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The Saint’s run Redhill and they have for generations, it wouldn’t be in my timeline that we lost it.
Incorrect use of apostrophe
They were great for my economy and while they pump money through the many businesses, the Saint’s have always supported.
Incorrect use of apostrophe as well as conjunction
the moment it was in commission, us Saint’s owned it.
Apostrophe Again
It was the Saint’s biggest and oldest business
Again
but the Saint’s valued family above all else.
Apostrophe Again
I delight in the life draining from the traitors’ eyes and only when his head rolls forward and his chest goes still do I yank the knife from his throat and slowly take a step over, standing directly in front of the other.
Wrong use of apostrophe as only one person was knifed
Giving him a flavor of what happens to people who turn on the fucking Saint’s.
Apostrophe Again also not a sentence
Words have as much power on a person as actions. They cut just as deep and twice as hard. A physical trauma hurts the flesh, but words, they hurt the soul.
I’d grown up knowing the Saint’s as the infamous, self-declared rulers but the city didn’t suffer for that.
This book needs to be carefully proof read to eliminate all these incorrect apostrophes
“Words are sharper than knives.”
“This city has belonged to the Saint’s for generations,”
Again proof reader needed
“He told police he knew the Saint’s!”
Getting repetitive
He’s been a friend of the Saint’s for a long time,
Again
the Saint’s have a false sense of power.
Starting to ruin my enjoyment
“You Saint’s never deserved it.
Situations vacant: Proof reader needed
No more Saint’s,
Need one say more. Going to have to reduce my star rating.
