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message 2251: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “For me,” he exclaimed
with a wince, “this is too Twen-
ty-Thousand Leaguey!”

Then, noting a co-
incidence, he rushed off to
blog the fushigi.


message 2252: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) | 2875 comments "A type of food this
fushigi must be!" exclaimed
a careless stranger.

Starving wolves howled
at the promise of dinner.
But it never came.


message 2253: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments wolf's fur on bramble
hunt on a landscape, not mine
no more than a dream


message 2254: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Beautiful, Stephanie and Jim!


message 2255: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) | 2875 comments Thank you, M! And nice, Jim, I like it.

The dark moon sheds light
on grey fur, through leaves and trees.
Sorrow in their hearts,

wolves travel in packs
wandering through a cursed land,
hoping for brave Jared.

He had led them straight
and true, never failing and
almost never blue.


message 2256: by M (last edited Jan 08, 2013 04:22PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments I said to Moira,
“The white wolf knows lonesome trails
through the Yukon snows,

with not a breath of
wind to shake the dark-firred shores
of the frozen lake.

Strewn there are jagged,
frost-spalled stones and brown remains
of prospectors’ bones.”


message 2257: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) | 2875 comments Wow, M! Wonderful!


message 2258: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Stephanie! I was inspired by your #3360.


message 2259: by Stephanie (last edited Jan 08, 2013 06:39PM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) | 2875 comments Glad I could be of service.

Moira's breath steamed in
the frosty air as she stood
on her two feet in

the brown, crusted dirt.
Down she went and morphed into
a wolf, becoming

one with the pack and
continuing the search for
Jared the white wolf.


message 2260: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments @ 3356-7. RotFL. LMHO. Sooooooo funny.

Jim, M, Stephanie, beautiful and mythical. Fun to read!

Neve: I don't get whips!
Guy: Try them: you might like them.
Prof: Everyone does!


message 2261: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments I think my posts are a bit out of sync with you guys, sorry.


message 2262: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Jim, I think your verses are highly original! Please keep posting them.


message 2263: by kisha (new)

kisha Early this morning,
The morning sun glares at me,
Damn, time to get up.


message 2264: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) | 2875 comments No, you're doing great, Jim! And thanks, Guy!

I shake my fir and
stretch my legs. My time as a
wolf has not been long.

Compared to Black Moon,
I am but a tiny tree
sapling hoping to

grow not only in
size but also wisdom. They
say I would be good

for the great white wolf.
Some say it is time to let
him leave forever.


message 2265: by Guy (last edited Jan 09, 2013 06:44AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Jim Pascual Agustin wrote: "I think my posts are a bit out of sync with you guys, sorry."

Not at all! Your haiku are excellent, so keep on posting them.

Ah, Kisha,

To wake with the sun
without an alarm or qualm
is lost memories.


message 2266: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments kisha’s #3372 is well done! The syllable count is perfect, and each line embodies a distinct thought.


message 2267: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) | 2875 comments Yeah, I could just see the sun resting on someone's face.


message 2268: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The alarm went off
but I didn’t hear it. I
think it was because

I wasn’t sleeping
anywhere near it, and sound
obeys certain laws.


message 2269: by kisha (new)

kisha Thanks!


message 2270: by Guy (last edited Jan 09, 2013 08:35PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M, RotFL!


Did you hear about
the young man seeking wisdom
from his waking dreams?

Each night he forgot
to turn on his alarm clock
and thus slept through it.


message 2271: by kisha (new)

kisha Guy I like that one very creative


message 2272: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4490 comments Me too.

So many creative haikus, everyone! :)


message 2273: by kisha (new)

kisha ,
By the sound of the alarm,
Time passes quickly


message 2274: by kisha (new)

kisha Oops my phone sent it too quickly to be continued lol


message 2275: by kisha (new)

kisha Suddenly disturbed,
By the sound of the alarm,
Time passes by too quickly.


message 2276: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments How I like to sleep!
When I have a choice, I would
rather stay in bed.

Imagine my shock
when a buttery voice purred,
“Get up, sleepyhead!”

Nonplussed, I sat up
with a jerk, for I knew my
wife had left for work.


message 2277: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments she left my razor
next to the open window,
dry wind took my hair


message 2278: by Guy (last edited Jan 10, 2013 06:35AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Kisha, M, Jim, what a great start to my day!


There took she my wit!
I saw it through the window,
long strands tempest tossed.


message 2279: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Jill exclaimed, “Mom, look
tangled up there in the tree.
It’s somebody’s hair!”


message 2280: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LoL! Now, sigh, to work I go. Have fun in the Haiku sand lot guys!


message 2281: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Guy, I enjoyed your blog! Thank you for the link.


message 2282: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M, you are welcome and I am glad you enjoyed it. They're kind of fun to write.


message 2283: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Standing patiently
below, the bald man awaits
Christmas in the Fall.


message 2284: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments These are really good. I don't have time for internet anymore though XP


message 2285: by kisha (new)

kisha Breeze, winds, and cold chills,
Bundled up in winter gear,
Fall in Ohio.


message 2286: by M (last edited Jan 10, 2013 04:55PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Not to worry, Kat! I didn’t spend any time on the Internet when I was in college, either.

I left my heart in
Cincinnati, and my watch
and my billfold, too.


message 2287: by Ryan (last edited Jan 10, 2013 05:04PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Out of time, I drank
the pulse of a strange city,
my new beating heart.


message 2288: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I knew I had to
be in Paris. A passer-
by spoke good English.


message 2289: by Ryan (last edited Jan 10, 2013 06:45PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments I stayed but one night
in Paris. The Hilton has
seen many a guest.


message 2290: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments Ahahah XD


message 2291: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments It may be awful,
and yet the Pretenders wrote
My City was Gone.


message 2292: by kisha (new)

kisha Alex (Al) wrote: "kisha wrote: "Breeze, winds, and cold chills,
Bundled up in winter gear,
Fall in Ohio."

You live in Ohio too? Isn't it awful?"



Yes in Columbus, and it's absolutely dreadful. One day its a blizzard, 18 degrees and 4 inches of snow then the next no snow, raining and 50 degrees. Flu and allergy season for sure!


message 2293: by Karl Ivan (last edited Jan 11, 2013 02:45AM) (new)

Karl Ivan Farthegn | 38 comments That's peanuts Kisha I'm in Norway here it drops to -22 Fahrenheit and 59 inches of snow in one night is not uncommon Ohio sounds like a summer paradise. I don't really write Haiku but since this is the Haiku link will supply one from a selection of poems written before the last sortie by Japanese kamikaze pilots here is one of them:

In blossom today,
Then scattered:
Life is so like
A delicate Flower.
How can one expect
The Fragrance to last forever?


message 2294: by Stephanie (last edited Jan 11, 2013 05:12AM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) | 2875 comments After Paris I
could not help but see Rome. And
there I stayed for years.

Flowers grew between
ancient walls, speaking of men.
Gladiators died.

Where those men died, the
odor remained for many
days. Now it is gone.


message 2295: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments skin and fabric rub
as I walk into the world
odour of lost days


message 2296: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Days of infancy
with soft skin like fair perfume
cotton and ordure.


message 2297: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Wow! These are so good, they’re like something from an anthology!


message 2298: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments it was quiet, still
she left it, no looking back
mother at thirteen


message 2299: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The abandonment
left the moralists prating
repentance and God.


message 2300: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments coils of smoke linger
where rotting mounds gather heat
life grinds even here

-o-


... not sure that fits :)


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