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Althea *Go wolves and dragons!*(Coach Hedge)
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Jul 03, 2013 03:46AM
When did Hermione come into this discussion?
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*screams* ur a GENIUS!!!!!!Percy: so.......u JUST found out.
I have this idea of writing a story ( I've always wanted to be a writer. I wrote my first story when I was 8 I'm going to post it later) where in the future ( not too far) the government build a secret agency better the CIA so an 11 year kid joins them and has to stop another agency that's when his friend joins ( she is a girl ) and gets stabbed by THE SWORD ( they have 5 strong weapons from space the sword is one one of them and the boy has THE WATCH the second most powerful)So the girl surprisingly survived and now has the power of the sword while the kid ( boy which is kyle)has the power of the watch everyone wants the weapons and try to kill them so they fight to survive and they meet friends and enemies while doing it .
(( BTW THAT'S MY LEAST FAVORITE I HAVE ALOT IF IDEAS AND I DO WRITE STORIES , RIGHT NOW IM WRITING A LONG FANTASY ABOUT THE FUTURE WHERE THREE KIDS FIND A TIME MACHINE AND IT FALLS IN THE HAND OF A PHARAOH. I'LL POST IT WHEN I FINISH ))
((( BTW AGAIN WHY NOT MAKE A TOPIC ABOUT THIS, YOU KNOW POSTING STORIES AND STUFF)))
why does he want the watch again??/ and I may or may not do the Maureen story..
But ur an AWESOME writer!!!! U have to!!!!!I have this idea of a story. I'm not gonna tell though. It's weird.
Julia. Just call me Merida. wrote: "I've figured out Geia (( is that how you spell it? oh well)) hates Upstate NY... I think we did something to _____ her off..."Seriously:( Us Upstate Newyorkers are suffering Gaia's wrath.
Annabeth*aka Dhriti:)* wrote: "I really do love that first sentence.but who is this hermione you speak of?Me:*shoves Harry potter book in her face and growls*read it..."
Annabeth's a big reader, I bet she read HP before:) It seems like her. And then her and Hermione could meet in an alternate universe, and hash out all their smarty-pants guy issues together!
Right? Wouldn't that be awesome?
Some-person(Percy) wrote: "But ur an AWESOME writer!!!! U have to!!!!!I have this idea of a story. I'm not gonna tell though. It's weird."
please tell!!!!!
Anas wrote: "I have this idea of writing a story ( I've always wanted to be a writer. I wrote my first story when I was 8 I'm going to post it later) where in the future ( not too far) the government build a se..."Not a bad idea, c'mon you can do it!!
Yeah. Ur ideas great!!!
Anas wrote: "I have this idea of writing a story ( I've always wanted to be a writer. I wrote my first story when I was 8 I'm going to post it later) where in the future ( not too far) the government build a se..."That is awesome and creative.
Livvy's Back! (Did you miss me?) wrote: "Annabeth*aka Dhriti:)* wrote: "I really do love that first sentence.but who is this hermione you speak of?Me:*shoves Harry potter book in her face and growls*read it..."
Annabeth's a big reader, ..."
I read the book. I don't like her. Hermione. She just memorises stuff and has no brains at all. She wouldn't last a day without her wand.
Me:I think you're jealous
A:I am not jealous. Why would I be jealous?
Me:whatever you say....
Sme bad guys want the watch I'll send you a story, I wrote it when I was 1 or 9 so please don't laugh
When u were ONE?!?!?!??!
8 or 9 sorryhere it is:
There was a poor kid named Scott who lived in a small rotted house. His family was so poor that they only had one bed. His family just wanted some money to build a house or at least to buy some good food but they didn’t have enough money. One day he heard from his friends that there’s a lottery ticket price, but he couldn’t buy a lottery ticket if he wanted to eat. So his life was like hell until one day he was going to school and he found a lottery ticket on the ground. He wanted to hide it and then find its owner because it was not his. He went to home and forgot the lottery ticket in his pocket. He and his family listened to the winner’s number in their small tiny radio the winner’s numbers were the exact numbers on the lottery ticket in Scott’s pocket. He told his mom and dad they were happy because now they have 10,000 dollars they can buy good food and maybe build a small house. His family persuaded him to keep it. When it was time to exchange the lottery ticket with the money he went to a place called “The lottery prize” it was big and huge, he never saw a place like it before, he wanted to give the ticket to the employer, then some homeless man entered and said “it’s mine I lost it on the street.” Everyone laughed at him and thought he was crazy. But Scott had enough with lying, and he finally said the truth and went out of the shop. He saw the homeless man wearing a gentle suit. Scott was surprised, the man looked at him and smiled then he said “I knew you were the perfect kid”. “What do you mean?” Scott asked him. The man said “you really thought I was a homeless person didn’t you?” “Yes” Scott said. The man said “Will you are wrong I’m Bill Anderson, people call me Billy and I don’t need the lottery ticket”. “Can I have it please” Scott asked. “That’s not the only thing you could have, I have billions of dollars I own the biggest company in the world. I’m going to give my money to someone when I die. I have no family so I wanted an honest kid like you to own the company after I pass away”. “You mean you want me to own your company when I grow up?!” Scott asked. “Yes” Billy said. “I’ll start by giving 500 million dollars is that enough?” Billy said. “That’s more than enough” Scott said anxiously “ok then” Billy said. Now Scott and his family have money to buy good food and to buy a big house. Now Scott’s life became just like heaven.
do you really think my idea is good im going to send what i wrote from the time machine one ( it is NOT edited)
The rest didn't fit
I think the story would be a little better if you said words like:_____ agreed. instead of _____ said yes.
I think some sentences could be ended sooner, instead of with a comma. With a comma it makes it seem like the sentence will never stop. ( as i'm reader it makes me think off it))
Was it a one shot? If it was add more details like:
Scott's family was so poor, his clothes were always stained ragged or filthy. Sometimes all at the same time!
other than that it's good.
Well I was 8 or 9 and my first language is Arabic , I hardly spoke English good back then but I'm going to fix it and fix the story I'm writing now, so anyone has any ideas of what people would build in the future?
hoover crafts, flying cars, a pillow where it collects your dreams and then you can play them on tv or a laptop/computer,
building that set up with a click of a button,
Amazing ! I need more!
shoes that can make you fly
I already made that ! But cooooooooooooool!
tv that will change channels if you will it.
Nice you are very creative Bouncing balls that turn to flying cars
clothes that will morphed to your body, no matter had size you are.
Cool !And
Invisible cream
And you can change your genes o what type you like : smart, attractive and so on
i'm mad at the weather, we were going to have our BIGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG BIG pig roast, with games, we were going to blow up a cake saped like Afghanistan for my sister, a army guys vs football guys tug a war match other a pool full of shaving cream, food, my friends were coming, we were going to do fireworks ( once we blew up a tent, and shot one into the basement..) people can sleep over in tents in the yard.. and it was going to be on the 6th, but we canclled it, and it's now going to be on the 20th.. oh and we can't go inside all day, we rent potty johns..
Wow that pretty much ruined your day but wht did you mean by blowing up Afghanistan cake
oops. my sister was deployed ( went to another county by the military branches. Hers by the National Guard) to Afghanistan, and we're making a cake out of whipped cream and frosting, and we're putting in a quarter stick, and my sister is going to blow it up..
She was there for a year last year, and got back this January, so it's half of her party...
I don't know why you think People in Afghanistan are Terrorists
? What's your problem? I didn't say that at all. It's to show what my sister has accomplished. And I really DON'T see YOU fighting for your country! So you DON'T get to JUDGE ME!!!
Anas wrote: "I don't know why you think People in Afghanistan are Terrorists"and I doubt you really know what It's like. So don't make a comment like that to me again.
I am really sorry I understood it ring I thought you meant it was shaped like Citizen of AfghanistanAnd I meant it to people in General that's one of my problems I don't think I just say
I am soooooooooo sorry hope you enjoy the party with your sister
it's fine. I just kind of flip at people who disrespect the army, the branches and what my sister does. It's like of a big pride in my family. It's shaped like the country. And some of the citizens there work ( they get payed I think) for the soldiers like they serve them food etc. I think in some places the soldiers aren't allowed to talk to them
No I just thought you meant Arab are terrorists because of the cake and that's a touchy subject since I ARAB AND MUSLIM . MANY people use it against me
no! not at all! That's horrible that people use your religion against you
EXACTLY THAT IS WHY IT'S A TOUCHY SUBJECT
No !How many times did we understand each other in the wrong way!
It's kind of funny when you think about it
I meant like the thing about my sister... not the religion thing.
You guys are really doing good in writing...imthinking of making a topic on this...may i?
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