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message 1: by Anna (new)

Anna  (anna46) I will be writing poetry ans stort or long storys, and stuff please do not comment bad things i try my best... i want to know what you think about my stuff, also i want to know what i can improve in eg. spelling, detail ect.

i will try updating as soon as i can.

thanx :P


message 2: by Anna (last edited Nov 01, 2012 07:19PM) (new)

Anna  (anna46) Run

Embrelin, is a strong girl who run's away from her family, after putting her ex boyfriend in the mentle hospital, she can't live with the haunting memorey's.
after her ex boyfriends ecsape, he haunts her down, what will happen when the memoreys and people she tries getting away from, now come back, and what will she do when she see's the person she loves the most, but doesn't ever wanna see again?

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 3: by Anna (last edited Sep 29, 2012 08:46AM) (new)

Anna  (anna46) Afraid (poem)

Everything lost in the moment, when i stare in the dark, in the cold, everything frozen in the between, never in anyday, have i been more fearful, but the most scarest thing, im not afraid, i've never been afraid, but at the same time, i am and always will be scared.....


message 4: by Anna (last edited Sep 29, 2012 08:54AM) (new)

Anna  (anna46) Everything (poem)

Wind blows, leaves scatter, the tears drop, the cold aching heart in my chest beats in rythems, i walk, and never had looked back, walking, walking, walking in till that stop, i stopped, in front of the deep water, and jump, there, i lose my breath in the matter of seconds, qeautions pilling in my head, i come back to the air and take a big breath, when i here screaming, crys, my crys, my loses, my life misakes, and my memoreys, my reasons, everything, they come back harder, and stronger, and i cant take it.


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