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message 2801: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He lay gasping and
blinking. “Velma,” he writhed, “it’s
not what you’re thinking!”


message 2802: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M, what an amazing use of the imagery and words from my 'Haiku'! Excellent Stephanie.


message 2803: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) | 2875 comments Thanks, Guy. And I'd have to agree with you; M, I love the word play.


message 2804: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Guy and Stephanie! I have way too much fun on this thread.


message 2805: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4490 comments A horrid slap she
gave him. He knew no excuse
he'd say could save him.


message 2806: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Stunned and smarting from
that slap, he lay his head in
the welcoming lap

of a bronzed goddess
of scanty clothes, of shapely
legs, of fishnet hose.


message 2807: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Beautiful, the hand
that guides him to the restless
surging of the tides.


message 2808: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Belly! Where's the title?! (Great, btw.) M, that one almost made me blush! CJ, fun!


message 2809: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She was a cradle
endlessly rocking, smelling
of suntan lotion,

he but a freighter
helplessly docking, snared by
her rhythmic motion.

Velma, outraged, did
something shocking. (What it was,
I have no notion.)


message 2810: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Guy, Jim, M, Stephanie, CJ, Belly...wow! The latest run on this thread is a tour de force. Brilliant!


message 2811: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Hello, Ryan! Yes, this has been a great run. M, that was brilliant!

Velma's frail conscience
saw the boist'rous rocking pair
and felt her knees quake.

She smelled incense
and eased her clothes to the chair
to give up her stake.


message 2812: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LoL! RotFL!


message 2813: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I just read Belly’s “outside the machine.” Oh, my God! All I can say is that it’s a first for the W.S.S. I’ll open a bottle of Grand Marnier.

I got a kick out of the Charlie Brown reference in Ellis’s haiku!

For a group rated PG-13, there are some things posted here that put over-eighteen groups to shame.


message 2814: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments Of course! Guys, this is great!


message 2815: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Yes, he is.

[Guy bows low in true respect.]


message 2816: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I’m just now catching up. He sure is! Belly, your “lance a lot” haiku is (unsurprisingly) delightful in all the right ways.


message 2817: by Zack (last edited Apr 05, 2013 10:34PM) (new)

Zack im up way too late
but my day has just begun
daylight dramatized


message 2818: by Zack (last edited Apr 05, 2013 10:43PM) (new)

Zack sunsets magical
bringing forth all creation
through others silenced


message 2819: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Ellis, Zack, well done!


Within silence's sound
I knew I would find the sound
of sunsets unbound.


message 2820: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Sunset, unbound, doe-
eyed, made me think I’d gone to
heaven yet not died.


message 2821: by Guy (last edited Apr 06, 2013 04:16PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments the s is silent

The world's clockworks squeak,
and a sibilant Cybil
softly sighs 'What's up?'


message 2822: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “Two hundred dollars?”
I gaped. Cybil took my bill-
fold. “Let’s not quibble.”


message 2823: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LoL! Excellent Belly and M!


message 2824: by Zack (last edited Apr 07, 2013 11:39PM) (new)

Zack Sleepy Time:


the formidable
power point presentation
hypnotizes me.


message 2825: by Zack (new)

Zack Ellis!


message 2826: by Zack (last edited Apr 07, 2013 11:54PM) (new)

Zack Ellis is a G,
Keepin' it mostly low key,
now where's the brew-ski?


message 2827: by Zack (last edited Apr 08, 2013 12:14AM) (new)

Zack eh, its not that cold,
in Florida, Orlando;
I do miss the snow.


message 2828: by Zack (new)

Zack I do miss seasons,
but what is truly blundered,
is education.


message 2829: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments A spider will soon
be feeding on a gnat that’s
recklessly speeding.


message 2830: by Zack (last edited Apr 10, 2013 07:01PM) (new)

Zack Irritating buzz,
resonating in my ear,
was, and now is mush.


message 2831: by Zack (new)

Zack A mouthful of mush,
and reflexes a bit slow,
too much alcohol.


message 2832: by Guy (last edited Apr 11, 2013 07:05AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Oh! The humour! EXCELLENT sequence, Robyn, Zack, Belly, Ellis M. RotFL!


Having Breakfast in Frog Pajamas

To be cooked and ate
is to live and salivate
as the frog's true mate.


message 2833: by Zack (new)

Zack against all the odds,
she knelt down and kissed the frog,
and wished she hadn't.


message 2834: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Now she practices
out-of-sorts amphibian
witchcraft at Frogwarts.


message 2835: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LoL!


message 2836: by Zack (new)

Zack Haha nice


message 2837: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thanks!


message 2838: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4490 comments :D Awesome, M!


message 2839: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The black witch got made
with a light warlock who laid
with her and her maid.


message 2840: by M (last edited Apr 16, 2013 05:38PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Of mice and men, of plans
best laid, of the blonde who’s known
as the Minute Maid.


message 2841: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LoL! Zack, M loved these! And excellent Robyn, and welcome to the wild and salty ship's Haiku thread! Very, very funny!

an infusion of hard to see tea beggars

Made with minute men,
the handmaid's hand made wart's tea
left a mystery.


message 2842: by Zack (last edited Apr 16, 2013 10:01PM) (new)

Zack her legs mysticize
fishnets creeping up her thighs
as she rolls her eyes


message 2843: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She had a cold eye,
a hawk nose, but the gams that
filled those fishnet hose

woven (some said) on
the devil’s loom, lured her prey
to her upstairs room.


message 2844: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments RotFL! So funny Al.


message 2845: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Yes! You certainly turned the tables with that one. I have a feeling the man in the scenario resembles a certain doctor.


message 2846: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Frank N Furter from Rocky Picture Horror Show? I wonder... is this the source of Al's muse? LoL.


message 2847: by Zack (new)

Zack Lets do the time warp again. Nice Al.


message 2848: by Guy (last edited Apr 19, 2013 06:38AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Well done! Zack, M, Al, so funny!


With razor and care
nary a hair dare stare down
the mad man with Nair.


message 2849: by Zack (new)

Zack Cleaning the kitchen
in a wierd dream staring at
A bald mr. clean


message 2850: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LOL!


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