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“And do you like what you
She was rude to blantly oogle him. Twit.
“Why? I’d think you wouldn’t need any confirmation. Your head is big enough as it is.”
This whole intro is vulgar & rude. Do people really say this crap?
Booming laughter followed her statement. Kayla was irritated that he had the nerve to laugh. The rise of her right brow and a stern look were all that was needed to shut him up.
Power play is unrealistic
And to give him the final blow, Kayla turned back to the elevator doors and continued to ignore him.
Cut direct? After she initiated this scene
Her skin heated under his abrasive gaze,
Abrasive gaze? Really?
The old Kayla would have given him a cold stare or a warning threat, which would’ve sent him running scared out of this elevator,
Really? A 'boxer' threatened by little ole her? Run? Not likely.
She was disappointed in herself either way. Hadn’t she learned by now that she needed to distance herself from men who looked at her as if they wanted to eat her alive?
Delusional. Situation Is not natural.
As if he was standing next to fuckin’ Elsa from Frozen.
Um... ELSA? Frozen? Not something I'd imagine a 30 yr-old MMA champ referencing. Bit of a stretch.
She looked hot in her black pumps, tight black skirt, and fitted dark
Objectifying opposite sex. More ike a bad porn flick than a romance. Over-the top, over used, in your face descriptives are not sexy. Vulgar. Little miss is too hostile, contradictory & confrontational to be real.
For all he knew, she had made it snow even if it was sixty-five degrees outside.
Huh? Frozen?
thirty-one and had become a dojo owner.
31 yr old business owner & MMA camp acts like 16 yr old!
Enough with this shit. “I want to get to know you.”
Omg! They're still in an elevator and he says what???! Done
