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message 1: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) Write anything and anything.Even if it doesn't make sence.


message 2: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) I'm eating pie.I don't know what to think of it.Crunchy.Creamy.It's ok...I guess.


message 3: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
As I wake up from yet another nightmare. I sit up and try to get the horrible screams and the most frightful pleading and begging of a women. Whom I thought to be was my mother. Though she was really my aunt. I never understood what she was screaming about it worried me. But I know it will just make everything around me worse.


message 4: by Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~, Wreck-It-Ralph/Sonic Nerd Here! (new)

Kayla ~The Mirthful Messiah~ (Chucklevoodoos142) | 29 comments Mod
The door opened then quietly shut. A shadowy figure darted through the kitchen and into the living room, their feet seeming to never touch the ground as they did so. Soon, the cloaked shadow stopped, and pulled back its hood. Underneath was a very beautiful girl. She had long, black hair that was completely straight and without any frizzyness, dark blue eyes that seemed endless, but strangest of all was her pointed ears, and the way she seemed to know the world around her.
She, of course, was an elf.


message 5: by Sarah (last edited Nov 29, 2012 10:07AM) (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) I walk down the street after school feeling sick. Why did I do that dare? Now everyone thinks I'm weird. That will teach me to play truth or dare with Dara. I should have known she would give me a bad dare. Her name is Dara.
"Hey Cloe!" a girl in my class yells at me when I pass her house. "What you did today was really awsome."
"I messed up OK. You don't have to remind me of it."I snapped at her.
"What are you talking about?" she asked, "Ever sence you told Mr.Bob that his science test wasn't fair because we didn't read that chapter,you have been the most popular girl in school."


message 6: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) Tara*=^.^=* wrote: "I woke up to my sister's screaming yet again. This is getting rather tiring. Some great botfriend she videochats with on weekends, am I right? Fighting is their way of showing their love... or so I..."

OH MY GOODNESS PLZ FINISH!!!!!!


message 7: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) PLZ GO ON I LOVE IT!


message 8: by River Song (DobbyIsFree) (last edited Dec 02, 2012 11:48AM) (new)

River Song (DobbyIsFree) The wind played in her tumble of curly hair that cascaded down to her waist. Her chocolate brown eyes appeared to churn softly, as she raised them to scan the arena around her. A scowl lightened her full rosy pink lips. She dipped her head slightly as the sun glared down at her. A raindrop fell and slipped down her neck. She looked up slightly caught in the glare of the sun; her bluish green eyes appeared to melt slowly; dripping like oozing honey. Her long lashes cast deep shadows across her face. Slowly, she upturned her face to the deep blue sky, the white fluffy clouds swayed gently but soon the darkness seeped through them and the rain came dancing down- kissing her upturned face. She tipped her head back, her dark curls bouncing slightly and she spread out her arms welcoming the raindrops with a wide smile on her face. A loud bang echoed around the arena and in walked the so called shadow people, scowling at her. She simply smirked slightly and watched them carefully, her posture wary but alert. She looked up and noticed the rain had stopped. The shadow people advanced on her, she turned her body slightly and she gave them an inviting smile. One of the shadow people jumped into the air as if to tackle her, she shoved out her hand and he went flying backwards by an invisible force , hitting a wall and crumpled to the ground like a rag doll. Her smirk turned to a half crazed grin and her bluish green churned furiously. She skipped forward like an avenging angel, towards the rest of them...her dagger twirling in her fingertips...the slight breeze that wafted down made her dark curls dance around her face. Her eyes twinkled in amusement and mischief. Her black combat boots making the only sound in the open arena...a dull click, click bouncing from wall to wall. The guy who seemed to be leading the rest tilted his head while he watched her skip forward, a bemused smile on his face mixed in with a smirk. His black hair was tousled and his light green eyes sought out hers as cold ice-he was a lean figure clad in black. A gun rested in his hand. She stopped a little away before him and also tilted her head, as she tilted her head she observed him, taking in his lean figure and almost ice cold features, she smiled ever so sweetly at him. Smirking at her he raised the gun, leveling it with her forehead. He triggered the gun and the bullet was fired...


River Song (DobbyIsFree) She ran down the cold cobbled street as the darkness welcomed her, she turned a corner as she bit her lower lips, her dark curls falling against the soft skin of her face. She was a slight blur against our intrigued vision for if she was seen her life would be a high stake prison. A spiral of gold dances against the man's shaded eyes as he waits for the story to unfold...


message 10: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
River Song your an amazing writer!!!!


River Song (DobbyIsFree) Aw, thanks :)


message 12: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
Your welcome!:)


River Song (DobbyIsFree) The second post I wrote is gonna be part of the story i'm writing based around a spy.
:)


message 14: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
That's so cool. I'm working on my other one again and post it. It's for my newest novel i'm writing.


River Song (DobbyIsFree) That's good, what's it about? :)


message 16: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
:) It's hard to explain. But I can try to explain.


River Song (DobbyIsFree) Okey dokey, then try to explain


message 18: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
Ok it's like a spy story with a little of everything combined.


River Song (DobbyIsFree) Okey dokey, sounds interesting if everything is combined


message 20: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
Yea I'm still making a summary but it doesn't sound right. So i'm remaking it .


message 21: by River Song (DobbyIsFree) (last edited Dec 02, 2012 12:12PM) (new)

River Song (DobbyIsFree) ok :)


message 22: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
:)


message 23: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
Heres some more of mine!
As I keep my breathing under control and I see the sun come back. I get out of my bed I fix it. Before going into my bathroom to change into my clothes. I take my badge and phone out listening to the voicemail about the newest mission. It's been a year since she's recieved a new mission.
Just as well as her husband, she jumps when she hears her husband wake up. She relaxes he walks over and takes her hand. "You were having a nightmare again?" He asked kissing her cheek. She nods trying to hide the tears but cannot. They slip down her face as she tries to calm down.
"Janelle?" He asked wiping her tears away. "It's always the same ngihtmare. The night of our wedding my Aunt pleading and crying as she is killed by that shooter." She said letting the tears escape.
"I know and It was so horrible. You know that I know that your Aunt was trying to protect you." He said "Saving me was probably the hardest thing for her to do after herhusband was also killed." She said. "They both loved you and protected you." He said.
"I know but do they know that It hurt me so much when they sacreficed themselves for me?" She said sadly. "Yes I think they did know." he said softly. Janelle tries to relax when her phone rings. She grabs it and answers putting it on speaker.
"Hello Sir." She said. "Good you both are awake." Rhett Daniels said "Are you both ready for your newest mission?" he asked They look at each other. "Yes." They said at the same time.
"Good." Thier boss said. They can hear him take a file out to explain the mission. They look at each other ready to hear it. Janelle gets a note pad and Pen she sits down ready to write it all down. "Your Mission is......"
To Be Continued.....................


message 24: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
Thanks Tara you will find out soon. Ill be posting it a little later.


message 25: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
Yours is also really good Tara!!:-)


message 26: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
Your Welcome!!


message 27: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
I know it's short
"Your Mission if you both choose to accept it is. Find Peter Castro and his family. Before they kill any other families apart of the Silvermoon Society." He said Janelle gasps and stiffens up. He wraps his arm around her trying to calm his wife down.
"I know this is hard for you both Matt and Janelle. " Rhett said. "This is hard to assign a mission to two members of the Silvermoon Society." Rhett said. "It's not that. Rhett you do realize that your asking us to kill my other aunt and uncle and cousins right?" Janelle asked.
Rhett sighs "Yes I know and I'm sorry to ask you both this is very important. You must bring the family in before the next meet of the society." Rhett said "You mean bring them in before tommorrow night?" Janelle asked. "I'm sorry Janelle. Matt." Rhett said.
"Rhett the next meeting is tonight here." She said almost crying. "I'm sorry." He said "Janelle do you think you can lead them towards you? Your family always cared." Rhett said.
"Doubt it Rhett, my cousins hate me. My uncle hates me my aunt hates me as well." She said "My stepbrothers won't even dare to speak about them." Janelle said. "I'm going to try and convince Ryker, Luis, and Bryce for you." Rhett said. "Good Luck with that." She muttered. Matt sighs.
"So....................... are you both taking the mission?" Rhett asked akwardly. "Depends if they try killing me or Matt or my stepbrothers......May I kill them?" She asked. Rhett smirks.
"Of course like we all know it's a game. The prize is protecting the society and a big deal of money." Janelle smiles Matt smiles. "Were in." Janelle and Matt said.
"Good your going to need a team." Rhett said. "Alright what qualities do they need?" Janelle asked. "One someone that's good at hacking and tracking that won't be caught." Rhett said.
"We got someone for that." Matt said. "Someone that doesn't crack under pressure for kicking butt." Rhett said. Janelle smiles. "I know someone perfect for that." She said.
"Also you need someone perfect with weaponry and Battlestrategy." Rhett said smiling. They both smiles. "You know we got them." Matt said we smile. "Alright we got the perfect team then." Rhett said Janelle and Matt smiled.
To Be Continued...............


message 28: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) Tara that is really good and awkard.Why would they not teach there own daughter how to be a spy? I would be so mad.


message 29: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
Thanks Tara I like yours better then mine!!


message 30: by Janelle (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
That is a really good one Belle!!


message 31: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) Oh Tera! That was so funny! :D


message 32: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) you r going to write more right? I look forward to this everyday.


message 33: by River Song (DobbyIsFree) (last edited Dec 10, 2012 12:31PM) (new)

River Song (DobbyIsFree) She ran down the cold cobbled street, her breathe puffing out in front of her as she disappeared into the dark lit corner. She was seen as a blur against out slight intrigued vision, for is she was seen her life would be a high stake prison. Her black boots glided against the cobbled ground as she ran and ran, her dark curls falling against the soft fair skin of her face. She bit her lower lip as her moss green eyes met with the brick wall which blocked her profound escape. A flash of fear graced the presence of her pretty face. She made the mistake of spinning around when she heard footsteps behind her and spinning round her forehead was met with the cold barrel of the sleek black gun...

Her hourglass figure swayed slightly as her deep moss green eyes met with his ice cold blue ones as she choked out “y-you?”. A smirk danced across his full lips as he said “surprise”. A deep unbound fear curled into a fist at the deep pits of her stomach. She briefly closed her eyes as she submitted herself to the cloaked figure that had her death engraved on his hands. A dark humorless chuckle brushed against the tips of her ear and she hid a shiver as his emotionless voice spoke in her mind. A moment of silence filled the eerie night air as her heart thudded in her chest as she considered her options: to die or to do as he said in her mind and run forever.

“Your time starts now, princess” his voice held a razor sharp edginess that pierced through her mind and thoughts without a trace of doubt or regret. She did not respond to his statement but zipped up her leather jacket and turned to leave, faking an air of confidence. Suddenly his slender hand gripped her arm and his lips brushed against the soft skin of her cheek as he murmured “remember one thing I am the time keeper”, his cold laugh danced against the harsh wind. “Tick tock, tick tock” his voice echoed against the silence and she took off running, her black boots thudding against the floor like the distant beat of a drum. He had chosen her fate and the question was how well would she carry out. A flash of gold illuminated the night sky and twirled slightly, a speck of gold waiting for the mystery to unfold….


River Song (DobbyIsFree) Thankyou :)
Aha, later it will be revealed who it really is & i'm liking the one your writing.


River Song (DobbyIsFree) Your welcome :')


message 36: by Janelle (last edited Dec 12, 2012 07:29PM) (new)

Janelle  (its_jt_lv) | 180 comments Mod
Tara your's is getting so good! Everyone's writing is so amazing!!
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"Fantastic. Good Luck to all of you." Said Rhett. "It's time to get through gathering and planning. I'll leave you both to gather your team and explain what to do." Rhett said.
"Yes sir." They both said. "Good Luck." Rhett said before hanging up. Janelle and Matt look at each other, Matt kisses her cheek before going into his office to make some calls. Janelle follows him getting the numbers.
Janelle gives him the numbers, she goes and gets some water for them both. He smiles at her she smiles back as they both start contacting people. Janelle calls her best friend Kayla about the mission.
"Hello?" Kayla asked.
"Hey Kayla." Janelle said.
"Hey Janelle, how are you?"
"I'm Great How are you?" Janelle asked
"I'm great. So what's up?" She asked
"Well Matt and I were recently assigned a new mission and we need a team." She said
"What kind of mission?" she asked.
Janelle sighs and explains to Kayla in exquisite detail about the mission. Janelle listens to Kayla waiting for her answer. Matt gets off the phone smiling at her nodding yes he has someone to help. She smiles back at him Kayla answers her.
"Alright Janelle I'll do it." She said. Janelle smiles.
"Great Matt and I were thinking that we will be having a luncheon tommorrow here. So you can come here then so we can talkt about it." Janelle said. "Great. I'll see you and the rest of the team then." She said Janelle smiles as she hangs up. Matt smiles at her as she hangs up. She kisses his cheek.
"We got Kayla who else do we got?" She asked. "We also got Dexton." Matt said she smiles. "Great." She said "So thier coming over tommorrow?" She asked
"Yes they are." Smiled Matt she smiles. "We better get the weapons ready." She said. She smiles he kisses her cheek. He leads her to the weapons room they have built in.
Janelle shows her I.D. Into the scanner. "Acess Granted." The computer said. Janelle walks in with Matt. They both look for some good weapons to use.
To Be Continued


message 37: by Ken (new)

Ken Northington (allnightrocker) | 4 comments Is there a limit to the content? My writing is rarely appropriate for non-adults...


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