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August 31 - September 3, 2025
The pool sat in a recession in the stone
recess
the dreamer whose creating these ladies.”
who's
Of course, I asked him.
No comma when you're just agreeing.
“So you were right,” Will replied. “She can only appear at that one spot.”
Jumped to that conclusion
not wanting to think anymore about their mom
any more (in this case it doesn't refer to time, which is where "anymore" is used)
the wreckage of their crafts returned,
craft is the plural of craft unless you're talking about making things
tore the expedition roster from the journal and lay it on the table
laid
the legal ward of William Dreycott,
guardian; Will is the ward
whatever he poured on the rag.
had poured
search for your parent’s expedition.”
parents'
Be easier if GPS worked out here.”
Why wouldn't it? It's a satellite technology, and satphones work later in the chapter.
“Ok, but can we hurry?
OK or Okay
Adi, his parents, …
No comma before an ellipsis
Okay, one more try.
Pick a spelling, preferably this one.
“Ok. Let’s go.”
OK or Okay
afraid to say anymore,
any more
“The moment it was locked up again,” Will said. “I felt
said, "I
