Supercomputer
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Copyright © 2022
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She headed to her compartment and put on her suit to protect herself from stun rays.
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Its razor sharp nails on the ends of its three-fingered hands cut through her shirt and into her skin.
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**Loss of Continuity (LOC) & Proofreading Fail (PRF) 'Author' routinely ignores what was written earlier in his storylines & plot lines throughout the series. Here it's the protagonist wearing her protective suit [SEE Highlighted page 2].
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her pants were covered in slime.
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**LOC & PRF Same-same LOC & PRF as in prior Note above.
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Joe.
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PRF *joe
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“You ‘pondered’ that, eh?”
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Points again to the 'author' being a Canadian, a British Commonwealth subject.
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robotic’s
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A woman ran into her. “Watch where you’re going.” “Sorry.”
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By my calculations, this weapon will be useless in a few minutes.
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PRF **Missing opening & closing quotation marks.
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That was the first time she saw fake people interact with her.
David P. Duffy
**LOC & PRF A 'woman' interacted with 'Daphne' when they bumped into each other [SEE Highlighted page 165]. 'Author' continues to confirm that he's a hack.