Chad Lare

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When you describe your settings and action using only words from your viewpoint character’s vocabulary, you’re not only telling your readers the facts, you’re running those facts through your viewpoint character’s history and sensibility. On the other hand, when the voice of your descriptions is more sophisticated, more verbose, perhaps more acutely observant than your viewpoint character can manage, you’ve put distance between the two.
Self-Editing for Fiction Writers: How to Edit Yourself Into Print
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