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Manu
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Dec 14, 2012 10:01AM

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I am the moderator but I don't know who created this group.I just started the discussion and activities.


നാളെ നീ"
ഇന്നും പ്രതിദ്ധ്വനിക്കുന്നിതെന്നോര്മ്മയില്!
പാതവക്കത്തെ
മരത്തിന് കരിനിഴല്
പ്രേതം കണക്കെ ക്ഷണത്താല് വളരവേ,
എത്രയും പേടിച്ചരണ്ട
ചില ശുഷ്ക-
പത്രങ്ങള് മോഹം കലര്ന്നു പതിക്കവേ,
ആസന്നമൃത്യുവാം
നിശ്ചേഷ്ടമാരുതന്
ശ്വാസമിടയ്ക്കിടയ്ക്കാഞ്ഞു വലിക്കവേ,
While teaching this famous poem by G. Sankarakuruppu, in X std, way back in 1977, our teacher pointed out at a technical blunder committed by the poet.
The game is to find out that blunder . But quick look only.. not to refer anything..OK ?

Its there in the Ist half


nothing wrong with the sequence..one clue...something with Upama

Fed up"
OK..Let us wait for a day to see how others respond..

Pretham kanakke kshanathal valarave….”
What kind of pretham is that he is talking about! Does the ghost grow , that too so quickly ?!
Said to be a matter of joke in the literary circles at that time.

Pretham kanakke kshanathal valarave….”
What kind of pretham is that he is talking about! Does the ghost grow , that too so quickly ?!
Said to be a matter..."
even i had a small doubt it was in these lines . Anyway maybe the poet was referring to the fact that in our wildest nightmares ghosts just grow bigger and bigger and that happens in no time...:)