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FOUND: Do dated ideas hurt your enjoyment of the story?

I always find it odd that a readership which supposedly likes imaginative, speculative fiction sometimes seems so conservative that it finds itself unable to deal with technology that's not like what we have. Face it, the stuff being written about today will sound silly and dated in 50 years. Hell, look at Gibson's Neuromancer... fencing "3 megabytes of hot RAM..?" . Please, I transfer 10,000 times that in a month all around the world. But it doesn't stop me from loving that novel.
I think if readers can stretch their imaginations to encompass odd and improbable things that don't exist we should also be able to deal with archaic tech in a novel.


I rather like the throwback into a time in which people thought that 10 years into the future they would drive nuclear-powered cars or use atomic vacuum cleaners.

Asimov gives us atomic this and space that. It's silly fantastic futurism rather real imaginative thought. For a space empire that was supposed to have lasted for tens of thousands of years, I'd think technology would have advanced past simple atomic weapons or ridiculously 20th Century Western cultural norms.
Asimov's sin is a failure of imagination and frankly of intellect and reason.


Asimov gives ..."
"Verne took the name "Nautilus" from one of the earliest successful submarines, built in 1800 by Robert Fulton."
H. G. Wells coined the term "time machine", but he wasn't the first to use the concept of time travel in fiction. Just one example: A Christmas Carol

Asimov gives us ..."
Psychohistory. That's the science fictional concept at the heart of the series, not space ships or ray-guns, and to pretend it's not worthy of being called SF when you accept time machines is just absurd.
David wrote: "I've always thought of the dated technology as being because the galaxy had fallen into relative barbarism. It's pretty clear that no one outside the Foundation truly understood much of anything ab..."
Which doesn't make a lot of sense. The planets in the Anacreon region are still using internal combustion engines. Even if we assume they've fallen back to the level of the most primitive mass-produced automobiles, that tech level is only slightly less advanced than what's necessary for a nuclear reactor.





Well, does FTL bother you? Faster than light travel isn't merely implausible it's impossible by everything we know. Yet SF fans seem to have no issue with it. How about the Singularity? It's very implausible that we'll ever be able to upload an accurate copy of our minds to some cloud... yet people consume that stuff. I could make a good argument that novels which use either concept are fantasy, not SF since they rely on things that can't happen in the real world... Hell, look at Peter Hamilton's 'Dreaming Void' for a novel accepted as SF that has 'technology' based on pure handwavium. Frankly, if plausibility (never mind possibility) is the yardstick for what's SF then a lot of SF isn't... it's fantasy in disguise.
Lepton claims Asimov suffered a failure of imagination. I'm wondering if it's the readers instead.


Reading a SF novel from the '50s is an interesting look into a society that itself was looking into a future that we live in today.

Huh? Nothing in any of the Foundation books ever suggests that history has a direction as Marxism requires -- the fact that the story isn't set in an anarcho-socialist utopia in fact contradicts Marx.
The idea that sociology is a hard science that, with large enough groups of people, can be used to accurately predict the future is as science fiction as it gets -- far more so than Wells' "Here's a magic time machine. Isn't it cool? Let me use it to construct a very literal parable about Marxism" novel.

I like that he leaves some detail out because I have an imagination. When I read this 15 years ago, I pictured things differently than I do now in the book. That is why I don't like Stephen King. I feel like he is too descriptive and leaves nothing for my imagination. It's all his imagination.

Now to the topic at hand. Does a dated idea destroy make me enjoy the story less? Often it does, but not in this case. Many people are talking about the unambitious tech of Foundation, but tech should never be the center of a science fiction story in my opinion. Science fiction should just be a series of "what if?" questions extrapolated out to make a world, with interesting characters to act in it. A great Sci-Fi author will use this to bend or twist open a mind to possibilities.
The only thing that pulled me out of the story was the newspapers and all the smoking. If Asimov in later editions pulled the smoking references, and simply removed the word "paper" all the way through the work, it would've been so much better.

Dated ideas don't bother me at all, I actually kind of like seeing how people years ago thought the future would work out. Like how in old sci-fi shows there are tape decks everywhere, and everyone wheres a string vest (or was that just Space:1999)

Dated ideas don't bother me at all, I ..."
I tried to think of it that way John, but I just couldn't imagine a future where lighting something on fire was an acceptable means of social rumination. Even now the only social ruminant that seems even marginally acceptable is coffee, and that is quickly moving into the background as well.

With phsycohistory, I would need computational horsepower to sell the idea properly and possibly less ambitious probability percentages. But when Seldon pulls out his calculator and goes "See!" and Dornick nods like it all makes sense - epic fail.

The only thing that threw me was the frequent mentions of "Vegan tabacco." Took me ages to figure out he meant tabacco from the star system Vega, and not tabacco free of animal byproducts.

Really? Hmm... What do you think someone from the 19th century would say if you wrote a story set in the early 21st century and people were routinely pulling out small handheld devices that did amazingly powerful computations?
So why is it so far fetched to have Seldon carry a device that could have immense computing power but that he calls a 'calculator'?

Really? Hmm... What do you think someone from the 19th century wo..."
That's my point. I could go with superior unexplained technology to overcome the implausible. But that's not what's happening in that scene. The device Seldon pulls out is just a prop. It is not referred to as the advanced technology that makes psychohistory possible. Its just there as an aid to Seldon's own mental calculations.


I was somewhat disturbed that there are virtually no women in the entire book. There's the one near the end who likes baubles, and I can't think of another who had any lines. When anyone mentioned women, it is in terms of their role in the kitchen or as mothers.
That is somewhat interesting, just to see 1950s mores in action, but I am going to need a pretty big spacer before I read another book like this.


Why not? Societies change, and tens of thousands of years is a long time for change -- more than all of recorded history so far. I see no reason to believe that "progress" shall always continue in the same direction.

Rik wrote: "One of the things I enjoyed about the Foundation series was that Asimov never worried about how the sci fi gadgets worked. He just called it atomic this or nuclear that and moved on with the meat ..."
I tend to agree. And I have no problem with any of the technology or hand held atomic pistols etc. I'm good with it. But my problem with Seldon's Hand held device, isn't the device itself or that it wasn't powerful enough - it just didn't make any sense to be using it to do pshycohistory. I would have been more willing to suspend disbelief if it wasn't mentioned at all. Then I could at least pretend they were collecting collating and computing data by some means that did make sense. Except the premise of the story has psychohistory being in the hands of a single individual with the math - not advanced technology.
Anyway, I'm making a bigger deal out of that than I actually care about. My real problem is I just find the story bland. I can overlook the inconsistencies if I can connect with the characters and the plot can keep my attention.
I liked some of the later stories better ie the showdown between Hardin and Wienis. And the Trader story with the Transmuter. I thought they were ok as short stories as they involved a battle of wits that lent themselves to Asimov's dialogue. But I'm reading Abercrombie at the moment and cough cough The Hunger Games. Asimov just can't compete with what's out there at the moment - well not for my attention anyway.

The biggest offender, I feel, of the early days is the Tom Swift Jr. series. I feel they are only loosely based in science. This holds true to the point in one book the boy scientist invents a matter making machine. These stories were written to spark imagination which they did well.

The 1950s was not a very happy time, really. They were only just learning how crazy Hitler and Stalin were and how they had used technology to do truly barbarous things. Added to that was the shock of "the bomb." The conflict with the Soviet Union and an on-going fear of "the red threat" supposedly posed by enemy agents secreted throughout the US made the crazy club of politics just as goofy then as now. (My favorite story from the time was an election where one politician was behind in the polls on the eve of the election so he called a press conference and announced that he had secret information that his opponent, though believed to be a church-goer and a loyal American, was in fact discovered to be a philanthropist and a known thespian; it turned the election around.)
There was a movement on the college campuses to make politics rational. It was proposed that political leaders should take a competency test for the office they were running for and needed to have some background in science.
I don't know where Azamov stood in that movement but in the Foundation he postulates a world where political decisions could be made on a mathematically objective basis. He contrasts the Foundation and its leaders with the rough-and-ready politicians like those in the real world that had recently turned the world of 1940s and 1950s inside out.
Anyway, maybe it's my age, remembering how it was, but I've always enjoyed reading it.

Not sure I agree with your reading of Marx, but let's just say psychohistory has a Hegelian undertone, then. Similar process without the added materialism or utopianism.

Well, there's a good reason to use paper, if you had the stated goal of publishing an Encyclopedia of cultural and technical knowledge that was intended to survive societal decline and an extended period of barbarism: durability.
Why would you produce a digital-only document when it's extremely likely the infrastructure required to maintain such a resource won't survive the collapse of civilization? A paper book requires only two things to access its contents: i) literacy, and ii) light. And to preserve it requires (depending on the materials) vigilance in preventing fires and water damage in the storage area--a recommended approach towards any building regardless of purpose--or a caste of scribes to continually make copies of the important documents. Much easier to maintain in the collapse of industrial civilization than all the engineers and technicians and electricians and coders you'll need, and the factory workers to assemble computer components, and the miners to extract the rare earths and heavy metals and other materials electronics are made from, and the education system that trains all these people.
In the case of the "newspapers", I just see that as a holdover term. I haven't read a physical newspaper in a few years now, but I read "the papers" all the time. Just like some computer keyboards still have a "Return" key even though there's no longer a carriage to return to the start position. Or how we still "dial" a telephone number even though I personally haven't used a rotary dial telephone in almost two decades.

Honestly, technology does not make a book science fiction. If that were true, then James Bond would be science fiction. I feel like this is going to be a thin-line subjectively for others since we all have our own opinions of what we enjoy and would consider true science fiction. I had a similar issue with the movie Avatar because it just seemed Pagan themed other than the vessels used, so I just didn't feel the science fiction vibe even though others heralded it as such. It's going to be the reader's opinion. Either way, the book has still been enjoyable thus far whether called sci-fi or not, especially considering it was published separately.

You err, though, in interpreting 'calculator' to mean what we think of as a calculator. What we think of when we say 'calculator' didn't exist when Foundation was written.
Asimov simply posited a handheld device that helped with Seldon's mental calculations - I don't remember it being described in any detail. It's your assumption that it was closer to our concept of a calculator vs an advanced hand held computer.
The "calculator" part didn't jump out at me as much as the stuff I mentioned.
I guess I just expected having a powerful portable computer to do calculations with would be normal 15,000 years in the future.
Hell look at what our cell phones do now, and those didn't even exist in any form when this book was written.
@Joe That's a good point about making a physical copy. I never really thought of it that way.
Interesting to see all the different viewpoints on this. I'd be curious to do some kind of graph with regards to the 3 or 4 opinions with respect to age of the poster to see if there is any kind of correlation.
I read Neuromancer the first time in the mid-90s before the Matrix came out and when the internet was still in its infancy. I was never really bothered by the level of technology.
I re-read it a year or two ago after friends reading it for the first time complained about how dated it was, and found myself agreeing with them. I don't think I enjoyed it as much the second time around.
I envy those who read Foundation closer to it's publication date, that's an experience I'll never have to get a true feeling for the book.
I guess I just expected having a powerful portable computer to do calculations with would be normal 15,000 years in the future.
Hell look at what our cell phones do now, and those didn't even exist in any form when this book was written.
@Joe That's a good point about making a physical copy. I never really thought of it that way.
Interesting to see all the different viewpoints on this. I'd be curious to do some kind of graph with regards to the 3 or 4 opinions with respect to age of the poster to see if there is any kind of correlation.
I read Neuromancer the first time in the mid-90s before the Matrix came out and when the internet was still in its infancy. I was never really bothered by the level of technology.
I re-read it a year or two ago after friends reading it for the first time complained about how dated it was, and found myself agreeing with them. I don't think I enjoyed it as much the second time around.
I envy those who read Foundation closer to it's publication date, that's an experience I'll never have to get a true feeling for the book.


Why not? Societies change,..."
That is a good point, but ingesting smoke and allowing it to pour out of various orifices, especially in space ships and stations, where oxygen has to be recycled or manufactured just seems silly, even without the harmful health effects of incendiary relaxation.
Also, Lighting a cigar or a cigarette is too explicitly mentioned through the book, it's like the plot happens between the smoke breaks. I would rather he at least varied it, as in:
"Mallow picked his nose and began to speak."
"Seldon adjusted his underwear and said,"
"The mayor stuck his hands into his armpits and sniffed his fingers, then spoke"
It seemed the only preemptive action to speaking is lighting or smoking something.

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I think if I ever write Sci-Fi, I will try to use a media neutral term for information distribution. It's not a big deal, as I said, but it's something I noticed on this reading of the book.

But in 20 years, our kids are going to be asking "Handhelds? How would a society that's colonized the asteroid belt not have neural implants yet??"

B..."
Why not call any device that media is seen on a "viewer" or Display. Such as:
"Gork glanced at his display, and noticed that his brother, Krog, had tried to contact him while he slept. He listened to the message as he ate his toes for breakfast. "
This could be anything from a tablet to a screen on the wall, to an eye lens implant. Easy and always current. Form factor should only be mentioned in a story when it is essential to a plot. Asimov is by no means the worst offender when it comes to this. Just ignore what the tech looks like if it isn't essential to the plot. Tell me what it does, and I'm good.


That would be ok for science fiction that is purely about ideas (like The Left Hand of Darkness or Lord of Light). There is a lot of fun in reading about how an author imagines the future technology to be.
The communicators in Star Trek: The Original Series look dated now but they inspired the first mobile phones.
"Dr. Martin Cooper, inventor of the first handheld mobile phone, credits the TOS communicator as being his inspiration for the technology."
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Communic...

That would be ok for science fiction that is purely about ideas (like The Left Hand of Darkness or Babel-17). T..."
I can see your point, as I said though, if it isn't essential to the plot ie. the captain has to be able to modify or drop his communicator to create tension or get out of a jam, describing it is unnecessary. Or why not excuse your form factor entirely and say something like:
"The Captain's communicator was one of the current models, which suffered from a popular resurgence of physical knobs, switches, and even a rotary dial. All contained on a 2"x5" sheet of material made to look like worn brass."


My VHF and cassette tapes are worn out, and I do not own anything which can play them.
DVD's have a data storage shelf life of 10 to 15 years before they start to decay.
My SD cards no longer have slots to use on modern laptops and PCs
My USB stick is worthless on my iPad
And does anyone really expect their Google Doc/Drop Box accounts to be around in 20 years ?
As for smoking. Throw in the "tobacco of the future no longer causes cancer" argument (via vaccinations or new tobacco breeds).
Also remember smoking world wide is still very common. It's in heavily legislated countries like America where you see a decline

I have a different problem with some older books at times. Sometimes a book is so influential that down the line we read a lot of books that use that as their inspiration and then we go back to this seminal work and it seems, well, done to death. Like Capote's In Cold Blood didn't seem that radical for me when I finally got around to it because I'd read so many things like it, even though I know it was a radical departure for the time and was the first or at least most well-known of it's kind back then. Same thing with movies/TV shows that use the Rashomon idea of differing perspectives on the same event. Kurusawa was first, but it's been so overdone that if you see it now it doesn't seem that new of an idea.

My VHF and cassette tapes are worn out, and I do not own anything which can play them.
DVD's have a data ..."
I think that cloud computing probably has a 50 year future in one form or another. I am not talking about the archiving of the encyclopedia though, and never was. I was questioning two points that pulled me out of the story, newspapers on Terminus and smoking
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Again, even putting health aside, you have to deal with the properties of something being burnt in an enclosed environment. This would require a planet strapped of resources to build otherwise unnecessary scrubbers into ships, houses, and especially public buildings. Given the number of main characters who light up and take a drag before saying anything at all, either you have scrubbers or live in a fog that hides all 1 foot in front of you.

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I for one enjoyed the book (I read it in less than 2 days), but to me it was apparent the age of the book based on some of the underlying technology and day-to-day actions of the characters.
In particular the fact that they seemed to making a paper encyclopedia rather than digital (although this wasn't explicit).
There seemed to be no notion of an internet (which is understandable given state of computers at the time) especially where a character visiting the encyclopedia office ask for a copy of a particular book to be "transcribed for him".
Another major sign is the prevalence of nuclear power/weapons. Man is pretty innovative, and I doubt over 15,000 years of humanity hasn't led to even more powerful deadly/weapons or new/improved power sources.
Now there was improvements to the size of devices, so I tend to give this a bit more of a pass.
Some minor ones were things like newspapers (google reader is my newspaper), or smoking tobacco (I think?) I'm not 100% if the cigars some of the characters smoked were meant to be tobacco or some other (possibly healthier) substance?
This is also debatable, because people are well aware of the dangers of smoking, drinking, etc and still do it. Most vices in moderation can be fine anyways.
What about you? Were there things that jumped out at you? Did it hurt your enjoyment of the book?