The Midnight Game (from the TikTok "CEO of plot twists"!)
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“ADHD,” he blurted, fixing his eyes back on Mei. He took a deep, wobbly breath. “I have recently been diagnosed with ADHD and I have trouble remembering certain things, especially when I get given new information. What if I forget the rules?”
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He just like me fr
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“I don’t like blood.”
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Bro should NOT be here
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“I don’t like cats.”
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RED FLAG
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“You know, the line that someone says in a scary movie that makes you scream at the TV.”
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Being self aware abt it doesnt make this any better
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Callum was right.
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OK BUT LIKE ?????
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“I’m fourteen,” she whispered.
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????????
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And stepped out of the salt circle.
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IDIOT
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“even I want to screw her.”
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OK BISEXUAL
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OMG I had no idea! Not too great at this internet safety thing, am I?
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Why are they all so STUPID
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“And you’re not on the verge of a meltdown any more.”
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I cannot stand her
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He sighed. She was completely out of control, but she was right, it had brought him back from the brink of an anxiety attack that would have helped precisely no one. Should she have done it? No. Was he glad she had? Yeah – kind of.
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This js so unrealistic if anything it wouldve made his panic attack worse
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“Don’t let me interrupt,” Ellie snarled. “I’ll just take Mei’s bag and leave you to it.”
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EVERYONE JS SO STUPID?????
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Try to stick together, because you are more vulnerable on your own.
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And these dumb bitches decided to split up icb
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“Bitch,”
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?????????
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She wished she could tell them that the Midnight Man hadn’t done this to her. She wished she could tell them that one of them had.
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??? OH SHIT THINGS JUST GOT INTERESTING
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He was a mixed-race male from a working-class family who had broken into a school. Where a murder had just happened. He was going to go down for this. “We need a plan,” he mumbled.
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Maybe dont do a demonic ritual with strangers then idk
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They were splitting up again, despite everything that had happened since the first time.
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IM SAYING LIKE
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“You didn’t want him to?”
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HUH WHAT THE FUCK
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I would never do that again…”
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AGAIN?????
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“We were so drunk, and I didn’t … I didn’t think about the consent. I thought it was implied, but I know better now, really, I do. Once I realized she was unconscious I stopped, I promise,” he finished.
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?????? WHAT IN THE EVERLOVING FUCK ???????
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Such a waste.
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WHY IS EVERYONE IN THIS BOOK EITHER SHIT AN IDIOT OR BOTH
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“That little bitch,” Ellie hissed. “I bet Hugo didn’t even do anything to her, did he?”
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Ok but like. He still assaulted a girl in the past
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“I’m so sorry,” she whispered to him.
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HES STILL A RAPIST WHY R U SORRY
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Didn’t matter if you’d grazed your knee or broken your leg – the answer was always ‘let’s put a wet paper towel on it’.”
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“Me either,” she said, handing him the belt. “So, you didn’t drink from Hugo’s flask earlier?” “No, I pretended. You?” “Same. It’s basic girl code. I don’t trust a drink I haven’t poured myself.”
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Omg they rlly are the only characters in this with common sense
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“O Allah,” he whispered as low as he possibly could, “Allah, stand by us. Allah, protect us.”
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HES MUSLIM ???? Mashallah hello habibi
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“OK. But I want you to know I wasn’t hiding it or anything, I promise. Her name was Alice. The girl from the article. She was my best friend.” A wave of nausea swept over Callum, forcing him to grab the desk chair as he stared at her. “What do you mean?” “Exactly what I said. Alice was my best friend and she died at a Halloween party. I never believed she killed herself and now…” She shook her head slowly, tears streaming down her face. “I think it was them. I think they killed her.”
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Ahhh that makes sense!
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Toni filled her lungs with shadows and screamed all the way down.
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This feels like a plothole
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But he’s the wrongdoer – he’s the kind of person the Midnight Man would want to punish.”
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So what ur saying is that he's acc a based king
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Last year I made some friends at football who are Muslim and started getting curious about my dad again. I started to read up about it and suddenly I felt … I dunno, connected to a part of my heritage or something.
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Oh dude i know the feeling
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And Hugo, who was just trying to do better. Maybe he wasn’t the best person, but he didn’t deserve to be slaughtered like that.
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HE WAS A RAPIST ?????????
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“Pathetic,” Ellie spat. She looked down at what she had really come for, her gaze settling on the thin, silver chain that glinted on the other girl’s snapped neck. Ellie reached down, tugging it off with a little more force than she would have liked. The ends came apart and she stood up straight, holding it over her wrist, the jagged half of a heart finally finding its mate again. “I think you’ll find that’s mine.” She stared down at the dead girl. “Bitch.”
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OH
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El? I’m worried I’ll never see you again. Ellie – I love you. Like, more than a friend love you. I’m sorry I never told you before.
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OH MY GOD
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“Remember when Reece introduced himself to you, right before the game even began? I think he messed up. They should have used fake names, but he dropped them in it. I think if they used fake names with Alice, the game probably didn’t work as it should have. Names hold a certain kind of power.”
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Ok atleast they TRIED to explain it