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February 7 - February 8, 2021
I'd drank
drUnk
out late.
lateR
was an ornate rotunda sat
was an ornate rotunda SITTING
the McKellen's did
Plural, not possessive
is looking wants
Is looking OR wants, not both
“Nico’s grandmother
BRODY’s grandmother
He’d knew
He’d KNOWN
stand too.
Comma
discussion, we’d
No comma
pointedly, not
No comma
I shifted off Brody’s lap, giving an imperceptible wiggle, but it was enough to make the shifter give a groan.
She stood up 4 paragraphs ago, so not on a lap...
complicated’ can
Comma
slit, in
No comma
reality, made
No comma
a discombobulated voice
a discombobulatING voice
Next, to
No comma
everyone, feeding
No comma
case, she
No comma
had we sat that
had we sat THAN
back of mind,
back of (the or my) mind
little, I
No comma
I sob crawled
A sob crawled
which has
which HAD
anyone had
Comma
my boyfriend's bit,
my boyfriends bit, (plural, not possessive)
moan too.
Comma
more tattooed then
more tattooed THAN
Sorry Cresta,”
is not we are
is not WHAT we are
you remember?
Comma
watch the
Comma
nothing came at.
nothing came OUT.
night, he’d
No comma
wish Rainy
Comma
me that
Comma
babysitting X and Brody, and Tex were
babysitting X, and Brody and Tex were
OR
babysitting X and Brody, and Tex WAS
mind, you
No comma
massive, weapon
No comma
scar littered
Hyphenate
“Down Puppy.
Comma
