The Random Musings of Buffy

[Pirl]

Well, I came in because... well I thought you were a fellow Buffy fan. Have you watched the show? Or has the fact that your name is the same basically made the idea repulsive?

I'd like to here a bit about the book. And I'm sure it's awesome. All in all, goodluck!

I hate Saturdays. Nothing to do(cuz I'm Jewish and religious) and I can't see my friends(cuz they live in a different city). But I understand why you like them.

Anywho. Enjoy the group. I hope you update often!

[Pirl]

The film sucks.
The show's awesome.

Yes. Wednesday. My art lessons, Once Upon a Time, White Collar, and The Glades, all in one night? How much more awesome can there be?

[Pirl]

Don't be harsh. But don't let yourself slack off either.
Goodluck.

[Pirl]

Could you read my stuff now? Cuz I'd like to read your opinions before I get off and I probably won't be on before Thursday... Maybe even later.

[Pirl]

I don't think that every chapter should have action. Depending on the story, I usually don't have any action in the first two chapters except introduction. And in the middle, I find that I sometimes feel there's too much action - and not just in my stories, either. I think there should be a few moments in the book that are more relaxed, or the action is more subtle than a fight.

[Pirl]

It's not exactly exposition but it's just the introduction. I think an introduction to the world and characters - though subtle - is important in a story.
Good luck all in all.

[Pirl]

Hope you feel better soon!

[Pirl]

I hate onions too, it's quite alright.