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CoolKidRox123's Folder > um.... my storys? liek short ones

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ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 1380 comments Mod
YAYAY


message 52: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
Are you going to add anything more to the story?


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 1380 comments Mod
nope XD -.-'


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Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
Okay. xD


 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) | 337 comments Mod
Yes.The story is good but I agree there were a lot of typos and grammar mix up.
If you're serious about writing a book spelling and grammar are important obviously.
I hope you managed to get this sorted and a book started.
You say you couldn't spell and it's so important to be able to spell above everything.
I'm sure you've improved by now.


 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) | 337 comments Mod
I like it but you need to check your spelling and grammar.
There's a lot of spelling mistakes and new sentences started with small letters instead of capitals which makes it difficult to read.To be able to write is to be able to spell,maybe you could take extra lessons at school if you don't have a spellchecker on your computer.

If you intend to get this published when it's finished you need to brush up on your English.It can be a good book.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 1380 comments Mod
kk thanks!! arigato!!


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 1380 comments Mod
pfft this aint going anywhere. it would if i had any idea what would happen in the story.


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Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
XD That's the question of life, M'Dear Cooler.


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