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Is Stephenie a bad writer?
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I hate her anticlimatics endings, her clumsy conception of vampires and relationships. But I do like her pace in her stories, some of her metaphors and her first person perspective.
I think she is genuinely talented for writing, she can do better than Twilight.

But this Tumblr account pretty much explains SM's errors and holes in her writing. Check it out! It's actually hilarious ^^

I read it, but I didn't like it, I seems like the person who wrote the blog was trying to mock the books rather than doing a serious analysis.

Honestly, I enjoyed reading Stephanie Meyer's writing. I thought that as a new author, who was completely unknown until twilight, that her style she brought to the table was well thought out but also on a comprehensive level, she wrote well.
All books and authors are victims of grammar mistakes like misplaced/missing commas, missing words, excessive sentences, overused words, and etc, and yes all these things are distracting and they pull a reader away from the story-- but I think Stephanie Meyer is much more of a point out victim for small grammar mistakes, that honestly don't even matter, just because of how big Twilight and her name became.

Nonetheless, I don't mind her stories themselves. Even if her writing is kind of cringy I still enjoy reading them.

I think it's not about her writing skills but about her characters. They don't really seem to have any personality put within them, sure I don't like Twilight since it isn't my cup of tea and I just don't like the way she portrayed Vampires by making them glitter under the sun and stuff like that, Twilight would be a good book if the characters didn't have a flat personality. I do like Stephenie, I do. But Twilight just isn't working out for me, I think she could have done a much better job if she just made the characters feel really alive.








Exactly. What matters is how she made her readers feel. Obviously writing strategies matter, but whatever she does, works for her. She has had so much success and I have so much respect for her.

"She's always talking about how beautiful Edward is. Get over it!" (Evanna Lynch)

That book was just horrid, especially as an adult book. But then all authors have a niche that they excel at, Stephanie seems to do best with YA...
Doesn't make her a bad writer, just says that she should either stick with what she is good at, or learn more about what is expected in other genres...
Adult romance is a completely different world, with different expectations...and since I was reading them when I was 14...I know more about what the expectations are than most. It has changed over those 21 years...but the basic intense, marriage type relationship remains.
More depth, more sex, more intimacy, more internal conflict....if she can't do that. Then YA is where she should stay.


I don't know about other girls, but when I was 17, my love life was over dramatic. If I talked about something that interested me, I would ramble on and on, and my grammar and vocabulary were pretty mediocre.
As far as telling a story from the perspective of a 17 year old American high school student, I think Samantha Meyer did a fantastic job!


You could say that, but volume of units sold has no bearing on talent. Gangnam Style is hardly the most emotionally-provoking song, but it was the best seller last year. I wouldn't call psy the most artistic or musical guy ever, but I can't deny he made his name in his field.



You nailed it. If my facts are correct it was 1 book and her agent had the idea to break up into 4 books for capitalism's sake. I suppose it was kind of like chocolate cake, a quick high that leaves you hungry.

It is the responsibility of the editor to ensure that the turn of phrase and sentence structure is correct, but with the current trend of online releases more and more books seem to have typing errors and mis-placed words

As far as what she writes... Well, that's probably where you're going to find more ammunition to back up accusations of "bad writing".
i think other writers like James Patterson and Anne Rice are jealous of Stephanie's spotlighted success. even though, they've obviously had theirs too before. neither of them are stephen king.
M.R. wrote: "I think most of the problems with Twilight could actually be blamed on bad editing. Most books undergo intensive rewriting AFTER the author has completed the final draft. The editing is supposed to..."
i like your opinion. i read a few chapters of the book a few years ago, then put it down. I was hardly into the middle when i did
i like your opinion. i read a few chapters of the book a few years ago, then put it down. I was hardly into the middle when i did

Stephanie's genius is not in the prose, so the question, is Stephanie a Bad Writer is the wrong question anyway, since good and bad are just opinions.
Stephanie is a genius in that she had a vision in a dream, had the courage and stamina to write it into a novel and...and send it out to New York. She had caught something by the tail and didn't know that it was an Avanc until 5 years later when Twilight mania hit.
She won the equivalent of the literary lottery. And dare I say, won't ever be able to do it again?
Rowling did the same. Sure she's a better writer, but she hit the nerve. The resonance cord that vibrates through the culture like wildfire. Could she do that again? Probably not. Can you plan for that kind of thing? No way.
But you can capitalize on it when you find out you're standing in the middle of it. That agent saw it and ran with it. Good, career making work.
And, one last thing, Stephanie is a bad writer ;)
Her story and characters suck, but no, she's not a bad writer.

Oh God, not this argument again.
McDonald's sells billions of burgers a month. They aren't very tasty, but they fill a hole. If we can agree with that...
...then by the "Stephenie Meyers is popular == Stephenie Meyers is a good author" logic, the typical McD's burger-flipper is a Michelin-starred gourmet chef.
Any questions?

No one ever think of marrying a vampire and have a half mortal children. Also the imprint thing happen with Jacob Black with Reneesme.
Another proves, Meyer has made excellent character. Every girl become fans of Cullen's family and would dying to have boyfriend as cool as Edward.
In my general opinion the whole twilight world is nearly just as real as it is alive. I love Meyer's for that.
I am not a fan of Edward Cullen and Bella Swan but I love Volturi :). *cheers*


The idea that the movies are good is subjective/opinion. Also, at this point, Hollywood will make a movie out of anything...
Like Battleship: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1440129/?...
Or Angry Birds: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1985949/?...



That ending could have worked if there wasn't such a buildup to this huge battle. There should have been more of a foreshadowing that walking away was an option, instead of the ultimate destruction type mood of the entire second half of the book. I've said this before, but it bears repeating: Stephenie Meyer's concepts weren't bad, but her execution was terrible.


Seriously, it's quite enlightening, and points to a few things most people have overlooked.
While it is indeed true that no writer is perfect, Twilight is the worst story I've ever read. Yes, I am seriously saying this. Now before anyone here decides to flame me for this, go read what I said in my review. I'll know if you don't by what you have to say to me, because, as I said before, it points things out no one else has thought of.
The ONLY reason she even succeeded is because she's one of the FIRST to write porn for teenagers. That's all. Sex sells, kiddies. Too bad your momma forgot to tell you that.
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