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Can you imagine if he raised those two ocean blue eyes to you?
"Those ocean blue eyes" Shut up
She shivered at the touch of his fingers on the thin skin there, sending a wave of heat right down her spine.
girl his name is Josh
he’d made her feel like she was sixteen again.
my worst nightmare
“Oh my god, when did Josh become so hot? And I’m not even into guys but damn, he is fiiiine.”
I loathe dialogue like this it's so dull and uninspired
And then, well, there was the matter of the two kisses at the end of the text, which, come on. Who sent two kisses to a friend?
just to be clear: the message closed with "xx" now- in my 24 years of being alive it was always common knowledge to me that xo was hugs and kisses. X being the hug (because it's obviously shaped like limbs outstrecthed) and O being the kiss (because it looks like a mouth). So. Wrong!
Josh walked on stage, looking impossibly handsome in his custom-made tuxedo, his wavy hair perfectly styled.
I can never imagine a man looking anything other than goofy in a tux
And as if on cue, she watched as tears slid down his cheeks. It took real effort for Avery to keep her feet planted where they were. Every part of her was itching to get to him. She hadn't realized she was crying too until her own tears fell on her arms, which were clasped tightly under her chest.
don't get me wrong this would be so tits if the authour did anything to make me care about these guys. If there was any work done to show the emotional bond between the two characters, between Josh and his dead mom, perhaps giving Josh any sort of personality....anything at all....
Josh took a sip of wine, his tongue darting out and licking his upper lip. That should not look so indecent. “You remind me of my mom sometimes,” he said.
oh, that's not-
maybe it was because he was fiercely loyal, showing her over and over again that he wasn't the same man he’d been, that she could trust him, that she should trust him again,
This is crazy because "what he did" was just take a trip to Europe after his mother died at like...19 years old. And he didn't tell her because she's his 18 year old bestie and not his mommy? You know? Like he is not the villain here you are just entitled.
“Okay, get in the car and let's get your cute ass to bed.”
😬
“Josh!” “I know, I know, ughhh! Why do you have to be so tempting, uh?”
Yikers
Oh my god, Joshy!” I’m sorry, what?
"I'm sorry what?" is also what I would say If my boyfriend's grown sister called him "Joshy"
licking at her skin in a way that made the tip of her breasts spring to attention under the thin fabric of her dress,
ugh I hate when my breasts spring to atttention ugh justgirlythings
“Baaabe, hiii!” Brooke settled the bottle on the counter and gave Avery a Brooke-like hug,
a "Brooke-like hug" okay so...like cardboard? Like a piece of warm blank printer paper wrapping itself flimsily around your midsection?
“Actually.” She lifted her chin so she could look at him. “Can we talk?” Seeing the alarm all over his face and his body tense under her hands, she rushed to clarify. “Everything is fine, don’t worry, I— I just want to talk to you about something.” “Okaaaay? Not gonna lie, feels a lot like you’re going to tell me you don’t want to see me anymore.”
Dialogue is giving Wattpad
And because Josh was still looking at her silently, she added, “I know this is not what we agreed on. I completely understand if you didn—” “Are you fucking kidding me?” he growled before crushing his lips against hers.
Yikers part two
revealing the full glory of his chest.
gross
“Avie, if you keep this up, I'm not going to be able to hold back.”
SUPER weird thing to say after your girlfriend admits she's maybe not ready for sex and needs to slow it down because she was sexually assaulted but isn't this one liner just so hot?? Five spicy peppers for booktok!
“You’re so beautiful,” he said, before drawing her breast into his mouth, rolling her hard nipple with his tongue. “So fucking perfect for me.”
so how did he say that with her breast in his mouth? Just trying to figure out the logistics of someone saying "fucking perfect" with something in their mouth- that's just a lot of percussive consonants you need to close your teeth for idk
“Don’t apologize, please. It’s me, it’s … what’s happening right now … this is big. I don’t want to mess it up.”
if a man said this to me I'd shrivel up and dry out
“There is nothing god can do for you here; this is all me. All me, Avie.”
I-
What the fuck
“You want more? Is that what you want?” Josh breathed, locking his gaze on her. He didn’t wait for her to answer.
ANOTHER weird thing to do to your girlfriend who has experienced assault like wdym he didnt wait for her to answer with consent before pinning her
Josh let her in, but not without brushing his fingertips against her waist as she walked past him. This man.
What does this mean
How could she be anything but in love with him?
Idk girl im not even convinced you are in love with him
A slight shade of pink colored his cheeks, giving him a boyish look that Avery found very endearing. She captured the moment, knowing she would always want to remember him this way.
Girl shut up
When he broke their kiss, both breathless, he locked his eyes with hers. With one hand curled around the nape of her neck, he whispered. “We're not over, baby. We can never be. As long as I’m breathing, my heart is yours. It always has been.”
Mom come get me im so scared
“What did he do?” he roared.
Not him roaring
He took Avery in his arms and cradled her, stroking her hair. “Avery, where is he?”
Just brother sister things!
The text she'd seen on Brooke's phone the next morning. That was why Josh had texted her!
Were you seriously paranoid about your bff who is a lesbian texting your little girl crush from when you were 16 that never went anywhere?
She felt like Zooey Deschanel in New Girl, watching Dirty Dancing over and over again whenever she had a breakup, crying like crazy every time.
How dare you bring up new girl
“I assure you that it was entirely my pleasure,” he grinned, and laid his forehead against hers. “I’m never letting you go again, baby. Ever.”
Men die challenge
kneeling and crawling to her, like a lion rounding its prey.
Amanda Seyfried in Mama Mia on that beach
He squeezed the bottle of chocolate sauce and let the liquid drip onto Avery's breasts, carefully covering her rosy nipples, then continued pouring the chocolate onto her ribcage, her tummy.
I want to sear off my fucking retinas
Picking the chocolate sauce bottle again, he poured it on her delicate pussy.
Her PH Balance is about to be FUCKED
