What do you think of my pitch?

[Rustin]

I am entering the ABNA that Amazon is hosting and I wanted to get some opinions on my pitch. Let me know what you guys think. Thanks.

Rustin

Here's the pitch:

He was her enemy. She saved his life. The rest is history.

In the world of Purga there are two races: the Rooks and the Terraqouis. The Rooks have embraced technology, creating microscopic robots called nanos to create any machine they need. The Terraqouis are their opposite. They embraced the spiritual, forming a deep bond with nature that allows them to shift into the animal closest to their inner selves.

Since the beginning of their history together, they’ve been at war. There’ve been savage battles, lives lost, and a lot bad blood. Things start to change, however, when the Rook prince, Rone Varlamagne, is attacked by an unknown force and left for dead in the desert near Terraqouis lands. Alone, defenseless, and near death, his survival depends on an unlikely ally, a Terraqouis girl named Keiara. Instead of killing him, she decides to save his life. It is one choice, but it has the power to change Purga completely.

Together, they face foes from every direction and will stop at nothing to protect each other.

Book One: Dragon is a suspenseful, thrilling adventure that seamlessly blends science-fiction and fantasy together in a way never before seen. Full of dynamic characters, action, thrills, and adventure, this is a story of epic proportions.

[Anthony]

Sounds good to me. My first thought was it sounds like a sci-fi/fantasy Romeo and Juliet story.

[Rustin]

Thanks Anthony. It's close to that, just without the double suicides. Lol.