Writing Passionates discussion

41 views

Comments Showing 1-50 of 50 (50 new)    post a comment »
dateDown arrow    newest »

message 1: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1074 comments Situation Central

a person is to write a situation or character overveiw of their lives without explaining anything else about them

ex: Everything was broken. Broken, broken, broken my phone, my car, my arms, my neck, my hair, my life, my camera. Everything!

then the person below them is supposed to tell who they think the character is

Species
Age
Gender
Name
Lifestyle

anything you can possubly think of from reading that post then post their own.


message 2: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1074 comments I'm going to use my example to start with

Everything was broken. Broken, broken, broken my phone, my car, my arms, my neck, my hair, my life, my camera. Everything!


message 3: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller Species: human
Age: ???????
Gender: Female (most guys don't have cameras)
Name: ????????????
Lifestyle: Reckless


message 4: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
I hate dying. I really do. I've died six effing times! And each time was painful. The only thing that I can hope for is actually coming back nine times. I'll be worried when I reach my ninth life though. Because then I might die for real.


message 5: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Species: Cat
Age: On their seventh life.
Gender: She-cat (I dunno why, it just feels like it)
Name: Muffins! :D
Lifestyle: A big cat in the wild


message 6: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
It hurts. My fingers, my head, my brain, my legs. A dull pounding is reverberating through my mind, my body. I hate numbers.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Species: Human
Age: Early teens (i dont know why)
Gender: Female
Name: Ashlee
Lifestyle: Runaway (although idk about the numbers part... maybe someone saw her and called the police (aka numbers))


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Im stuck in this cage, with only some stupid "grain mix" once a day. and fresh water sometimes. everyonce a nd a while some big ugly monster (i think they are called humans) will poke its head over and look at me.


message 9: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Species: Hamster
Age: 1 year old
Gender: Male
Name: Jumper
Lifestyle: Domestic pet in a human family's house


message 10: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
♥Rachel♥ DAVID ARCHULETA IS COMING TO MY CITY wrote: "Species: Human
Age: Early teens (i dont know why)
Gender: Female
Name: Ashlee
Lifestyle: Runaway (although idk about the numbers part... maybe someone saw her and called the police (aka numbers))"


((Oh. I was thinking of how I feel whenever I do a math test, but ah well...that works too. Lol :D))




message 11: by Margaret (last edited Feb 05, 2009 06:00PM) (new)

Margaret | 49 comments Okay, I'll do one of these thingies...

You can't go without some things in this dingy dust ball we call earth. Among these are life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness. Or in my case, lies, larceny, and pursuit by the fuzz.


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Sella wrote: "♥Rachel♥ DAVID ARCHULETA IS COMING TO MY CITY wrote: "Species: Human
Age: Early teens (i dont know why)
Gender: Female
Name: Ashlee
Lifestyle: Runaway (although idk about the numbers part... maybe..."



oh okay... haha



message 13: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) Uh...

Species: Human
Age:40+
Gender: Male
Name: Albert
Lifestyle: Hobo


Sorry, just a feeling.

The world could've been mine. All mine. But then he had to go and ruin it. Stupid heroes.


Jessica ❀Sparky❀ | 6 comments Species: Supervillain/Mutated human
Age: 34 3/4
Gender: Male
Name: Doom (Darwin Oswald Malcoms LOL!)
Lifestyle: Take-over-the-world maniac *is hyper*

Sorry... That was weird.

Run. My long legs are almost and blur, my heart is pounding, but I can't get away. Right when I think I'll collapse, I hit a rock wall, and I'm trapped. The thing points it's stick at me, and I take my last breath.


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

Species: Cheeta
Age:??
Gender: Femail (idk why)
Name: doesnt have one (wild)
Lifestyle:..idk in the paragraph its being hunted....



Breathe. Breathe. I peek past the curtin, and see each row slowly filling up. Full house. Breathe. Breathe. I strap on my toe shoes and prepare to head onto the stage


message 16: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Species:Human
Age:16
Gender:Female
Name:Alyssa
Lifestyle:Actress-to-be, but a fairly normal suburbia teenage life.


message 17: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) The water filled with the blood spilling from his wound, and he had one more sadistic smile before turning to me.
"Do it. one less scumbag on earth." He said, handing me the gun.
I looked at the man, writhing in pain on the road, already crumbling from the inside out.
People walked by, not even noticing his distress.
"I...I can't." I said, my eyes filling with tears. The man looked grateful for a moment, but his expression turned to horror when a little boy came running out.
"Papa!" He called in a polish accent.
"No, no, go back to the car!" He shouted, but it was too late.
My best friend had already shot the toddler dead.


message 18: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Species:Human
Age:22
Gender:Male
Name:Emilio
Lifestyle:A sidekick to his friend, but with a good heart. The only reason that he even follows his best friend around (even after said friend went crazy because his parents/girlfriend were/was killed.) is because he is determined to keep his friend in check and from killing people.
He lives in the crowded city, most of the time on the streets. He does occasionally visit other places, like his childhood home, where his mother still lives, or his girlfriend's house. He's one of those two places, on the street with his friend, or at work.


message 19: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
(sorry, i can't think of a paragraph to post right now. i can post something later if somebody else hasn't already.)


message 20: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) Wow, I thought his friend was a nazi. :D But yours sounds cool too.


Jessica ❀Sparky❀ | 6 comments (Oh my gosh Riley, that was depressing! Especially for those of us who have toddler-sized little brothers! You're fired. ))


message 22: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
I detest birds. I really do. You could just be walking along a road, and all of a sudden, PLOP! There's bird sh** on your head. It seems that it's all that they do, those birds. I've gotten hit more times than I can count.


message 23: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments LOL, Roni!


message 24: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
That was my paragraph. :D


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

haha :D even funnier


message 26: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Yeah, I've never actually been pooped on by a bird. Anybody want to do the character?


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

Species:Human
Age:14
Gender:female
Name:Emily
Lifestyle: depressed, emo teenager.


message 28: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller I glared at the question on the board. You are kidding me. Ms. Evans must really be running low on ideas. How did that have anything to do with Literature, anyway?

Make a list of 5 things that you want to happen, and see in one month how many of you're things have come true. We're tempting fate.

I glanced down at my list and wanted to laugh. I was such a cynic. I wondered if it counted if you knew those things were never going to happen.

1. Get a sports car. Yeah, right.
2. Go out with a senior. I wish, but as a sophomore, my shots were zilch.
3. Make an A in Calculus. Snort.
4. Get my artwork published. Because, you know, I've only been trying for like, 5 years.
5. Sing with Taylor Swift. If I could actually sing. But I can't. Ha.

If even one of these things EVER happened, Earth would have started spinning the opposite direction.


message 29: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Species: Human
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Name: Sarah
Lifestyle: Cynical, yet wistful teenager.


message 30: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
A cut. My blood begins to seep out. A few minutes pass, and it doesn't stop. I begin to feel dizzy. Am I going to die?


message 31: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Species:Human
Age:27
Gender:Female
Name:Wendy
Lifestyle:USED to be normal, until something happened one day that transported her out of her boring, ordinary world.


message 32: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Then my sister, noticing me, said, "Did you catch what we were talking about?" I shrugged. "Basically, I'm getting married."

((this is for the narrator))


message 33: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
EyeOfTheStorm|RONI wrote: "Species:Human
Age:27
Gender:Female
Name:Wendy
Lifestyle:USED to be normal, until something happened one day that transported her out of her boring, ordinary world."


Lol, okay, that works...I was thinking of a hemophillia person, but yours is cooler. XD



message 34: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
EyeOfTheStorm|RONI wrote: "Then my sister, noticing me, said, "Did you catch what we were talking about?" I shrugged. "Basically, I'm getting married."

((this is for the narrator))"


Species: Human
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Name: Alyssa
Lifestyle: Pretty normal life, isn't a very good listener. Sister is 26 and is getting married.


message 35: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments O.o


message 36: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Sella, you didn't post a new description!


message 37: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Oops, sorry!

I ran. I ran and ran and didn't stop running. My legs were burning, my heart was racing, my palms were sweating, yet I still didn't stop. I could not stop, or I would die.


message 38: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) Species: Human
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Name: David
Lifestyle: Criminal. Got in trouble with the law when he was robbing the same house a guy was murdered in, accused of murder. Recently escaped from jail.


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

how dare you name him David!!! jk


message 40: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
oh... oh no... the name david... what sella wrote... what happened after CWC last thursday... blocking... mental... images...!


message 41: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Roni: I.Am.So.Con.Fused. !!!


message 42: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Haha, you SHOULD be. You really don't want to know. It involves somebody writing a limerick about one of my guy friends... in a thong.


message 43: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
oh ok. strange...lol


message 44: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
yeah... OH I wrote a valentines limerick. See, i was talking to my friend about how we wrote limericks in CWC, and she said that she had to write limericks in class for valentines day, so I made up one on the spot and sent it to her. She got a laugh out of it. It's about cupid... and there's a swearword in there twice.


message 45: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
lol..sounds funny :D


message 46: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
I won't post it here because some people could be offended by it... but if you are dying of curiosity, I could send it to you...


message 47: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (last edited Mar 30, 2009 06:14PM) (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
lol, if you want. :D im curious.


message 48: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
mmkay. I'll send it to you now. :)


message 49: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
yay, i read it. it was hilarious. ;)


message 50: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) Send it to meh too!


back to top