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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

I walked towards a pearly white castle. Oh how it glittered. This would be my new home, that is, until the war was over. Goblins is what we would be fighting. Goblins, trolls, ogres. I would have to train hard, this would be scary for sure...


message 2: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 09, 2013 05:58AM) (new)

But, mother and father had always assured me when the time came I'd be fine and do great. And I believed that until they disappeared 3 years ago...


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

It was a rainy night when they left. I still feel the shivers on my spine. I can hear my mom's cries to stay and my dad's tells of order...


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

I tried to grab onto them, to get them to stay, but strong hands pulled me off of them. My older sister comforted me at first, but then grew up and left, just like my parents...


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I did feel bad for my sister, but what else could I do? Now this is my chance to fight off goblins and stuck, that way, I won't feel as guilty....


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Someone exclaiming "hey!" snapped me back into reality...


message 7: by Kaylee (new)

Kaylee Monroe | 5 comments I realized that I was daydreaming during class and that I needed to focus on the math that was in front of me....


message 8: by Madilynn (new)

Madilynn If mother and father find out that I am daydreaming in class again, I am sure to be grounded.


message 9: by Julia (new)

Julia Dezotell (graceunplugged) | 4 comments I tried to focus on math, but I couldn't stepped into another daydream.


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