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Gabrielle Hey guys let's write a story about Rose Weasley and Lily Potter, okay?
Here's some background: they are friends, the same age, and THIS IS FROM ROSE'S VIEW

I'll start:
The train was beginning to move.
"Goodbye!" I cried as i waved to Mum and Dad. They stood their in the thick coats, watching me and looking sad but happy at the same time. they waved and waved and i waved back until they were just specks in the distance behind us.
"Honestly, Rose, it's not like you'll never see them again. We're all going home at Christmas," my best friend, Lily, said, trying to comfort me. She adjusted to situations much quicker than I. it was one of the things i admired most about her.
She moved closer to me and we stared out the window at the hills, parks, trees, towns, and mansions we passed.
"Anything from the trolley, dears?" said a plump woman with a white cap. She had opened the door to our compartment.
the woman wore a long gray dress that did little to hide her unnatractive bulges. her white apron was tied tightly around her middle. Her hat was slightly askew.
"I'll have some Bertie Bott's please," said Lily.
"I'll have a chocolate frog, ma'am," i said.
She gave us our candy, we paid her with coins, and she headed off down the aisle. The compartment door slammed....

(Guys please write and keep it REALISTIC, HOGWARTS-LIKE AND REALLY FUN! GOOD LUCK! :))


Cookie Lily jumped up and grabbed her trunk from the luggage rack, and began opening it.
"What are you looking for, Lily?"
"Come and look over here!" I walked over to her side of the compartment, and peered over.
"Wow!Is that a limited edition Every Flavour Diseased Nougat from Uncle George's store!"
"Yup. Aren't you excited!"
"Um, who's that for? Oh, I know. Scorpius Malfoy," I whispered to Lily. Lily winked at me.
"You'll give him the antidote, right? Or James said..."
"Yeah. I don't want him to go to the hospital wing." Lily closed her trunk and I helped her heave it back onto the luggage rack. The minutes passed by quickly, as we ate our candy and I asked Lily about what James had said about Hogwarts.


Elizabeth Day (Wait, but if Lily is at Hogwarts that means that Rose is thirteen. Ah, well, I'll keep writing.)

"Ah, a bunch of stuff, but judging from the things you've told me it's not true," said Lily. "They don't make you tame any dragons, do you? That's what he said."
"No, don't be rediculous. James is always trying to trick us," I laugh.


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