was in a game thread. Thanks for saving me!

This race never ends.
Swoosh! Another passes by.
I think I want out.
I think I want out
of this song that never ends
it goes on and on
I have another game I was thinking of starting, but it's neverending as well and a little more difficult.
of this song that never ends
it goes on and on
I have another game I was thinking of starting, but it's neverending as well and a little more difficult.

interest in our game yields
to shiny and new
2/10/2008: Doh - edited post to remove the extra syllable from my last line. I blame my cold meds for this error.
if anyone wants to play,
the rules are simple
Just make last lines first.
We'll start with the following
haiku from threadless:
haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
refrigerators