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message 5701: by [deleted user] (new)

Angie wrote: "A rich life woven
with only silken smoothness.
Alas, not for me.
My life, woven from burlap,
The life of the poor."


Poor exclamations
tender rapine dollar bills
a bonafide mist

among the matter
that heeds when you shatter glass
your song - a blue toast


message 5702: by [deleted user] (new)

M wrote: "He fled, black and blue,
to pen his weekly column,
“The Narrower View.”"


He threshed his column
while i studied phoneacian
bull horns and chignon

chiggers in love's field
of daisys - asters that bore
the sunshine letters


message 5703: by [deleted user] (new)

M wrote: "“He said there’s more fish
in the sea,” Gertrude sniffled,
“more fish than just me.”"


The sea was a tare
that a task force would master
pelf - unending pedimnent


message 5704: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 24, 2014 05:02PM) (new)

M wrote: "He fled, black and blue,
to pen his weekly column,
“The Narrower View.”"


My telivision
is the tenderloin we trust
sown on a launch pad

_ on a launch pad plate.


message 5705: by M (last edited Mar 24, 2014 05:12PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments (Cat, you should write a novel! Your writing reminds me in some ways of James Joyce’s.)


Hung a red light oh-
ver my TV. Tube’s the
tenderloin for me.


message 5706: by [deleted user] (new)

Rachel wrote: "Darkness dissembles
Faithfulness to moon and stars
But admits to fog."


the incoherent lover
translucent breeds power
breeds shame faced mustard
and a myrtle tree.


message 5707: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Mustard and myrtle
Commingled their blossoms to
Pollinate, perfume.


message 5708: by [deleted user] (new)

M wrote: "“He said there’s more fish
in the sea,” Gertrude sniffled,
“more fish than just me.”"


The fish were bright suns
guilty of heeding the flesh
while the threatened blush day
offeeed condolence


message 5709: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Wow! What a feast. You people are amazing.


message 5710: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Supernova seas
Neon tentacles explode
From the jellyfish


message 5711: by [deleted user] (new)

a spectacle of
false colors underneath the
sparkling salt water


message 5712: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments What is true color?
Pink: A rainbow minus green
A trick of the eyes?

The sun rises and
The sea toes the shaky lines
Between grey, blue, green.


message 5713: by [deleted user] (new)

Toenails painted in
pink dig deeper in the sand,
enjoying the warmth.


message 5714: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Pink fingers of dawn
Cast golden nets to find me
Caught on a sandbar.


message 5715: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments The drinks the bar served
Were much too sandy for her.
Not worth getting drunk


message 5716: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments I felt quite salty
Quaffing my margarita
With a sandy rim.


message 5717: by [deleted user] (new)

[Rachel, you're on a roll! :)]

mixing her drink, she
finds a salty escape from
her fresh water life.


message 5718: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments [You too! :D]

Fresh water mermaids
Missed subtle shifts in the sound
Suddenly drowning


message 5719: by [deleted user] (new)

they got sick of life
under the sea, they started
to crave for a float.


message 5720: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Fearless, wondering,
They hitchhiked on the breakers,
Tumbled in the foam.


message 5721: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments An unlatched window,
a half-open door, long walks
on a storm-gouged shore.


message 5722: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Eyes gouged by lightning,
Zeus regretted his full mug
Of mead before bed.


message 5723: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He met a lady
in the mead, nor went gentle
into that good night.


message 5724: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Dionysus chased
His ladies into the trees,
Too drunk to follow.


message 5725: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He pined with lustful
indecision, his pursuits
nude, Dionysian.


message 5726: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments The Bacchanals knew
Many an indiscretion.
They kept their secrets.


message 5727: by M (last edited Mar 25, 2014 05:46AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments When sea wind harried
a tree twisted like runes carved
on an old whale bone,

inducted into
her mystery, he sought her
by the standing stone.


message 5728: by [deleted user] (new)

the wind picked her up,
as she stumbled through rocky
shores and scraped her knees.


message 5729: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “The lengths I go to,”
she shuddered, drenched with sea spray,
“to find a Starbuck’s.”


message 5730: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol, very funny, M!

she searched high and low,
even bribed a seagull to
take her to Starbucks


message 5731: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Tall Thingamabob
Two pumps of sea salt, no foam


message 5732: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments (Premature submission courtesy of feline, no edits on mobile app.)

Tall Thingamabob
Two pumps of sea salt, no foam
Garnish with conch shell


message 5733: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Where moonlight glistened
on a bleak outcrop, she spied
Hrothgar’s Donut Shop.


message 5734: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Rachel, I didn’t see yours when I posted mine. Sorry!)


message 5735: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Soon the patrons’ cries
grew louder, stirred to frenzy
by the conch chowder.


message 5736: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Starbucks' seafood was
Met with horror when Scuttle
Recognized a face.


message 5737: by [deleted user] (new)

A face that sank a
thousand ships is indeed a
horrifying one.


message 5738: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Leslie! It launched a thousand ships.)


message 5739: by [deleted user] (new)

I know :D


message 5740: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Helen can launch an
armada or three, sirens
will see them all sunk.


message 5741: by M (last edited Mar 25, 2014 06:02PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments She laughed, gave her head
a tilt. A thousand warships
went straight to the silt.


message 5742: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments "I drowned in her eyes."
No cliche, her pupils blew
and dragged me under.


message 5743: by M (last edited Mar 25, 2014 07:18PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments In Greek modes, the scores:
in chains, the screams; flailing oars
of sinking triremes.

(Take a look back at #3163-#3169. This thread is encyclopedic!)

https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...


message 5744: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 26, 2014 01:47AM) (new)

Wow, this thread is really amazing. One of these days, I'm going to read from #1 again.

***

a trident pierces
through a snow globe,dispersing
childhood memories.


message 5745: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Impaled by three prongs,
Frosty couldn’t help but smile.
“No more Christmas songs!”


message 5746: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments (Baha)

As it so happens
Santa's little helpers are
not Will Ferrel fans.


message 5747: by M (last edited Mar 26, 2014 04:58AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Instead of taking
a dive, Frosty showed up on
Saturday Night Live,

promoting, in his
suave and wintry tones, Trident
Sugarless Snow Cones.


message 5748: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol! let me see..

Frosty's best flavor
was strawberry with a pinch
of glitter on top


message 5749: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Olaf longed for some
lemon sorbet, but was warned
about yellow snow.


message 5750: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (last edited Mar 26, 2014 11:41PM) (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4490 comments Incontinent man
walked miles lost in snow, rescue
ones found him from the
miles he did go...

(Sorry this one I couldn't fit into the haiku rhyme.) :)


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