Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
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The two girls opened up their candy, and let the crinkling of the wrappers fill the compartment. The bench's cushions were soft and red, and Rose tucked her feet up underneath her, and leaned her head against the window, feeling it vibrate beneath her. She already missed her mum and dad.
Lily glanced over at me, opening her Bertie Bott's. "Would you care for a bean?" she asked tentatively, offering me one. "I do believe that it is toffee..."
"Thank you!" I said. ((guys, it's from Rose's view)) I took it thinking that toffe wouldn't be so bad, but it turns out it was barf. "Ugh!" I said as i took a bite from my frog, hoping to clear away the taste.
"Oops." Lily grinned. She had known it wasn't toffee!
She was starting to turn into her mischievous older brothers.
((the coins are called galleons. Seventeen sickles to a galleon, and 29Knits to a sickle. Oh and Lilly's 2 years younger than Rose. See, Lilly's can't go to Hogwarts right now she's to young. Heres how it goes...First Harry and Ginny have their first kid: James. A year later Ginny gives birth to Albus, while around the same time Hermione gives birth to Ron and her's first child Rose. Two years later Finny gives birth to Lilly also around the same time Hermione gives birth to Hugo. Rose is best friends with Albus...they both start school at the same time while James is now a second year. Two years later both Lilly and Hugo will start going to Hogwarts.
Darn you. You are even geekier than I am!!! That's not fair. ;) thank you for RUINING THIS!!
Gaby wrote: "((the coins are called galleons. Seventeen sickles to a galleon, and 29Knits to a sickle. Oh and Lilly's 2 years younger than Rose. See, Lilly's can't go to Hogwarts right now she's to young. ..."
( Cool! I needed that information for my story:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
You are so incredibly smart!
Wow I'm impressed Weiting! Really good with what ive read so far, though just on minor problem...tell u later! Oh and thanks on you complementing me! Trust for a 13 year old who read the series last year in August backwards and watched the movies, I kno quite a bit... I'm such a crazy fanatic...in also into the hunger games. I'm rereadimg the HP series so I can also work on my story...in May I started "Albus Potter: The new beginning". Though I lost my documents when our computer crashed so I'm starting all over again. *sigh*. I do a lot of research for this book. I've also started to write this new book called Cloned. Trust me...I have to do a lot of research for that one! U probaly now think I'm a crazy 13 year old girl who likes to read and write, and I doesn't help that I'm in Honors class at school. Say what u want but oblige you've got to be smart to get a scholarship to a good college when the economy's so bad...I really do talk too much...imma send u a friend request.
Gaby, it's okay, I'm an eleven year old who loves to read and write and is in honors classes, it's okay ;)
Wow, I didn't get into honors until 7th grade, last year...it's hard; and.....,..OMG you r like on!!!!!! cacool!
I'm @ the airport...going home from CA! Got school starting Monday.
Mine starts then too!!!
Cool...what state do u live in? Mine's NC
Oh ya...shoot imma not gettin a seat...all full...WHY CAN'T I GET A FLIGHT...STILL in CA...I was supposed to leave Monday, but since I fly for free since my dad works at the airport I'm standby which means I get whatever seats r left over.....yup
Acually I did get a seat and I wish I would have known earlier that u can get 15 minutes free wifi...
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Here's some background: they are friends, the same age, and THIS IS FROM ROSE'S VIEW
I'll start:
The train was beginning to move.
"Goodbye!" I cried as i waved to Mum and Dad. They stood their in the thick coats, watching me and looking sad but happy at the same time. they waved and waved and i waved back until they were just specks in the distance behind us.
"Honestly, Rose, it's not like you'll never see them again. We're all going home at Christmas," my best friend, Lily, said, trying to comfort me. She adjusted to situations much quicker than I. it was one of the things i admired most about her.
She moved closer to me and we stared out the window at the hills, parks, trees, towns, and mansions we passed.
"Anything from the trolley, dears?" said a plump woman with a white cap. She had opened the door to our compartment.
the woman wore a long gray dress that did little to hide her unnatractive bulges. her white apron was tied tightly around her middle. Her hat was slightly askew.
"I'll have some Bertie Bott's please," said Lily.
"I'll have a chocolate frog, ma'am," i said.
She gave us our candy, we paid her with coins, and she headed off down the aisle. The compartment door slammed....
(Guys please write and keep it REALISTIC, HOGWARTS-LIKE AND REALLY FUN! GOOD LUCK! :))