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message 4351: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments M wrote: "Good morning, Leslie!

When I was a kid, I’d come home from school and watch B movies. One of them was about a scientist who turns into a werewolf after cutting himself accidentally on a coelecanth..."


M, they are found around the seas in Durban, South Africa, I think. :) want one?


message 4352: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol! Hmm, an interesting fish and movie :))


message 4353: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Wouldn’t it be interesting to have one? They’re strange-looking fish. I’d probably cut myself on it and turn into a werewolf.


message 4354: by [deleted user] (new)

Haha why do I feel that turning into a werewolf was once your dream? or maybe I'm just sleepy that's why I thought of that XD


message 4355: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Ajay has the honor. He’s the pirate ship’s shy werewolf, called Moonay (from moon and Ajay). Moonay is introduced in #1627 in the “Get to Know Your Character” thread.


message 4356: by [deleted user] (new)

and I found it, yey! Lol! it's so funny. I'm trying to figure out how to follow the coelecanth :)


message 4357: by Ryan (last edited Sep 17, 2013 06:12PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments With a Lungfish and then a tetrapod I'd imagine, Leslie ;o)


message 4358: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol! No! I'm steering away from amphibians :P


message 4359: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The dead fish hang mute.
Listening to the Smithereens
Practicing their scales.


message 4360: by [deleted user] (new)

Hi, Guy! How are you?


message 4361: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments I'm crashing into bed. So tired. How are you? I'll be asleep before you can answer. Good night.


message 4362: by [deleted user] (new)

hehe anyway, I hope you have a restful sleep :)


message 4363: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments 'Excuse me, waiter,
there's a tetrapod in my
Primordial Soup...'


message 4364: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The waiter, cordial,
smiling, said, “Would you rather
the gastropod plate?”

“This primordial
soup du jour,” someone coughed, “is
epochs out of date.”


message 4365: by Lilian (new)

Lilian Moore (thethirdsense) | 366 comments French food! O! Delight!
Mellow blends of Pinot Noir
Make my day complete


message 4366: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Lilian and Ellis, these are great!


message 4367: by [deleted user] (new)

#5699 & #5700 are hilarious, I had to cover my eyes after reading lol

Very nice, Lilian and Ellis :)


message 4368: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The waiter gasped, nor
could unclench his jaws, but--eyes
squeezed shut--hopped in pain.

The red wine murmured
French yesteryears of café
windows streaked with rain.


message 4369: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments These are excellent! Well done, M, Lillian and Ellis!


message 4370: by Zack (last edited Sep 19, 2013 12:27AM) (new)

Zack The Tower un-Eiffeled


She thinks he's stricken
with Napoleon complex
-his baguette had loafed


message 4371: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Short on dough, prospects
dim, in Norfolk they called him
the Virginia Slim.


message 4372: by Guy (last edited Sep 19, 2013 10:15AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments show me your juice


Abandon all hope,
the jug is up and the shine
has been all gulped down.
The fiddler was soon strung high,
hung on Ginnie's every note.


message 4373: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Ellis wrote: “This thread has got to be one of the best ways to avoid studying.”

One of the best ways to avoid a lot of other chores, too!


message 4374: by Lilian (new)

Lilian Moore (thethirdsense) | 366 comments The bottle in front
Life is behind me right now
And I won't turn 'round
Because I have got reasons
Like the year has her season


message 4375: by [deleted user] (new)

Raindrops of colors
waltzed through the tiny pieces
of a wine bottle;
Her eyes glazed with tears, she saw
life in a different light.


message 4376: by Guy (last edited Sep 20, 2013 07:11AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Good evening (I think) Leslie! Very nice. And Lilian, excellent. A great start to my work day.

Let's see. What to write?

in the eye of the beholder

The broken moon light
glinted on the wine's glass shards
with a sharp beauty
her dull imagination
was unable to dismiss.


message 4377: by Lilian (new)

Lilian Moore (thethirdsense) | 366 comments ((Absolutley gorgeous poems, Guy and Ellis!))

Night stars blink at me
Winking mockingly at me
No regard for me
Or my miserable life
And the people care


message 4378: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The lamp’s flame gutters,
her eyes the moon’s reflection
in old, wavy glass.


message 4379: by Lilian (new)

Lilian Moore (thethirdsense) | 366 comments ((Sounds like Memory by T.S Eliot to me, M! Beautiful work.))


message 4380: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (What a compliment! Thank you, Lilian. I was trying to follow yours, but got lost somewhere.)


message 4381: by [deleted user] (new)

Excellent haiku Guy, Lilian, Ellis and M.

her eyes, the color
of the night, hide the haunting
image of her past.


message 4382: by [deleted user] (new)

glittered masks veil their
hollow faces; ballgowns and
suits wrap rotten forms


message 4383: by Zack (new)

Zack Nice Leslie.


message 4384: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 20, 2013 08:18PM) (new)

A hero's welcome
causes hearts to break - cries for
empty promises

Thanks, Zack :) I followed yours but it's missing now harhar


message 4385: by Zack (new)

Zack Yeah, Ellis posted his before I got mine up. And since the Phantom of the Opera had nothing to do with burritos, I took it down.


message 4386: by [deleted user] (new)

hmm, how to follow the gremlins? lol

When gremlins play hide
and seek, an aircraft goes
through emergency.

Sorry..


message 4387: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LOL! No apology necessary Leslie, very funny.

And excellent and fascinating continuation, everyone! I find this thread to be inspiring and engaging and a pure delight to read.


message 4388: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments ghost in the propellor


The haunted aircraft
felt itself become heavy
with staying aloft,
an error of perception
in a thinly depressed air.


message 4389: by [deleted user] (last edited Sep 20, 2013 09:53PM) (new)

And excellent and fascinating continuation, everyone! I find this thread to be inspiring and engaging and a pure delight to read."

I agree :) it's also an excuse to avoid doing other things (like what M and Ellis mentioned).

nice continuation, Guy :)


message 4390: by Zack (last edited Sep 20, 2013 10:11PM) (new)

Zack An extension of Alexander


To err is human
To procrastinate, haiku
To forgive, divine


message 4391: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol! Funny, Zack :)


message 4392: by Jenn (new)

Jenn (ace-geek) Humans do go wrong,
but never as badly as
computers like to.


message 4393: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments I drove my Chevy
over the levee, the day
my internet died


message 4394: by [deleted user] (new)

Ellis wrote: "These are great, Zack, Leslie, and Guy! Leslie, I think that was a Stephen King reference, right? Lol"

I wasn't aware, Ellis, lol!

Ryan, very nice, you made me sing it :P


message 4395: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Hi, Leslie! Thanks, but mine is a pale shadow of the wonderful haiku leading up to it. Such good writing!


message 4396: by M (last edited Sep 22, 2013 06:41AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Noon’s chased silver bends
where beyond barges’ long lines
a vast tank farm stands;

in honeysuckle’s
vined deeps, the carved acanthus,
the broken brick, sleeps.


message 4397: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Such beautiful images, M.


message 4398: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Ryan, that’s very nice of you to say. I was trying to get an image of a broad river (“chased silver”) and ruined brick columns to come across, but I couldn’t seem to hit the mark.


message 4399: by [deleted user] (new)

That's lovely, M. I like it even though I can't think of something to follow it :)


message 4400: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Leslie! The one that really should be followed is Ryan’s #5737. I tried to follow it but wound up in vine-covered ruins.


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