Above All That Is Random book club discussion
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Jan 16, 2013 03:21PM
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We should have a chat about the pros and cons of both, I think. This might take a bit of trial and error before we get it perfect, I'm new to this sort of thing.
I like the way Roxy carries thoughts all throughout her story, with the rustling and the unicorn repeating through the story. The way the family has a reason to believe the unicorn is good. The ending leaves you hanging, which I like. The story could use more elaboration, however.
Liane's story is very original, and keeps you interested the whole way through. She does a good job with describing things without too much detail or too little detail.
Liane's story is very original, and keeps you interested the whole way through. She does a good job with describing things without too much detail or too little detail.
I pretty much agree. And i would say more. But I probably would be saying what you said, in diffirent words. Also I wanted to ask for the next compotition, I might write. Maybe, not sure. So could I not judge that time? I don't know if being a judge means that you have to do it everytime, so... ;)
I personally think Liane's is the best. She expresses the story very clearly and creatively (is that a paradox?) and I enjoyed reading it. And yes, next time I think I will give up my judging spot so I can participate in the contest
Oh! Ha. I forgot to say who I likes best. Lol. I like Liane's best, too. It was fun to read, kept me going. Held my interest. Nicely exicuted. Flowed together well. Just overall good. Allthough I ebjoy anything that has unicorns. Roxy's could have had more depth. It was still good enough.But my vote has to go to Liane
Ruth wrote: "I cast my vote for Liane's story.and yes, both of you can participate in the February contest."
Wait, with our spots as judges or without? Oh, and when will the Feb. theme be introduced?
Ruth wrote: "You can't be a judge and be in the contest. The Feb. Theme will be introduced on Feb. 1st."Okay.
Ruth wrote: "good idea! it could be a romance! or something else..."Yeah, YA Romance maybe? That takes during Valentine's Day?
we could send a bookmark, or let them be a mod for a month or something, or we could just do nothing.
I don't think they are gonna vote. But it doesn't matter, cause 3 to 2 would still make Liane the winner.
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