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Feb 08, 2013 12:58PM

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I love this description, it's fabulous! :)

I can definitely see why the style can be annoying, there's quite a bit of things like that:
"The roads were thronged but the river, split and skeined and channelled everywhere, was the highway where boats passed gunwale to gunwale, hooded, laden, crammed with bags and boxes and beasts and baskets and people: with nuns and officials, merchant-burghers and aliens, churchmen, consuls and innkeepers, and masters of ships laid up at Sluys, who skimmed past in their skiffs on the stretches, sloping their masts to slide under the glittering arches." English in not my native language so it's especially painful for me :) And the wind up is indeed slow - by the Chapter 5 one still has no idea what the story is/would be about.
However the author does paint a very authentic picture of what the life of a person in their later teens was in Renaissance Brugges (no YA here LOL) and generally her characters don't act out of period (which I treasure in particular). I wish she did cut on the descriptions and explained a bit more the politics when she mentiones them, but otherwise I'm interested how it will play out. It helps though that I "know" some of the persons mentioned.

Oh my! LOL! English IS my first language and even I was struggling with that excerpt. Gosh, that made me laugh.
Congratulations on hanging in there and conquering that wordy style. :)

I'll keep reading and hope to make up my mind to continue with it within 100 pages.
I find the writing very good. Although where it comes apart for me is the excessive use of commas! There seem to be nearly as many commas as there are words on the page.
It makes for slow reading for me, because I use the appropriate pauses for punctuation when I read. :)

Still, I like how the story started and I'm quite taken with 5 or 6 of the characters already.


I managed to get a renewal in at the library so I another 3 weeks to read it. I won't need that much time but I don't have to rush now. Might be best if I finished before March though, lots of books lined up for the 1st.

I couldn't remember who it was that was into the Medicis, but thought they might enjoy this.
On a non-literary note, my friend went to Florence last autumn and bought me a leather back with the Medici crest on it. Never mind that I love the scent of leather, but this is one bag I will treasure and never lend out. :)

Nice gift, I never got around to buying anything in Florence when I was there so I had to buy a Florentine leather purse when I was in Venice instead. :)




Okay again. This painting, Arnolfin Wedding by Jan van Eyck gets a mention in Dunnett's book. As a complete idiot about art, I was excited that I knew what they were talking about since I had to write an essay on this painting. I don't know how many of you are familiar with it, but what makes it famous is the mirror. The artist paints everyone as a reflection, even himself, naturally.

Oddly enough I only read something about eating Dormice recently....I cannot recall what book it was. Frustrating.

What strikes me reading your comments is that I was only 21; now I'm 57 and I know more of the places and references in her books, they have become richer each time I read them. She is such a cultured, intelligent author and I'm still not up to her level as a reader!



I almost asked whether you had, and what you thought, and ought I persist with that one. :) I shall at a later date.



Imperium
If anyone else would like to join us you are welcome.
I still won't be starting for a few days.





No peeking at the spoiler if you haven't read it yet...this means you, Terri! Some odd (to me) phrases for this period: (view spoiler) Once I accepted that this is the writer's style I just grin at the off-sounding descriptions and move on with the story.

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Lisa I have the same problem. I really only read at night when I go to bed and sometimes if I need to think too much in a fiction I get worn out.
On the weekends I am fairly good, can concentrate better, but not on week nights. :)

I am 100 pages in. I am thoroughly enjoying it. Couldn't put it down last night. Eventually I had to as my eyes were betraying my mind. My mind wanted to keep going, my eyes kept closing. :(
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