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The Wicked Ones: Year One(Return of the Witches)

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『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ʜɪᴀᴛᴜs』 (wickling) | 16 comments ONLY Ep 1 will be based off of a actual Chamred Episode: http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Somethi...


Episode One: Something Wicca This Way Comes Back

It was the middle of Autumn, just when the leaves began to change their color and fall, the Sulligon's grandmother, Petra, had just passed.

Phoena was fixing the chandelier, her younger brother, Peter, had been out late tutoring and Phoena was getting sick of him comming late, they had got the family house in their grandmother's will. They had recently moved in and Phoena was the one doing all the unpacking. She heard a knock at the door, she smiled, "You're late, again," she yelled in the front door's direction. Her brother's voice replied, "The Bus was late, where do we keep the spare key?" Phoena laughed, shaking her head, "Forgot your's again? Under the mat. God, Peter, next time I'll leave you locked out!"

Peter unlocked the door, and walked in, he called out, "Phoena? Where are you?" She brushed a strand of dyed red hair away from her face, "In here, working on the chandelier." Peter threw his bag against the wall and muttered, "Sorry I'm late." Phoena steped down from the latter she was using, and smiled and hugged him. She said, nearly laughing, "What else is new? Peter, I would of been here to meet the electrician myself but you know I can't leave Elixir until six. I didn't even have time to change." Peter pulled out of her hug, "I just didn't realise how long I was ay Emmily's," he replied, he turned his head, and he broke into a grin and walked over to the dining room, and picked up something wooden.

It was a spirit board. Peter looked it over with a wide grin, "Oh my God, I don't believe it. Tell me that's not our old spirit board?" Phoena walked over and rested her arm on his shoulder, she nodded, smiling, "Yeah, I found it in the basement when I was looking for the circuit tester, I'm suprised we still had that." Peter turned it over and read a inscription, "'To my three Wicked Ones. May this give you the light to find the shadows. The power of three will set you free. Love, Mom.' We never did figure out what this inscription meant."

Phoena shrugged, and as she walked back over to the hallway where the chandelier was, "Well, maybe we should send it to Paisly. That girl is so in the dark, maybe a little light will help," her tone was bitter, full of resent. Peter detected anger in her voice and folded his arms, and said, much like a scolding mother would have, "You're always so hard on her!" Phoena whiped around, her amber eyes full of hate.

She growled saying, "PEETE, the girl has no vision, no sense of the future!" Peter sighed, irritated with his older sister's behavor. "Well, I, for one, really think Paisly's coming around." Phoena rolled her eyes and got on the ladder, she mubbled, "Well, as long as she doesn't come around here I guess that's good news."
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Police were at the scene of a murder, the woman was stabed and killed in the middle of what appeared to be a type of magic ritual. The woman as in her late 20's, blonde, 6ft 3". The victim was identified as Ms. Melonie Shear.

Jason, a detecive, is outside of the woman's house. "Well, it's about time," he says as his partner, Bane, walks over. Bane shruggs, "I got here as soon as I heard. Another dead female, right? Mid to late twenties?" Bane leaned against a car. Jason sighs, and replies, "I've been paging you for over an hour, Jessup, where have you been?" Bane smiled, "Checking out a lead, of course." Jason turned and looked at Bane with a confused expression. "What lead?" Bane sighed and looked at his shoes, "One that didn't go anywhere..." Jason crossed his arms, annoyed with his partner, "You're avoiding my question."

Bane looked up, an expression of embarrassment on his face, "Because you don't want to know that I went to an occult shop." Jason shook his head, and replied, "You hate me don't you? You wanna see me suffer." Bane frowned, and muttered, "I wanna solve these murders. Someone's after witches." "Women," Jason corrected.

Bane sighed and walked over to his car, "That woman up there, I bet she was killed with an athame." Jason laughed at how unpossible that sounded, "Wrong. Double edged steel knife!" Bane turned, and looked Jason right in the eye, his face was serious, "Right. That's an athame. It's a ceremonial tool. Witch's use them to direct energy."

Jason turned, uncomfurable under Bane's stair, "That woman didn't direct jack. She was stabbed. Plain and simple." He sounded as if he was trying to reassure himself.

Bane smiled, "Was she found in an altar?" Jason shuddered, "Y-Y-Yes. " Bane looked at the ground and said, slightly more confidently, "Were there carvings on that altar?"

Jason turned and looked at Bane, "Just do me a favour. Don't even follow a lead without checking with me first." His tone seemed as if he didn't like talking about magic and witches, as if he was scared of that kind of stuff. Bane turned and got into his car, "You wanna go to occult shops?"Jason turned, and muttered, "Get to work okay."

A blonde girl walked over to Jason, "Emmily Hearts, San Francisco Chronicle. You care to comment?" Jason sighed and looked away, "A woman was stabbed. Plain and simple." Emmily sighed,"Well, that's the third one in three weeks."


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Phoena is fiddling with the circuit tester. She ran her hand through her hair and sighed, "I don't get it! I have checked everything, there's no reason why the chandelier should not be working!" Peter stood there, shuffuling from foot to foot, "You know how we've been talking about what to do with the spare room? I think you're right, we do need a roommate." Phoena looked at him and nodded, "We can rent the room at a reduce rate in exchange for some help around the house." Peter looked down to avoid her gaze, "Paisly's good with a wrench......." Phoena frowned, confused, "Paisly lives in New York." Peter turned his head away from his older,stronger, wrath-filled sister, "Not anymore..." He flinched.

Phoena dropped the tester and looked at him with an expressionless face, "WHAT?" He gulped, "She left New York. She's moving back in with us." She flung er arms and marche away, "OH, ou have got to be kidding!" Peter stomped his foot and sulked, "Well, I could hardly say no. It's her house too. Grams left it to all three of us!" He sighed, knowing that wouldn't change her feelings. Phoena turned and sat in a chair, "Yeah, months ago and we haven't seen or spoken to her since." Peter sighed, and walked over to her,"Well, you haven't spoken to her." Phoena got up and walked away. Peter put his hand on her shoulder and Phoena shook it off, "No, I haven't. Look, maybe you've forgotten why I'm still mad at her!" She shook her head, her eyes wide, fire danced behind those walls of amber. Peter gulped and sadly smerked, "No, of course not but she had nowhere else to go. She lost her job, she's in debt!" Phoena snarled, "And this is news? How long have you known about this anyway?" Peter turned away from her and mumbled in a low tone, "A couple of days, maybe a week-or two." He looked down, and bit his lip as he heard her gasp, "UH, Thanks for sharing. When does she arrive?"

Before Peter could respond, there was the sound of a car door opening then closing. The front door swung open, and both Phoena and Peter walked over to find Paisly. "Surprise! I found the hide-a-key" Peter smerked and happily cried out, "Paisly, welcome home!" Paisly smiled widely, "Hello, Peter!" The two ran in for a hug as Phoena sighed with bitterness. Peter stood before Paisly, holding hands shaking with joy, "It's so good to see you. Isn't Phoena? " Phoena snarled yet again, "I'm speechless....."

Suddently a car horn beeped, causing Peter to jump. Paisly's eyes widened as she laughed, "Oops, forgot the cab." She began to go for the door. Peter shook his head and with a smiled, grabbed Phoena's purse off a tabel, "I'll get it." Phoena stood there in confusion, "Peter, that's my purse." Peter turned and smerked, "Thanks. I'll pay you back." Phoena and Paisly stood there, infornt of eachother. Phoena looked down at Paisly's small amount of bags. "Is that all that you brought?"Paisly smerked and laughed, "That's all that I own and a bike. Look, I know that you don't want me here ..."

Phoena cut her off and growled, "We're not selling Grams' house" Paisly gasped and stepped back, looking offended, "Is that why you think I came back?" Phoena frowned, "Look, the only reason Piper and I gave up our apartment and moved back here because this house has been in our family for generations." Paisly looked down, "Oh, please. No history lesson needed. I grew up here too. So can we talk about what's really bothering you?" Phoena turned away from her, "No, I'm still furious with you." Paisly sighed, "So, you'd rather have a tense reunion filled with boring chitchat and unimportant small talk?" Phoena mummbled, "No, but otherwise we won't have anything to talk about....." Her voice trailed off. Paisly, angery, marched infront of Phoena, "I NEVER touched Mark."

Phoena laughed, "Woah." Paisly growled, "I know you think otherwise because that's what that jerk told you..." Before Phoena could respond, Peter walks back in. Peter, having an underused calling for cooking, said, "Hey, I have a great idea. Why don't I make a fabulous reunion dinner!" The sisters parted, "I'm not hungry," Phoena said, Paisly mummbled, "I ate on the bus." Peter sighed, "Okay, we'll try the group hug later......No..no, no, we're having this dinner! I bought the ingredients already, now you two get sit down!"

Dinner consisted of mash potatoes, steak and salad, sparkling cider and fondue strawberries. Phoena chewed half heartedly on the steak while Paisly pecked at her salad, avoiding eye contact. After a while, Phoena stood up, "May I be excused? No, whatever, I'm through." She walked swiftly out of the dinning room. Paisly finaly looked up, and put down her fork. "Me too, I'm not hungery." She rose up and walked to her room. Peter sighed and threw down his napkin, "Another meal gone to waste."


message 3: by 『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ʜɪᴀᴛᴜs』 (last edited Sep 21, 2012 05:18PM) (new)

『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ʜɪᴀᴛᴜs』 (wickling) | 16 comments Name: Alexander Abernathy
(view spoiler)

Age:looks 15, unsure of actual age

Gender: male

Crush: Chris Halliwell(Bisexual)

What Are You?:Darklighter-Whitelighter hybrid

Appearance: A bit tan, blonde, bright blue eyes that seem to glow, winning smile, dimples, always in shorts and often with a black beanie.

http://favim.com/image/134708/

teen blonde boy Pictures, Images and Photos (view spoiler)


Side: depends on what going on.

Personality: Daring, talks sexual, flirty, sporty, artistic, horny, playful, lustful, mostly in a good mood, can be shy and not social at times, forthright about his sexuality and hates when people talk bad about his sexuality.

Powers: Basic whitelighter and darklighter powers.

Omnilingualism http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Omnilin...

Apportation http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Apporta...

Black Orbing http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Black_O...

Orbing http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Orbing

Telekinetic Orbing http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Telekin...

Orb Shield http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Orb_Shield

Touch of Death http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Touch_o...



Kiss of Death- Variation of his Touch of Death
http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/The_Kis...

Healing Touch http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Healing

Regeneration http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Regener...

Hovering http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Hovering http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Hoverin...

Learning Sensing http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Sensing

Luring http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Luring

Empathy/Reverse Empathy- Reverse Empathy is the ability to make others feel your emotions http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Empathy

Relationship identification- Can see romantic emotions of people, a variation of his empathy, however, its mostly for romantic feelings people have TOWARD HIM

Photokinesis http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Photoki...

Combustive Orbing http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Combust...

Remote Orbing http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Remote_...



Teleportation Manipulation http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Telepor...

Projectile Orbs
Appears as


Glamouring
http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Glamouring

(view spoiler)


History:The blastphemous product of an unnamed Whitelighter and an unnamed Darklighter. Cute, sexy, adorable, yummy, attractive, handsome, beautiful, he has been called them all. He's good looking and he knows it, and will use it to his advantage.

Tattoos: on his right leg, left side: http://notsalony.deviantart.com/art/T...

Other:Plays guitar and sings. A jealous demon stole his voice, whent to the Charmed one's for help, his first charges were/are the "Wicked Ones"~possible new Charmed Ones of their generation.

His names mean:
Alexander= Protector of Mankind

Alexandria= Defender of Mankind

Alexandra= Helper of Mankind

Alexia=

Alexa= Protector of Mankind

Alexis= Protector of Mankind

Alex= Protector of Mankind

Alec= Protector of Men

Alexi= Protector of Mankind

Alexson= Protecor of Man(Called this by Prue)




message 4: by 『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ʜɪᴀᴛᴜs』 (last edited Sep 21, 2012 05:26PM) (new)

『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ʜɪᴀᴛᴜs』 (wickling) | 16 comments Name: Pheona Sulligon
Age: 18
Gender: female
Crush: open?
What Are You?: Witch
Appearance: Natural Carmel hair
red hair Pictures, Images and Photos


Eyes
Eyes of the twilight Pictures, Images and Photos

Side: Good
Personality: Conroling, protective, much like Prue, keeping an eye out for her siblings.
Powers: (SUGGEST, Offensive power) Advanced Telekinesis http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Telekin...
Other: The Eldest Wicked One. Pheona has a passion similiar to Pipers, she loves baking, making sweets, pies, cookies, but is also a good waitress, she is currently working as a bartender and has MAD cocktailing skills. She is also a barista

Name: Peter Sulligon
Age:15 or 16 or 17
Gender: male
Crush: open
What Are You?: witch
Appearance:
Blonde Male Model Pictures, Images and Photos
Side: Good
Personality: Warm, kind, a passionate gamer
Powers: (SUGGEST Defensive Power)
Technopathy http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Technop...

Projection http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Projection

Tattoos:
blonde hair Pictures, Images and Photos
Other: One of the Wicked Ones(the 'next charmed ones')

Name: Paisly Sulligon
Age: 13 or 14 or 15
Gender:female
Crush: open
What Are You?:Witch
Appearance: Hair color blonde/brown
strawberry blonde Pictures, Images and Photos
Gossip Girl Pictures, Images and Photos

blonde hairrr
Side: Good
Personality: Passionate, funny, Gets all the boys, much like young Phoebe.
Powers: (SUGGEST, not used for fighting, like empathy or premontion, or maybe a defensive or offesnive power)

Premonition http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Premoni...

Empathy http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Empathy

Clairaudience http://charmed.wikia.com/wiki/Clairau...
Other:Youngest Wicked One


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Geneva (FireDragon1) | 108 comments interesting....


『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ʜɪᴀᴛᴜs』 (wickling) | 16 comments Those are the main characters introduced so far, if I were you, I would not veiw the first episode page on the link, for spoilers of the other characters


『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ʜɪᴀᴛᴜs』 (wickling) | 16 comments Geneva wrote: "interesting...."

Thanks


『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ʜɪᴀᴛᴜs』 (wickling) | 16 comments So it will follow the first Episode script, basicaly, but I need help on how to finish it


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