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Aya’s two staring eyes was
were
her buzzed, blonde head
No comma
their least-classy, whipped cream vodka
No comma
final, deep breath
No comma
steady, sinking feeling
No comma
“Of course, it isn’t.”
No comma (since this is just agreeing with the previous statement).
large, circular space
No comma
they’re a mix of dinosaurs, archosaurs,
Dinosaurs are a type of archosaur.
small, hyper, thirteen-year-old.
No second comma
had lain eggs,
laid
one of Bright Jack’s aids
aides
one of the aids said,
aides
When Vivid Blue went after him. it was
him, it
Aid number one nodded.
Aide
Everyonemove
Everyone move
thin, brown line
No comma
scorched, white mask.
No comma
familiar, raised voices.
No comma
tiny, round head
No comma
“Of course, she does,
No comma
He threw up has hands
his
