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What makes a great Character?
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Oct 15, 2012 08:49AM

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I agree with your post because she is strong and memorable to me too. She is also strong in the other two books.

I agree with your description of Katniss. I also think that she is a hero in the book and helps others.

I agree, I also said that what makes a good character is them being unique, and not the same old same old. A character that can really make you visualize what's going on!

My life is completely different from Zeke's because my parents really do care about me.


As young adults, I think we can relate to John's fears and passions, that desire to protect someone else.

He is a memorable character for me because he has opposite characteristics of me, he's brave in the moment and afterwards when he's thinking about what happened he's scared, where as most people will look back and realize it wasn't so bad. He does however show common characteristics that everyone can relate to, fear, caring for friends and family, and compassion. He is scared for the kidnapped children used as bargaining tools in negations over detonators and his buddy Jonsey (a wounded soldier) who just wanted to go home and open a blues club down south.
Over all he's just a memorable character that the author did a great job on making the book come to life and made the character become almost real.

Autumn, this is a really good description of Katniss. I never really thought about how she helped the weaker people instead of joining the strong. That was a great point!

I think everything that you said is true. I relate to characters by them having the same hobbies as I do. I like it also when the author describes the characters because then I can picture the character in my head.


I think your character sounds interesting and inspiring! Maybe I'll try to read it sometime!






On the other hand, I don't like it when characters are only about telling the story. When characters are just thrown into the story without a main purpose I find it annoying. I feel that characters need to bring something to the story. They can't just be mentioned once and then we don't hear about them ever again. To me, this is just a waste of characters that could be leaving an impact on the reader.

I didn’t enjoy reading about Danny either. He was boring and talked a lot about his past, which was also average a boring. The interesting thing I found a bout this character is that his parents were never married and he dropped out of high school. All in all it was a boring book about a boring character that never had a real climax.

The main character I am doing is Jacob Black. He is really tall. Super muscular. He can usually be found without a shirt or a black shirt he is usually wearing cut jeans or cargo shorts. He is a werewolf. If he is going to turn into a wolf he usually starts to shake. He has black hair brown eyes he has a dark brown colored skin. He is in Sam’s pack. He is support to be the Alpha but he let Sam be Alpha instead. Jacob is the Beta. Jacob is a werewolf because of the vampires. The gene for this is in slumber until a vampire moves into town then it sets in. he becomes this to protect Bella from the evil vampires.


I will also remember my character Charlie in "The Perks of Being a Wallflower" because he does crazy things like Helen does in your book. I agree with you that the main character has to do things that stand out, otherwise they won't be a memorable character. I believe that Charlie is very memorable, because he does some very crazy things because he is going into high school, so he tries some new things. The author explains all the events in great detail, so I will definitely remember Charlie.

I agree with you when you say authors give each character a uniqe personality. I am reading Catching Fire and can relate to your oppinion on Katniss Everdeen. There are times when she dosnt seem like a great role mode, but there are also times where she does the right thing. Katniss dosn't really reach out to me as a character, but she is a great person to read about.


In my book Danial and the Half Human Nazi, by David Chejewski My characters persona is that he is very shy and frightful. He shows this alot during the book. When ever people talk to him he just walks away andstars to cry because he thinks that everyone is after him


I agree with you 100%. The more a character shows and expresses their feelings in a book, the more likeable they can be. One of the characters in my book, Looking for Alaska does a great job showing all of her feelings. Her name is Alaska and she's not afraid to voice her opinion and say what's really on her mind. Although she's quite conceded in the book and cares only about herself, she's one of my favorite characters. She likes to act like she's better than everyone and that everyone finds her attractive and good looking. I also agree on how i remember everything about the characters in the books I've picked myself compared to the books that I am required to read and are chosen for me.

Ms Degenhardt wrote: "Ms Johnson wrote: "There are certain traits that make us like or dislike a character's personality based on our own, but let's look closer. What do author's do with their writing to make characters..."
I do agree on how characters cannot just be made in five minutes and how you have to give them a life before putting them into a book, like when you give them their fears, passions, weaknesses, and strenghts. How you have to take time to put them together and make it the person you can see in your head not like a lifeless stick figure.


I can see what you mean by you can easily remember a character you can relate too. That’s a reason why I like to read books with characters who either hunt, fish or farm because those are things that I do and I can relate to their standings. Like in my book there is a 16 year old that all his co-workers call the boy because he works on a farm with a bunch of migrant workers. I can relate to him through the whole farm idea and that he is almost the same age as me. Also he will work hard for food or money for food he has adapted his skill so he went from being a city kid with drunks for parents to a hard working drifter who can drive a tractor and hoe an acres of beets in a day.

I think that having the author giving good details like having Percy Jackson be in first person really helps him come alive too. Good job.

I agree she does start off in a bad situation but grows as a person and a fledging. She starts off with being a regular person and getting like stalked, by this person, and eventually she has been marked in to a fledging. She then was scared and terrified, didn't know what to do because she had a mark on her forehead. She went to her grandmas and fainted when she woke up she was at the House of Night. She was still all alone everyone always looked at her funny, because of her weird marl. The only reason why she had a weird mark was because of the fact that she had all five elements. Everyone looked at her funny until then she told off Aphrodite, then everyone started to get to know her better because everyone hated Aphrodite. After a while she became moor popular but then again it went down because she was calling Neferet evil. Everyone thought she was weird again, but it got better because then she started to date the hottest guy at the House of Night Erik Night. After then it went back and forth because her and Erik were having trust issues, Erik thought she was in love with Mr. Blake which was the drama teacher. Towards the end everyone knew who Zoey was good or bad they all knew her. Zoey always was either liked or everyone just looked at her like she was a freak. Zoey now has friends that love her for her and not because she is the High Priestess and does have the ability to call all five elements, earth, air, water, fire, and spirit.

I agree the way they talk is everything. They can just have random talking phrases and then think random things. The outsiders didn't stick with me the way Firehorse is. Rachel the main character talks and thinks the way I do. It also helps if you have the same likes.



I understand going against what people say and doing things people don't think you would do. The kid dose sound like a meroable character because he did what his father told him not to do and didn't listen to what other people think is the right thing to do. Sometimes you should do what you think is right and not waht others want you to do.

The author of this book has really described him and given me visuals to who he is and why he is the main character. Sonya Sones(the author) keeps the characters apart from each other and give them their own opinions. This might be why Robin stands out to me; he has a thing for his present-girlfriend but can't decide whether he should tell Sophie, his girlfriend, that he has a a crush on some college girls. He's memorable because he has a different view on what he should do in every situation.



I think you mean the first fiction book in awhile. It would also be nice if you didn't sound so angry about reading the book. You just sound like you're whining about it. In addition, you should give examples of why he is uninteresting.


I totally agree that the author makes each character different for a reason! In the book I'm currently reading, The Difference Between You And Me by Madeleine George, Jesse is a character that is different from most people. The author even describes her as "weird and different". I think having a character that's "different" from everyone else makes them stand out more. Jesse wears fisherman's boots and cargo pants everyday. She doesn't care what people think about her during school. And I think that's what makes her such a good character! Plus the author does a great job of showing Jesse's personality through what her values are. Jesse is just trying to get through high school being the "weirdo". She really cares about politics and what big companies will do to her small town. I think that's one reason I like her so much. We live in a small town, and she's trying to save hers from a big corporation. She stands up for what she believes in, and I think that's another reason she stands out to me. She's so bold. She's just an overall great character!


I agree; a great character in a novel should be easy to relate to, so the reader really understands what he/she is going through and it makes it memorable. It also is great when the character is somewhat heroic because it creates a somewhat fictitious role model that people can look up to.


One character that stuck out the most for me would be Katniss because the way the author described her actions helped me to understand her reasoning.



